Authors note: okay please go easy on me, to be honest i have never EVER written poetry in my whole entire life, give it a go and tell me if it is good or bad probably bad

so tell me what you think because if i do write more poetry they will just become chapters so it will be one story/poetry thing so yeh please tell me what you think ( don't have to review, can send private message if prefer.)

my heart burns with desire

but he left me burning with fire

the pain that had no killers

the life i had taken over

The chill that kept me waken

watching shadows in the darkness

the cold ones that owned my heart

disowned me at most ease

i watched the place they left me

and came back every day

to only burn me deeper

the poison struck my veins

The whole i dug myself

got deeper with the pain

the struggle to get out

dropping every day

life become no option

so i just walked away

faded into the background

walking like a ghost

The morning, i dreaded

the night i wanted to continue

to never wake again

to sleep in peace forever

to never feel the pain

the times i struck the bottom

the fire beneath my feet

always getting hotter

to feel my death so close

the light pulling me in

the angels voice screamed my name

and tears of sadness

fell once again

i saw the one i loved

he was begging me to live

but i gave him no such thing

the light closing my body floating

the darkness came

and left me sleeping forever.

okay as i said at the top never EVER have written poetry so it will be greatly treasured if you told me what you think

xoxoxoxo.