Authors note: okay please go easy on me, to be honest i have never EVER written poetry in my whole entire life, give it a go and tell me if it is good or bad probably bad
so tell me what you think because if i do write more poetry they will just become chapters so it will be one story/poetry thing so yeh please tell me what you think ( don't have to review, can send private message if prefer.)
my heart burns with desire
but he left me burning with fire
the pain that had no killers
the life i had taken over
The chill that kept me waken
watching shadows in the darkness
the cold ones that owned my heart
disowned me at most ease
i watched the place they left me
and came back every day
to only burn me deeper
the poison struck my veins
The whole i dug myself
got deeper with the pain
the struggle to get out
dropping every day
life become no option
so i just walked away
faded into the background
walking like a ghost
The morning, i dreaded
the night i wanted to continue
to never wake again
to sleep in peace forever
to never feel the pain
the times i struck the bottom
the fire beneath my feet
always getting hotter
to feel my death so close
the light pulling me in
the angels voice screamed my name
and tears of sadness
fell once again
i saw the one i loved
he was begging me to live
but i gave him no such thing
the light closing my body floating
the darkness came
and left me sleeping forever.
okay as i said at the top never EVER have written poetry so it will be greatly treasured if you told me what you think
xoxoxoxo.
