Hey! So I decided that I will start this weekend on the first chapter! But I'm cutting the last chapter and starting fresh and make it more up to date. What do you guys think? Can you please give me some suggestions? They will be much appreciated!

Hey! So I decided that I will start this weekend on the first chapter! But I'm cutting the last chapter and starting fresh and make it more up to date. What do you guys think? Can you please give me some suggestions? They will be much appreciated!
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