Okay was the grammar better? I hope so. I am not stephenie meyer.

Edwards pov, when Bella just asked for pajamas

I began to get nervous. " I think my mother has some.." I started to say but, she had already gone into my room.

She came back with a loose fit shirt on and a pair of my boxers. (AN I looked it up they did have these back in the day)

I nearly passed out when I seen her, it wasn't really appropriate for a woman to wear it. But maybe that is what they wear to bed where she comes from, and whatever she wanted, I would surely oblige. "Comfortable?" I asked

"mm hm very," she confirmed. "You may sleep in my room ,if you like, I will sleep on the sofa." I said. She pouted, with those cherry lips. " I don't wanna make you sleep on the sofa..." She said, grabbing my hand and pulling me into my room. " GO HOME ROB, ILL SEE YOU LATER."I yelled so he could here me. I could see Isabella forgot about him.

"Fine. Bye!" he shouted back

Isabella giggled, oh that laugh, it sounded like bells. " Isabella," I started to say but hen she interrupted me " Please, call me Bella." she requested. I cant deny her eyes, so again I did what she asked of me. "Bella, I really don't mind sleeping on the sofa."I told her. She shook her head, " I want you to sleep in here with me, I feel safer that way." She said fluttering her eyelashes.

" Anything you want." I said. "Thanks love, now sit" she patted the bed.

Needless to say I sat, because she told me to. As soon as I sat on the bed she was on my lap strata ling me, putting her hands around my neck, before I could even think of pushing her off she kissed me, my first kiss. Whoa.

I fell backward on my bed she giggled and I laughed too. A part of me said this was wrong but it couldn't be. She was on top of me,kissing me with those cherry lips. Then she went for my zipper. WHAT? WE ARNT MARRIED!

" Bella, we cant." I said. " But I want to!Please give me what I want." She

begged. " we shouldn't have even kissed I feel so guilty."

Here comes the pouty face. Crap why am I such a sucker..

"Please? Pretty please, I can make you feel all better." She asked in a seducing voice. I was right about earlier she would love to do more with me.

"okay." … I agreed lamely

( *however long it takes for her to finish business later*)

After she was done taking my virginity she said "night." And then she pecked me on the lips and snuggled into my shoulder. How could something so wrong feel right? What we had just done was so wrong, but it was right because I was a slave to her eyes, anything she wanted I would be happy to give. Id give her everything, the sun the moon the stars. She nodded off to sleep but I stayed awake. Watching her sleep in my arms was an amazing feeling, I would be satisfied to do it every moment of forever. But sadly I eventually fell asleep.

I woke up hoping last night wasn't a dream, but she was still there , in my arms, with the most trustful expression ive ever seen.

I wanted to stay in bed forever, but one of my best friends was getting married today an I was to attend as a grooms man.

"Bella, love. Please wake up." she opened her eyes and said " Hey. What's up?"

"Would you like to attend a wedding with me? I am a grooms man I have to go."

" I have nothing to wear." she said.

" lets go shopping then," I said

"I'll have to stop at the bank" she said.

" Nonsense, I will pay." I told her

" No." it cam out as an order.

" I am confused, don't girls always want men to buy them dresses?" I asked

" I do not want you to spend money on me" she says.

"Silly Bella, my father is the second wealthiest man in the city." I said proudly

" who is the first,wait I can guess, Doctor Carlisle Cullen?" she was right.

" How did you know?" I asked.

" I know him. Any way I have my own money I can use." she told me.

" I don't doubt that you do but, I'm afraid we don't have time to stop at the the bank."

"Wont your father know there is money missing?" she asked

" No, I have my own account." I told her, I really wanted to do this for her.

"Okay." she said, giving into me for once.

We arrived and at Daisicle's dress shop, and she picked out the cheapest dress.

It was a plain light pink dress. No, she was much to lovely for that.

I made her try on a deep blue dress that looked so beautiful with her skin.

She called me into the dressing room.

"It's perfect" I said and she kissed me. My knees got weak, but she still kissed me. She put her arms around my neck and I picked her up so I wouldn't have to bend. There was a knock on the door and I set her down, feeling embarrassed.

"ONE MINUTE, PLEASE" she called out

I bought the dress for her, and a surprised her with a red flower to put in her hair.

We had gotten back to my house and she used my mothers make up and curling iron. She looked so beautiful, cupids got me in a choke hold.

We walked to the church, and every man we passed bit there tongue and looked at me with pure jealousy.

WHAT DO YOU THINK? SHOULD I CONTINUE IN EDWARDS POINT OF VIEW? Review PLEASE