Author's Note:
For any who really care, I have gone back and edited a few things in the previous chapters. In stead of the English version of the jutsus, I now have Japanese. I have also fixed a couple grammar (what I could find) and fixed those, as well as polish a few things here and there by added/subtracting words. I should be a little easier to follow.
And one more thing. I REALLY need ideas for other Naruto characters you want to see in this. I've figured about two or three right now. I need at least three or four more.
P.S. Sorry for raising your hopes about thinking the next chappie is uploaded. It's not. runs and hides under bed I am a little over half way done, so BE PATIENT.
Later
Sabrepaw
