CHAPTER TWO/ Tentacles

In my version TWO people fall victoms to the tentacles.

Billy was in shock, and was shucking his thumb for self comfort. David into the back room. To check on the genitor. Suddenly he saw what looked as if some huge, was pressing again the back door. Freaking out David ran out of there. He banged into Norm, Olli, Jim and Myon, and that guy with the Mohawk that was taking a dump joining the arrival of the spooky mist, the Mohawk guy always appears skinny and without a shirt on, for some reason. The bunch of them investigated the back room. Ignoring David's constant warnings. Norm volunteered to look outside. The other three, except David and Ollie, agreed and encouraged him to go with his plan. "You going to let this kid die over something that doesn't even matter" David said. "Would you just shut the f*** up" Norm said angrily. "Hey calm down" Ollie said, seeming to be on David's side. "Fine, I'll do it" Jim insisted. "No, it dosen't matter who dose it" David started. "What do not think I'm good enouth" Jim asked. "Hey, I want to do it was my idea" Norm said. "If you go out there, something will come it" David said. "Like what?" Jim asked. "Like whatever was making that noise" David said. "Your just scared" Mylon said. "Plus might be drugged up. You should really watch what you put in you, boy" The Mohawk guy said, even though he himself was opening a bag of crack.

They made up there minds, they began using Norms plan. "So, any boogeyman?" Mylon asked obviously mocking. Him, Norm, and Jim laughed. But suddenly Norms leg was grabbed by giant tentacle. "OH F***! GET THIS FRIGGIN THING OFF ME!" Norm screamed. "BOOGEYMAN!" Mylon screamed.

In the movie David fights with all his might, for Norms life. And in the end couldn't help Norm. And watched in horror as the poor kid was dragged away, with a horrible scream, and the sounds of being eaten. But here's what happens in mine.

David grabbed Norm. While the tentacle where grabbing him. They were tearing flesh off him, with some form of mouths. "There's more" Norm said sacredly. And sure enouth David saw dozens of more tentacles coming out. "David chickened out. "See ya" David said, and releashed Norm's hands, leaving him to his fate. "WHAT!" Norm screamed in disbelief. Before being dragged away by the creature. And slowly vanished into the mist, with a horrorible scream before it sounded like he was eaten.

David and the Mohawk guy ran to the genitor. "Closs the door for me" David told the guy. But suddenly the Mohawk guy was grabbed by one super large tentacle that grabbed his leg. Nobody made single effert to help him. And would simply watch as the guy was being violently shaken all around the room, humped again a wall. And quickly dragged to the distance. Ending with the same horrible sound effects, as the way Norm finally died.

"Fine, I'll do it myself" David said with annoyance. And closed the door. The door closed. And Ollie managed to cut off a tentacle piece with fire axe.

The danger was over. The rest of them started leaving. "Don't say anything to nobody… Not yet" David said.

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