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"Jace!" Jace turned around to face a clearly excited to see her ex. Jace clenched her hands and faked a smile. "Hey, Karly." She gritted through her teeth while hugging her long forgotten slutty ex. "Jace what are you doing in Cali? You moved to Texas! Are you back? O, i missed you!" Karly was jumping up and down holding Jace's clenched hands. "Actually Karly, I'm fixing to go back to Texas tomorrow." Jace couldn't go back, not until she finished the job she had been sent hear to do. she just had to come up with an excuse to not have to see her ever mistaken ex girlfriend. Karly stoped jumping and clearly looked upset. "well before you go you going to the pink bunny with me!" "Pink what? what the fuck, no i cant, wait what is it?" Karly giggled "well its just the newest and hottest lesbian club in all of Cali!" "um... i cant. iv got allot to do, pack, shower, ya'know the normal 'im leaving' stuff." Jace started to hurry off but Karly caught the sleeve of Jace's black leather jacket. "O, silly you where always busy and leaving me! i haven't seen you in months! your coming! it'll be fun!" 'she was always the type that cant take a hent." Jace thought. she opened her mouth to protest but before she could say anything Karly pressed her pointer finger to Jace's lips and pulled her down a buisy Hollywood side walk. Jace thought to her self 'well maybe just a few drinks wont be so bad, but then again with Karly, its never JUST a few drinks...'

"So baby! Why are you in Cali? Jace clenched her 'fruity tuity' what karly called it, and looked around the pink feathery club wondering of a good excuse to just appear in out of no where in her home town. "just, ahhh...work?" to jace it sounded more like a question but she thought stupid blond karly would never figure. "aw baby. you work to hard!" Karly was way to close for comfort for jace but she just clenched he jaw and kept a hollow look on her face trying not to let karly control her. "how about i take to somewhere just me and you... ya'know, to.. relax." karly breathed in the crook of jace's neck. she giggled like a little school girl and waved over two other very sexy looking sluts who startid to pull jace to the back of the club. Jace tried to resist, she couldn't get distracted from the job to be done. she couldn't, there would be a price to pay if she where to fail. jace ripped her arms away from the sluts and starred at the floor. "no, karly. not anymore." jace looked up and karly had that pouty face on that was just so cute to jace. Karly knew exactly how to get what she wantid from jace. Jace clenched her jaw and looked down at her scuffed up convers. Like on cue karly and her two slutty wingman started to feel on jace. Karly clung to jaces neck and ran her hand from Jace's ear to collar bone, a wave of excitement flashed through Jace. No she couldn't. But, one night. No. Karly will not hurt her agin. shes just a whore. she dose this every night. right? Jace's mind was over ran by a tug of war. The lesbian in Jace wanted to o so bad. But the slayer in her, knew the job. To exterminate the vampire prince and his clan, and if she faild, the slayer society would have her head. She couldent. Jace sighed and pushed her way through the crowed and out to the street. Karly's jaw dropped and she made a "hummph" sound.

Jace ran to the side of the building and up the fire escape to the roof and ran. For a girl jace was really tall, like 6 foot tall, and very fit.. Probly from being raised as the first and only girl slayer. she reached around and pressed on her backpack. Good, she haddent lost her stake. Most slayers carry a whole set of vampire killing tools. but not jace. to her the crosses and holy water was nonsense. all she needed was her stake. The stake her father passed down to her, the same stake he was brutally killed with buy a vampire. jace ran back to her hotel and jumped down the fire escape and walked through the lobby to the elevators. she pressed the button for floor 13 and leaned against the wall. she wasn't entirely shure why she had sprinted all the way hear from the lesbian she was just scared , Hollywood is her home town, but when she agreed to this job she never thought of the ods of running into someone she used to know. like karly, she used to be a nice girl, but before jace was forced to move away to Texas for another slayer job, karly's true slutty colors shined through, and it broke Jace's heart. She'd never admit it, she had to keep her tuff girl appearance. but it did. after three years loveing somone it hurts to find out Karly never completely loved her back. Jace swiped the key to her room and jumped over her suit case landing on the bed, where she kicked out of her jeans and passed out halfway dressed.