Chapter 2 Naruto: Tobikomu Kitsune
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Summary: The Yondaime was a Fuuinjutsu master, but he was only human. An unintended gap in the Shiki Fuuin left the village at risk, but… The Kyuubi isn't taking advantage of it? Kushina's alive? Good!Kyuubi, Alive!Kushina, Smart!Powerful!Naruto!
Key;
"Vegeta, what does…" Normal speaking
'The scouter say…' Thoughts/ flashbacks
"About his power level?" Demonic speech
'IT'S OVER 9000!' Demonic thoughts
Jutsu names
AN: Fixed my page breaks! YAY ME!
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"Naru-kun! Time for school!"
Naruto rubbed his eyes and moaned,"Aww ma, 5 more minutes!"
"No, you are going to be late if you don't get up right NOW!" Kushina countered.
"Fine…" The 13 year old ninja rolled out of bed and got dressed. (Think his outfit during Shippuden) He left for school in a Shunshin. He sat down in his customary seat next to Sasuke, as per their secret pact. Naruto would protect him from fan-girls the best he could, and in return he would try to be less emo. They were good friends, mainly because Naruto couldn't stand to see anyone so sad.
"I'm first!" Two voices chorused, and then an argument began.
"No way Ino-Pig! I beat you by an inch!"
"Uh-uh! I got here first Forehead, so I get so sit next to Sasuke-kun!"
"No, I get to!"
"I get to!"
"Well, there's Sakura and Ino… May Kami have mercy on me." Naruto muttered as the fight devolved into a slap happy war. Sakura marched over to Naruto and asked in a sickly-sweet voice,
"Naruto, can you move so I can sit next so Sasuke-kun?"
"Sigh, What was my answer yesterday?"
"No…" Sakura replied, crestfallen.
"So what do you think my answer today is?" Sakura sighed and sat down next to him. 'Kaa-chan's idea worked. Now, everyone thinks of me as the dead-last dobe. Whoever I get teamed with is in for a rude awakening, Hehe…'
"Alright class! Now, it's time for your Genin Exam!" Iruka piped cheerfully.
As the test came around, Naruto sighed. 'This is our Genin Exam? Our test to become Ninja, and give us permission to risk our life? Bullshit. This is way too easy so I'm guessing there's a secondary test or something. Nah… I'm getting paranoid.'
"Don't get too cocky Naruto. Being a Ninja-"
'Yeah yeah, I know,' Naruto cut the Kyuubi off hastily, 'Is serious business.'
"Actually, I meant to say that paranoia is part of the job description."
'Fine, fine. You LOOVE to have the last word.' Naruto finished his test and went inside his mindscape to train.
An hour later, (AN: Whaat? You thought I was going to let you see his skills this early? You're going to have to wait for the Bell Test and Wave like his team will! :P) Iruka announced,
"Alright! Now, perform one of the academy jutsu and you pass!"
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Naruto walked into the other room and saw Iruka and Mizuki sitting there smiling. However Naruto sensed something off about Mizuki.
"Alright Naruto, just perform the Bunshin and you pass." Mizuki said, a little tense.
'He's up to something… I'm going to make myself fail, see what he's playing at.' " BUNSHIN NO JUTSU!" Naruto exclaimed, overloading the jutsu. When the smoke cleared, he was standing next to a wooden, battered, and broken version of himself.
"I'm sorry Naruto, but you fail." Mizuki began arguing in his defense.
(AN: You should know what happens from here. Mizuki convinces Naruto to steal the scroll, ect. ect. If you don't, and you're reading this, that's sad. Continuing from the point where Mizuki arrives in the forest and he tells Naruto about the Kyuubi…)
"YOU ARE THE KYUUBI NO YOKO! NOW DIE!" He threw the giant shuriken at them. And then it broke into pieces. Naruto appeared behind Mizuki.
"Actually, you are wrong there. I have all the power and intelligence of the Kyuubi, but no, I am far more powerful than him. Now… for revealing an S-class secret… The punishment is death!"
"Hah! You, a no talent loser like you thinks they can hurt me?" Mizuki boasted.
'Wait… wasn't he calling me you Kyuubi? … According to him, I am the Kyuubi no Yoko, the strongest of the Biju, a loser? He's a little touched in the head…'
"I'm insulted."
Naruto promptly shoved a Rasengan into his groin. His shriek of terror was heard all the way in Oto.
-In Otogakure-
"What was that, Dosu?"
"I'm not sure Orochimaru-sama. Probably some idiot screaming his head off."
"Oh. Ok then."
(DIE MIZUKI DIE! !)
AN: I had to torture Mizuki, he is just the biggest ^$%#$) in the series. And yes, Naruto knows the Rasengan. Sorry about the wait, state testing has been going on, so that's stressful.
Tell me, should I,
Keep his team the same in canon?
Replace Sakura with Hinata?
Put him on team 8?
Feedback is appreciated!
R&R!
