Ok so I got a few reviews from Dino64, and I know what you mean,but if you've seen the woman in black Arthur is still under depression. So sorry if I had to kill her out but so far if I need this story catchy it has to sound catchy, but if you've seen it you might understand and thank you for your constructive criticism. I don't mind that. It did hurt a little, but I understand. I'll try to make it a happy ending.
If you want,I could have them reunited.
Anyways sorry about that.
Enjoy!
Once Victor and Samuel arrived in his office, Samuel closed the door behind him, and locked it.
"Victor,"he began,"do you believe in ghosts?"
"Sort of,"-said Victor.
"Well,you might not believe me when I tell you this,but many years ago there was a woman that lived in the Eel Marsh house. She had a son,his name was Nathaniel. One day,when Nathaniel was only ten,he died in a carriage accident. All because of her husband,he never save the boy and that's why she committed suicide in the end. She kills children in the village because she misses her son and wants him back,"-said Samuel.
"Oh no,"-Victor thought.
"What is it my boy?,"-asked Samuel curiously.
"I saw her in my dreams, I made a deal with her. I promised her that she would give me back Elsa, if I helped Arthur Kipps find her son,"-confessed Victor.
Samuel was shocked. Not a single word came out of his mouth.
"Samuel,"Victor began,"what's wrong?"
"Victor,"he began,"if someone sees her in real or in a dream,that means that a child would die."
The two of them were completely shocked, but then the silence stopped.
"AAAAHHHHHH!"
The two of them jumped to their feet, and ran outside. They saw a little boy dead in his mothers arms.
"My baby!,"-she shouted.
Victor saw blood coming from the little boys head. Apparently, he fell from the carriage and hit his head really hard. But then he saw her,again. She was standing right next to the carriage and disappeared.
Victor had enough. He needed to get to the house. He started to run, when he bumped into a tall man.
"Sorry sir,"-apologized Victor.
"It's alright,"-said the man.
"Im Victor,and this is my dog Sparky and the other dog is Persephone,"-said Victor.
The man stared at Sparky for a while and began to introduce himself.
"Nice to meet you Victor. I've heard so much about you from Samuel. I'm Arthur Kipps,"-he said.
Yeah,so for right mow,I'll just leave it as a cliff hanger. I need to start working on my Phantom vs. Slender man story.
Dont forget to vote and see which other monster, or ghost will I have Danny fight against?
R&R, but please no bad flames. Constructive criticism is accepted.
till next time!
