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Chapter 3: Welcoming Disaster.
I was excited to know that I had a Welcoming Party from all the people in town, it's just strange and makes me nervous that they would do something so kind towards a stranger such as myself. I closed the door behind me and walked up the stairs to my room and opened the closet, I was looking through it and found a pair of Velvet leggings, a black tank-top that had a velvet cupcake in the middle that said I am yummy.
I took the clothes and went to the bathroom placing the clothes on-top toilet cap. I took off my clothes and went over to get in the shower till I caught myself in the mirror. I have big ruby red eyes, Hour glass curves and not so big hip, my face looked like a doll with my little heart shaped pink nose, I have nice thighs and my long skinny legs that looked like a models, my stomach was flat and my breast were C-cup ones and my fur is red, it felt silky and smooth, my hands are gentle and my hair was spiky and ruby red colored, having some dandruff flakes on my hair but it didn't look bad.
When I looked at my features, I felt pretty for the first time..But then again who would want to be with a scary cat dandruff porcupine like me? I sighed and stepped into the shower. I took a nice cold shower and put some liquid soap for my fur that covered all my body,(yes all the characters in this story are furries and I love the thought of it cause it suits them though) the soap was for my fur to be soft and shinny, cleaned my face and quills and turn the water off. I walked out of the shower and dried myself.
When I did I put on my underwear and bra, then, I pulled the pants on aswell as the shirt, though Underneath the shirt, I had a long sleeve T-shirt on. i puted on red socks and black converse, I then put bracelets and necklaces on me and a black belt around my hips. I brushed my quills and it looked like I had bangs on my forehead, when I finished I put alittle bit of eyeliner on my eyes, I then looked at myself and smiled.
I walked away from the bathroom and went down stairs to the kitchen to eat a green apple, when I did I walked to the living room and jumped on my blue couch, got the remote control and turn on the TV and started to watch vh1 ( lol what? im bored). I looked at the clock and it was 5:41pm, it wasn't late so I kept watching and waiting for giggles to come...When I was about to look at the clock again my door was knocked, I then knew that it was Giggles, I turn off the TV and threw the rest of my green apple in the garbage can, I rushed to open the door and there was Giggles holding hands with Cuddles, I smiled nervously.
Giggles P.O.V
Omg...flaky looked so cool! I mean like she looks so pretty and all. Maybe she might find a BF today!~..i was wearing a pink sparkly dress with some red high heels and a big bow on my pink cute hair, some silver bracelets 3 in each hand and silver earings. While flaky looked like those girls that I looked on photobucket ( lol WTF) she looked professional in some way. I then said " well let's get going to the party" with that I turn around clinging on Cuddles arm as he kissed the top of my head, walking away from Flaky's door way, Flaky quickly locked the door and started to follow us.
Normal P.O.V (flaky)
I walked down the street following close behind Giggles and Cuddles that were so clingy to eachother, I wasn't paying much attention to the direction we were going, I was just looking down when following close behind their feet, then all of a sudden they stopped and so did I and noticed that we were already infront of the place, it was a restaurant. We walked in and saw many people that I have meet around town, I saw Petunia, Handy, Russell, Splendid, The Mole, Mime, Pops with Cub, Disco Bear, Sniffles, Nutty, Lammy, Truffles, Lumpy, Toothy, Cro-Marmont, Giggles and Cuddles ( i know i skipped Flippy but keep reading!). When I blinked and everyone turn to look at me, they all screamed " Welcome to happy tree town!" with a joy in their voices, I smiled and said thank you.. I was talking to Petunia and Handy when some guys were staring at me with weird faces, I kinda felt nervous but ignored and kept talking..
When it was a considerable amount of time, everyone slowly began to walk out of the café and outside, we all exchanged alittle conversation here and there till they all began to go their separate ways and into their own homes. I then realized that I was alone to go back home. I was just scared, it was dark, I cautiously looked around when walking down the sidewalk; nervously looking behind me and to the sides.
Slowly I began to walk beside a large hedge bush which covered me with its shadow. All of a sudden, I felt a hand on my shoulder, I screamed till it pulled me through the bush and I fell to my side, I quickly began to kick and try to get on my back; when my fearful and frantic eyes began to search, it came to stop on a male figure infront of me; I was scared but then he came out of the shadows to expose himself to me.
"Yoh baby, what's with the screams, I ain't scary" He said in his deep radio like voice, I sighed harshly but was still tensed and scared.
"Wha-what do you want?" I asked him, but he just looked at me with a weird face, I didn't know what he was thinking nor could I put a finger on it; He then wiggled his eyebrows and went on to hover over me, My pupils began to thin out.
"Well, now that you ask babycakes, I wanna taste what you got" He said when winking at me, as soon as I heard those words, I quickly spun around and began to crawl away, though he gripped my heel and pulled me back underneath him, I went to scream but he placed his hand onto my mouth. I began to hyperventilate.
"Yoh girl, I wouldn't dare ran off, ya know, I got a lot to offer, let me give you some sugar" He said when he went over to ran his hand underneath my shirt, I struggled fiercely but he went on to slap my face with the hand that was covering my mouth.
"You keep moving baby, I will make sure it gets hotter" He said when biting my shoulder. I began to cry, tears running down my cheeks at the horror that has began to happen. NO NO NO NOOOO! I DON'T WANT MY FIRST TIME TO BE LIKE THIS, I REFUSE, HOW CAN I LIVE WITH MYSELF AFTER THIS!. I sobbed under him but then I felt that the touching began seased, I was scared to even open my eyes but I slowly did, only to find that something hit my face, something gooey, I lifted my hand up to touch where it was and looked at my fur, that got only even darker, I widen my eyes and there was another splatter. I tilted my head up to only see someone hovering over me with the dead body of DB in his hands, only to drop it and let a puddle of blood run beneath the corpse.
I was about to scream out loud but nothing came out.
To be continued
This is a edit of this chapter that I made, I will eventually keep editing all the rest of the chapters, Sorry if I am being so slow.
