AN: General consensus for how I release updates seems to either be "I don't care," or to continue doing it as I finish them. Surprised as I thought you guys would like to not have to wait as long as I take to update but that's fine with me.

No complaints about how I described Gabriel which is always good, but there are quite a few of you wanting Grayfia to be included in the harem. I'm not too sure as I do kinda like Sirzechs but I can see how Grayfia would be pretty helpful to Naruto and where the attraction would be. I shall think on this, though if I get like a huge amount of people wanting it then I'll do it as I do have an idea of how it could work. Review and pm people!

Got a comment about how Sirzechs being stronger than the other three Satan and that is correct but Kakashi is also an above average Jounin, Konoha's strongest at that. Kakashi wouldn't be able to win but could give Sirzechs a bit of a challenge.

Just to clarify some things here are the girls that are FOR SURE in the harem

Kyuubi/Kurama

Kushina

Anko

Fem. Sasuke/Sayuri

Rias

Akeno

Koneko

Kuroka

Ophis

Gabriel

Serafall

Xenovia, Raynare, and Irina are still on the fence though I think Xenovia is leaning more towards a yes than a no. I don't want the harem to get overly huge and unmanageable for me and that limit is fast approaching. May have to cap it with one, maybe two more girls.

Show time!


As the sun's bright rays began to peak over the horizon and shed its warming light on the world we find a certain red haired individual sitting in the lotus position, seated amongst the flowers and trees that made up the grove that lay deep inside the park. As the sun's light illuminated the once dark grove one could see that the flowers and trees in the grove seemed to glow with a barely seen golden hue. Even the grass had a tint of gold to its deep green color. The animals that flittered in and out of the grove also seemed to be at peace as the birds sang a tune of calm and beauty that showed this tranquility. The normally skittish squirrels could be found seated on the branches of trees and, along with the raccoons and other little critters that called the grove home, almost looked to be meditating in sync with the crimson haired teen.

With each inhale of crisp cool morning air that the meditating teen took, the animals mimicked him. And they did likewise when he softly exhaled. Even when a group of girls wandered into the grove, wide-eyed and awe struck at the beautiful scene before them, this tranquility continued on uninterrupted. The girls could literally feel the soft and rhythmic thrumming of the earth underneath their feet, as it was attempting to mimic the heartbeat of the meditating Uzumaki.

Inhale.

Exhale.

They watched as the pattern continued and took in the beauty that so few had ever laid eyes on. The small silver haired Neko, Koneko, could only smile a true smile, seeing the peace and beauty that senjutsu could bring. Even the normally expressionless Ophis was smiling and taking in the sight before her as, even in her long life, she had never seen someone so connected to nature that the very trees and grass seemed to bow to them. She had seen people command animals and such yes but never had she seen Nature give it and its children so willingly to someone.

Inhale.

Exhale.

Even Gabriel gazed lovingly at the scene before her. Heaven was indeed a beautiful place deserving of all its praises and songs but what she had just seen was just slightly better than what heaven could ever offer. She had felt nothing but love, peace, joy, and warmth from everything present in the grove. For a moment she had felt the warmth and aura that the true God had once brought to heaven, and realized that it was as if he was approving of her decision to pursue the crimson haired Transcendant.

Inhale.

Exhale.

Even Anko, Kushina, and Sayuri were shocked at what they saw in front of them. Sayuri had experienced first-hand the strength that Senjutsu could offer, and were it not for Shizune helping to heal her, she was sure that she would still have the bruises to show for it. To see the same power that had destroyed a chunk of Hi no Kuni (Land of Fire) create such a scene as the one before her was shocking.

Inhale.

Exhale

The three had all heard that Naruto was a perfect sage but had no idea what that truly meant as the only other perfect sage to have ever walked their lands was the Rikudou Sennin. And it was through this scene that they realized what it really meant to be at one with Nature.

Inhale.

Exhale.

Kurama could only smile at the sight. She may have been young when she had first seen it but she could still vaguely recall her father Hagaromo, the Rikudou, meditating in a similar fashion and seeing Naruto do it brought those memories bubbling up. It reminded her of how similar Naruto was to the Sage, and why he had been capable of all that he had been able to do. It also reminded her why she had fallen for the once blonde teen.

Inhale.

Exhale.

And with that final breath Naruto slowly opened his eyes, allowing the girls a glimpse of something that made them weak in their knees, especially Kurama. For just the slightest second as Naruto held onto the Senjutsu flowing through him his eyes glowed a royal purple with flecks of crimson dotted throughout. As they each caught his gaze they felt a surge of warmth and peace flow through their bodies.

As Naruto rose from his position in a single fluid motion the golden glow the girls had thought came from the sun dissipated and the animals let loose one final exhale, the earth letting loose what felt like one final hum as if it was deeply satisfied.

The foxy grin Naruto was known for made its way onto his face as he called out, "And what can I do for all of you?"

Koneko was the first to come out of their stupor and she rushed Naruto, wrapping her arms around Naruto's torso. Naruto only smiled at the Nekoshou and patted her head.

Sayuri was the first to speak after that, "The Angel told us about what you and her talked about dobe."

Naruto only sweatdropped at her nickname for him, "After all these years and me handing you your ass on a silver platter you refuse to call me anything but dobe huh….teme-chan?"

Sayuri scoffed at him, a light red dusting her normally porcelain cheeks, "Fine whatever…dobe-kun."

Anko was of course busting a gut at the interaction and when Naruto gave her a curious glance she managed to chuckle out, "The Uchiha is a fucking tsundere!"

She was then sent to the floor courtesy of Sayuri plating her fist on the purplette's skull.

"Shut up you snake bitch!"

"Oi fuck you Uchiha! At least I can admit that I want gaki's third leg unlike you!"

At that everyone present blushed. Naruto surprisingly wasn't one of them, having hung out with Anko so much that her vulgarity went over his head.

Kurama was blushing as living inside him for so long she knew how much truth was in that sentence.

What shocked everyone was the sudden cry of, "Nya!" that came from one Koneko. Everyone was wide-eyed as they had never heard or seen her react to anything like that. Of course they were curious as to what it was that had caused her to react like that, especially seeing the dark blush on her face.

What they didn't know was that Koneko had let her curiosity get the better of her and had began discreetly feeling up her senjutsu sensei and boy was she shocked at what she felt.

"Yes well that aside Gabriel did tell us what you talked about. Why you've been distant and why you've been having those bouts of sadness," Mei said as she sashayed her way to Naruto.

As she wrapped her arms around the slightly taller teen she smiled and pecked him on the cheek, "And we all have to say that you're silly Naruto-kun."

Kurama smiled and nodded, "Thanks to Gabriel we also know how to fix the problem, and since you offered to help Rias with her problem we figured that all of us heading to the underworld together would let us kill multiple birds at the same time."

"I don't have any say in this do I?" Naruto said as he shook his head.

Anko jumped onto Naruto's back, wrapping her legs around his waist and her arms around his neck, "Nope! Now off to the underworld my hunky stead!"


"I kinda thought that the Underworld would be more…I don't know…flames and screams of agony," Sayuri said with an arched eyebrow.

"There's honestly very little difference between us and humans ya know," Rias said haughtily.

"Yea cause you see humans sprout wings and fire energy from their hands everyday," Mei chimed in.

"We're not exactly one's to talk Mei-chan. I mean you can spew lava from your mouth and we consider walking on water normal," Naruto said grinning.

"Ara ara, Uzumaki-kun is right. You shinobi are closer to being non-human than you are to being human," Akeno said with her smile present as usual.

"The sadist is right. Considering that Naruto is a demi-god in a sense and that kekkai genkai are actually genetic mutations brought on by demonic influence in some cases, you all aren't that human to begin with," Kurama said adding her own two cents to the conversation.

"Yea I mean…woah wait a minute demi-god?" Naruto said wide-eyed. He knew he wasn't exactly normal but demi-god was a bit much.

"I thought you knew? I mean being that your ancestor the Rikudou is actually the by-product of a human woman eating part of a god, a primordial god at that, means you were never fully human and having me sealed into you at birth didn't exactly help that."

"I know that the Rikudou was the reason the Shinju had turned itself into the Juubi but never found out why."

"Well from what he told us Bijuu, his mother had eaten a fruit from the Shinju giving her powers akin to what you call chakra and so she was able to calm the wars that were happening. However she hadn't known that she was pregnant and so she was only given a portion of the fruit's powers. The rest of the powers manifested themselves in the child in the form of the Rinnenigen, and chakra coils. The Shinju had sensed that someone had taken some of its powers and so became angry and sought to reclaim those powers and turned itself into the monstrous Juubi to do so."

"Ok so the Rikudou is himself a demi-god then right? Half human and half god," Sayuri spoke up, highly interested in the story. After all she was also technically a descendant of the Sage as well.

"Exactly," Kurama said nodding her ascent.

"Then that means that to some extent the Uzumaki, Uchiha, and Senju have the blood of a god flowing through them," Kushina said finally speaking up. She had read bits and pieces of the tale from what she had scavenged from the remains of Uzu but Kurama was basically a first-hand source.

"Yes and no. They did not get the blood of the Shinju but rather the energy it had. That energy manifested itself in the form of their unique bloodlines. The Uchiha got the eyes of a God, the Sharingan, the Senju got the body of a god, longevity and durability, and the Uzumaki got the blood of a god, mutation and adaptability."

"Ok so that all makes sense and is great but how exactly does that make me a demi-god and not Kushina or Sayuri? They're both also descendants of the Sage and Kushina also housed you at one time as well," Naruto questioned.

"Yes but they've been diluted by generations of human energy and Kushina's seal only allowed for the barest minimum of my energy to be made available to her AFTER her's had already begun maturing. You would have also been like them but having me sealed into you at birth, me being a pretty large chunk of the Shinju, and having my energy siphoned into you thanks to the seal meant that you had almost as much of the Shinju's energy as the Rikudou himself did. You using Senjutsu only boosted that and well here you are," Kurama finished.

"Hmm that would explain why his bloodline is so much stronger than any pure-blooded Uzumaki's ever was. Sure they lived long lives but even Mito showed signs of aging eventually. He was closer to the source of our kekkai genkai so it was purer," Kushina pondered.

The four then turned to look back at the rest of the group to see Anko holding her head complaining about a headache, Koneko munching on pocky, Gabriel stargazing, and Mei, Akeno, and Rias comparing bust sizes.

Maybe it was for the best that they had all turned away. Too many complicated subjects to understand in one sitting.

"Oh you're all done? Then let's get going to my family's home," Rias said, taking the lead along with Akeno. "By the way Naruto-kun have you thought about how you're going to handle the...uh...problem?"

Naruto could immediately see the nervousness she had. Not because he could sense it but because it was clearly written all over her beautiful face. Her normally straight face now held slight crinkles of worry and her eyes would shift every so often as if speaking about it aloud would make it come true.

Placing a hand on her shoulder and squeezing slightly he said, "Don't worry Rias. I promised you that I would help you and I've never once broken a promise."

"Tch, dobe's right. Though I think he's taking the 'to hell and back' part of it too literally if you ask me," the porcelain Uchiha said.

She quirked an eyebrow as she noticed that everyone had stopped moving and were openly gawking at her for some odd reason. Even the Gremory group were doing so despite barely knowing her.

"What? Why are you all staring at me like a bunch of idiots?"

"Sorry but did you just tell a joke Sayuri?"

"I have a sense of humor too you assholes!" Sayuri yelled indignantly.

Naruto just patted her on the head, "Sure ya do Sayuri, sure ya do."

"Fuck you baka."

"You wound me with your words teme!" Naruto said, purposefully being over dramatic by clutching his chest in "pain".

"You've survived my Chidori once, I'm sure you can survive it again," Sayuri said, a tick mark pulsing on her forehead as she called the lightning jutsu to her.

Naruto just wrapped her hand in his bigger one, extinguishing the assassination jutsu at the same time, then wrapped his arm around her, bringing the now blushing Uchiha into his side, "Come on teme don't be like that! 'sides we both know I can still kick your butt around like nothing."

Naruto soon found himself embedded in the ground.

Sayuri turned a heated look towards the Gremory heiress, "Make me a devil NOW. Dobe is getting his ass handed to him!"

Rias then pointed a finger to her right showing that they had already arrived at the Gremory home…well mansion seemed a more fitting term.

The main building itself was a huge construct of obsidian stone, in a similar style to the castles of the European Victorian era with its sharp points and various bastions sticking out from the main building itself. A gate of black metal stood as the only entrance way as a wall of similarly colored stone several tens of feet high and several feet thick wrapped around the castle itself. At intervals of a hundred feet or so jutted small lookout towers that would have served as good points for surveillance and such. Overall the Gremory house looked like a well fortified place meant for a small village rather than for one family.

"Ara ara Buchou I just remembered that we didn't tell Kiba where we were going or tell Iseei what he was," Akeno spoke up.

"Kiba will figure it out and Iseei…we have more pressing matters to attend to," Rias said dismissively.


Earth

"WHY ARE THERE WINGS COMING FROM MY BACK! OH NO NOW HOW WILL I GET A HAREM OF MAGNIFICENT OPPAI!?" cried a certain pervert.

(In the Occult Research Building)

"Buchou?...Akeno…Koneko?...where'd everyone go?" a blonde bishounen wondered.


Underworld

"Now I have to warn you about my brother he can be…well…kind of-" was as far Rais got before everyone heard the yell of, "RIAS-TAN!" followed by a speeding crimson flash almost eerily similar to Naruto's Hiraishin.

Said blur slammed into Rias who was then lifted off her feet and smothered into the chest of a man who bore striking crimson hair similar to Rias.

Rias would have continued to be smothered by her overbearing brother were it not for someone pulling him off her and putting his face into the ground.

"That is not very fitting of a Satan Sirzechs-sama."

When Naruto turned to see who had spoken he saw before him a woman around the age of the now named Sirzechs. She stood only a few inches shy of Naruto's impressive height and was garbed in an almost frilly maid outfit. Her silver hair was pulled into two braids that fell to her impressive bust, ending with two small ribbons. The rest of her hair that fell to her back was also split into two sections. She wore a small amount of red lipstick that contrasted with her rather pale skin color and drew attention to her silver colored eyes.

What Naruto noticed though was that despite her rather frail look, her muscles and aura spoke of a well of power raging just beneath the surface. It also showed that despite what her looks might say she was a force to be reckoned with in her own right. If he had to guess both her and Sayuri would be on about the same power level, though the female devil might win out due to experience.

When he saw the two interact the first thought that came to mind was how similar they were to how Jiraiya and Tsunade were with each other. Hopefully this woman wasn't as terrible a drunk and an even worse gambler.

"It is good to have you home Rias," the silver haired woman said in a straight voice whilst bowing.

Ok seriously what is up with women here and lack of emotions!? Is it something in the water!? Naruto pondered, all the while keeping a straight face on the outside.

"Thank you Grayfia. Everybody this is Grayfia Lucifuge, one of my family's maids. And the idiot on the floor is my older brother Sirzechs," Rias said, waving dismissively at the mention of her brother.

Naruto quirked an eyebrow when the elder red-head disappeared only to reappear seconds later crouched, poking at the ground, and a mini raincloud hovering over his head.

"Rias-tan why must you be so mean to your Nii-san?"

So the guys got a sister-complex….meh. Not like I can judge. My own birth mother wants to jump my bones, and at that exact moment he felt a pair of eyes undressing him hungrily. He turned to find that it was actually several pairs of eyes doing so. How do I get myself involved with this shit?

"May I ask who your guests are?" Grayfia said in the same monotone voice.

Dear god her and Ophis are gonna get along so well, Naruto thought.

"Oh right well if we may save it for my mother and ather as well? It would be tedious to have to repeat it all."

"Right this way then," Grayfia said as she led the group through the gates to the mansion, all the while dragging Sirzechs by the ear.

Upon seeing her father and mother Rias immidaetly ran and hugged both tightly. It had been awhile since she had last actually seen them face to face and despite her being a "big girl" she did still have emotions and so of course had missed her parents.

Naruto stared with a small smile on his face at seeing the happy reunion of parent and child. Kushina smiled longingly but had to shake her head as she knew that she may never have that same bond with Naruto. She could still love him yes but he would never see her as his mother.

Though many would have missed it a flash of sadness crossed Sayuri's face as she remembered her own mother and father. Fugaku may have been an arrogant ass but that didn't mean he had been any less of a father to her. Contrary to popular belief he had not driven her or Itachi to become prodigies and consequently driven Itachi "insane". Itachi was really a natural prodigy and she had enjoyed her childhood playing with her cousins and other relatives. Her mother had been a wonderful woman who Sayuri still idolized to this day. It pained her to know that she would never be able to see them again, especially if she went through with becoming a devil. But she also knew that her mother would be mad at her for not taking the opportunity to find love and Fugaku would mad that she had missed such an opportunity to grow stronger and experience more life.

Mei was also reminiscing about her mother and father. It may have saddened her that they had died at the hands of Yagura's blood purists but she knew that they had given their lives so she could live hers and she would never spit on that sacrifice by brooding about their deaths. She knew that her parents would have loved Naruto and his cheery disposition. She sure did.

Anko was having similar thoughts to Naruto as she herself had been an orphan thanks to the Second Shinobi World War taking her parents. They had both been nin sent to the front lines and she had only been a small child at the time of their death so she didn't have many memories of them, only pictures to remember them by.

Both Kurama and Ophis watched in silence neither feeling much of anything. Yes it was a happy sight but neither had much of anything to compare it too. Ophis had been born out of the Dimensional Gap and the closest thing Kurama had to a father was the Rikudou and he had been all but almost dead when he had given "birth" to her and her siblings.

"So who are your friends Rias?" Her father said.

"Well first, guys these are my parents. Venelena Gremory, my mother, and my father Lord Gremory (What the fuck is his name!? I could not find it anywhere!)."

Naruto noted that like him, once upon a time at least, Rias had inherited her father's hair color but had her mother's facial features and attitude. Odd how that seemed to be the case quite often.

"The red-head is Kushina Uzumaki, the kitsune is Kurama-"

"Kurama as in the Kyuubi Kurama!?" a shocked Lord Gremory and Sirzechs yelled. Even Grayfia was shocked as her eyes had widened at the mention of the name.

"Mou you guys took away my chance at an awesome intro!" Kurama childishly pouted. Everyone just sweatdropped at one of the most powerful beings to exist being so childish.

"…right, well like I was saying, the purple haired one is Anko Mitarashi, the black haired one with an attitude problem is Sayuri Uchiha," Sayuri glared at the busty red-head at that comment, "and the woman with auburn hair is Mei Terumi."

"And are they all now a part of your peerage?" Venelena questioned.

"Tch as if I'd bow to anyone much less her," Sayuri grumbled.

Rias chose to ignore the dig at her and said, "No, they're all actually human, except for Kurama."

"Then why are they here?" Lord Gremory asked.

"Me and snake bitch over there wanna become devils and we figured what better place than the Underworld….also dobe promised your daughter something," Sayuri said pointing at the red-head talking to a loli and blonde haired beauty.

"And who are they Rias?" Lord Gremory asked with an arched eyebrow. Crimson hair wasn't exactly a common hair color, even among devils, and to see someone with it who wasn't related to him was odd.

Naruto chose that time to speak up finally, bowing he began, "Nice to meet you sir. My name is Naruto Uzumaki. As for my friends right here…well you probably know them. The blonde is Gabriel and yes Gabriel as in the famed Angel Gabriel. The loli is Ophis and again yes she is Ophis the Dragon God."

The rest of the Gremory clan was close to having a coronary before Sirzechs stepped forward, oddly serious, "Explain. Now."

"To save us both some time, me and my friends here are actually from another dimension. I came here looking for some good fights and to get away from….*shiver* fangirls." Seeing no one was laughing aside from Anko Naruto sighed and continued, "Well I eventually met up with your daughter and fought off a Fallen. We got to know each other from there. She told me about her problem with the arranged marriage you had set up and so I told her that I'd help her out."

"And why are some of the most powerful beings in your company?"

"Kurama is a…childhood friend. I met Ophis when I fought Great Red in the Dimensional Gap and she's been following me ever since."

"….you….fought…Great Red?...The True Dragon God?" an even more shocked Sirzechs stuttered out. He may be one of the most powerful devils ever but to go up against Great Red was nothing short of suicide.

"Yes and Great Red was soundly defeated, and Uzumaki was holding back as well," Ophis said in her monotone voice.

"….WHAT!?" Sirzechs yelled out. And for good reason. The only other being who stood above Great Red had been the True God. To see someone else come along, a nobody, have Ophis vouch that that person had soundly defeated Red WHILE holding back was insane.

"Back where I come from the common profession is Shinobi. We are able to use what we call Chakra to do things that we would not be able to do otherwise such as this," and with a snap of his fingers another Naruto poofed into existence right next to the original.

"This is just the basics of what we can do. One of my strongest attacks allows me to destroy anything and anyone on a cellular level. Mei-chan can use lava and steam quite well, Anko is well versed in using Doton or earth release, Sayuri is a master at controlling lighting and fire attacks, and Kushina can create chains from her Chakra that can bind even Kurama."

Shocked silence was all that greeted Naruto's speech. From what he had just said the Gremory clan could only assume that all of them were at least on the level of a High-class Devil, with Naruto being even above a Super Devil. He was damn near a god if he could defeat Great Red. They could only imagine what would happen if any of them were turned into a Devil.

"…wait so you're here to get Rias out of her engagement?" Venelena asked, coming out of her stupor.

Naruto just nodded his head in an affirmative.

Sirzechs and Lord Gremory began to immediately think of the benefits of allowing their fellow red-head to do so. Not only could they almost guarantee Rias' safety, it would also look good on the clan to have such a powerful being associated with them, especially if it was a group package. It also helped that Naruto was the total opposite of Riser. He seemed polite, intelligent, but also good natured. He gave off this aura of warmth and happiness that was almost infectious. It seemed that Rias had also taken quite the liking to the boy if the way she looked at him was anything to go by.

"…Let's talk," was all Lord Gremory said.


OMAKE

"Are you sure he can handle it Kami? I mean he already has all of them and you also have two more in the wing with another two as possible. I think adding Grayfia is a bit much don't you?" spoke the voice of a tall man with blue fox ears and a blue furred tail waving behind him.

The man stood around 5 feet 5 inches, which was rather short, but was built for speed and precision. He wore robes of blue and white that covered his body. He wore no shoes, leaving his feet bare and the claws on his toes to be clearly seen. His face was a tanned complexion with whisker marks and a pair of slitted crimson eyes. Atop his head messily fell long locks of black hair hat covered his forehead and stopped a little past his neck.

This was Inari, the Fox god.

"Bah! This is the savior of a world we're talking about! He had a crappy childhood because I forgot to check in on him, and he took out that prick Shinju. Gods was he an ass," spoke a much taller and regal looking man.

The man looked to be a head taller than Inari and had a sharp face with a pair of golden eyes that contrasted with his pale skin tone. His golden blonde hair was swept back and kept cleanly short. He wore an all white suit with a golden colored tie.

This was Kami.

"…you really enjoy seeing him squirm don't you?" a man who looked to be the Kami's twin said. He was garbed in almost the exact same clothing and even shared similar facial features but where Kami's hair was blonde, his was ash grey. His eyes were a faded purple, and his tie was a deep black.

This was the Shinigami.

"Oh so much!" Kami grinned. He then coughed into his hand, "I mean no no! It's just that he deserves as much happiness as he can get!...yea...that's it."

"My son…IS A GOD AMONGST MEN!" came the voice of a certain blonde Hokage.

Shinigami turned a lazy glance at the Yondaime, "You really have no problems with your wife now wanting in your son's pants?"

"No because I know how he feels. It hurts that neither me nor Kushina will have any real claim to being his parents but I get it. Besides I know that they both care and love each other and that's all I want. Is for the both of them to be happy."

"I'M SO PROUD OF YOUR SON!" shouted another familiar voice, this one coming from a grey haired super pervert.

"Yes it seems that Naruto-kun has become quite the lady's man," spoke an elderly voice.

"Jiraiya-sensei, Sarutobi…NARUTO SHALL MAKE US PROUD!" and together the three perverts rejoiced.

Shinigami just shook his head at the singing perverts and the cackling Kami, "I almost feel bad for the poor bastard…almost."


AN: got some requests to do some omakes and there it is! Not my best I think but don't worry I promise the humor will get better. Gotta setup for the punch-line right?

And HOLY SHIT GUYS! Without the AN's and Omake the chapter was about 12 pages and close to 5,000 words! My longest chapter yet!

Hope this makes you all happy! But I can't guarantee all future updates will be as long. I will try to do so and maybe even make them longer but I can't say 100% that they'll all be that long.

Sorry to the people who I told that I would have this story out sooner. I got caught up replaying Pokemon Soul Silver and then got my hands on Ableton Live 9 so yea that got pretty time consuming.

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