A/N Please be careful this story is rated T. In this chapter there might be some scene that might shock the young lectors. I write this story with the help of my sisters of 13 and she told me it's ok and then but I prefer to warn you. If you're under 10 I'd rather you don't read that chapter and the next chapter will probably be this chapter but from another point of view but much more accessible so you won't be lost in the story don't worry. Well if I change my mind I'll at least do a little sum up first . Thank you
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Here is the chapter (finally !) :
Chapter 6
Tris POV
It's been now a month that Four and I are a couple. Al was long forgotten until today at the end of school he came toward me and told me
''Tris I know you hate me now but I just wanted to apologize. I miss your friendship you know. Maybe we could go take a coffee at starbuck in the weekend or something ? Just talk and try to recreate the bond we had before everything ''
I'm so surprise that I don't know what to say so I just nod. What did you want me to say ? I mean he apologizes I can't be that nasty to someone … I had abnegation as a result remember ?
Once at home I text Al that Saturday on the afternoon we can go to the mall and if he wants I can ask to the gang to come. He answers that first he just wants to ''reconnect'' with me, that he'll see the gang later. I agree that I was the one he had to apologize to so it didn't socked me. Maybe he should apologize to Four also ? I'll talk about it with him on Saturday.
This evening at dinner I talk about my plans for Saturday with my brothers and Four. They all seemed shocked and try to convince me that Al is weird and that I should be on my guard because you can never know with a guy like Al. Even Uri seems to agree with them and it kind of bother me. The good thing is even if they tried to warn me neither of the boys told me not to go there. I'm glad because I take it as they start to trust me, trust the fact that I'm a grown up.
After dinner I spend some twin time with Uri and then I sneak to Four's room. We kind of like to sleep together. I like to spend the night in his arm it's comforting. It's a bit strange, I thought that I was sleeping the best with Uri and the nights with Four are just so restful. The same as when I sleep with my brother. I feel safe. however the nights are very different from one another. I don't know how to describe it.
The following Saturday
I arrive at the mall and I see Al waiting for me smiling hard. We walk for a bit and then go sit at some terrace. I order a coke and a Nutella crepe and he orders an orange juice and a crepe with sugar. I get up to take some napkins. Al maybe apologizes but he didn't become clean during the time we weren't friend anymore. It makes me laugh. We eat and then we go to the parking because some of Al's friends were picking us up to take us back home.
While I walk I feel a bit strange, a mix a tiredness and dizziness. Al tells me that I look sick. I want to answer that I feel sick indeed but the word seems so heavy. My tongue doesn't seems to belong to me anymore. My body feels now heavier and heavier. Al begins to carry me. I want to thank him and tell him to call Zeke but it seems soooo hard right now. I promise only a little nap and then I'll be good. I'm just sooo tired right now.
When I wake up I'm tied to a chair in something like a basement or a cellar maybe. I hear 2 voices argue and I recognize one of them being Al's. That means he is the one who brought me here? he drugs me ? I can't believe it ! I thought we would be friend again .. ARGGH I'm definitely too naïve ! For once that the boys trusted me ! They'll never let me go out by myself again after that ! If I ever go out of it of course …
I think it's been one or two days since Al took me. Every day, maybe several times a day .. I don't know what time is it it's dark and I don't know how many time I've been there, he comes and tells me
''You'll be my girlfriend and then I will let you go. Don't get me wrong of course before living you'll have to prove me that you love me and kiss me like I saw you kissing Four.''
It always end up the same:
'' You don't get it do you ? I'll never love you you're a bad person. I love FOUR and Four only !''
Which he answers finally
''You don't want to be my girlfriend do you ? Well maybe you'll prefer my little friend ?''
At that moment Al goes out and Peter comes in. In first he slaps me. Then he tells me
''You have to chose Tris. You can be with me, you can be with Al or you can stay here. Your choice''
I always answer '' You can't force me to love either of you Peter ! ''
and after that he beats me until I almost lose consciousness. Have I told you that I'm hungry ? They gave me food twice since I've been here ! I want FOOOOOOD ! MY KINGDOM FOR AN HAMBURGER !
I feel like I'm carried but it seem far away in my consciousness.
I'm regaining consciousness slowly at the sound of a BIP BIP BIP BIP BIP. It's so annoying ! I think that's why I'm waking up.
Once I am conscious I realize that I'm no longer in the room tied to the chair but in the hospital. In my room there is Uri, Zeke and Four. Uri is sleeping with me in the bed. Four is sleeping on my right hand and Zeke on some kind of bench in the back of the room. Zeke is the first to wake up after me but not my much. He yelled so much when he saw my eyes open that he must have woken up the entire hospital !
Uriah get down from me and just hold my left hand from beside me after that. Four squeeze my hand. Zeke smile so hard I think it might break his face. I don't have any hand left so he holds on my feet. Maybe they are afraid if they don't hold me that I'll disappear again ?
Soon after while we are still talking, happy to be all together again, an officer comes knocking to the door of my room. He asks for my testimony because It will be needed to put Al and Peter in the minor's jail. I'm relieve to know that they are going to be far away from me. I won't admit it to my brothers or even Four because they would overreact and never let me alone again but I was scared to have to cross way with both of them at school or I don't know where in case the procedure were taking times or another reason why they'll be free.
I tell the officer my story. I tell him what happened to me during the 3 days (YEAH now I know how many time !) I was gone. During some part of the story I feel six hands squeezing different parts of my body.
At the hand of my testimony the officer tells me ' You know, I don't know you but I'm glad your back for two reasons :
- first the 3 guys here were clearly driving me crazy because they were so desperate to find you. I'm pretty sure they sleep at the police station and didn't move from there all the time you were away. Well, except when we left to find you maybe.
- Secondly and finally, after seeing how much the guys care about you, how much they were desperate to find you. Now I know that I've done my job well and can go back home happy.'
I smile and thank him very much. After he leaves I start teasing the guys about the fact that I'm irreplaceable. They laugh but agree. Uriah even tells : ' I can't imagine what Zeke would have made us to eat if we didn't find you today'
And just like that, just with this joke I know that I'm back, that I'm whole again. I couldn't be more glad to be with my family. I missed them every time of my captivity and I know that with them I'll soon be able to put everything behind me !