Well here is chapter 5.

It may be kind of long but hey whatever makes the readers happy

Sorry I couldn't post it earlier I have been going to high school and let me tell you it ain't easy. It sucks!

Anyways, back to our story.

Chapter 5

With Carter, Sango, and Kirara

Major Carter and Sango landed on the ground a couple yards away from the people(they looked human enough) around the fire. Sango pulled her boomerang bone into a position where it was in an attack position. As they crept up on the two people, who were completely aware that they were being ambushed, Carter and Sango both flew out of the bush that they were hiding in. (Kirara jumped out as a little kitty, she was tired from the journey, meowing and hissing.) The two people immediately recognized one of the two people as they lowered their zat guns.

"Sam?" asked the bald one, "Is that you?"

"Dad?" said Major Carter and she walked over and hugged him. "Wait a second," interrupted Sango, "I'm sorry to be the one to burst the love bubble, but who the hell are they?"

"Oh, I'm sorry, Sango," said Major Carter, "This is my Dad, and this is Martufe. And this is Sango."

'Hang on a second," said Sango, "They're demons! They are like that Teal'c guy!"

"No, no" said Jacob, "we are not Jaffa we are Tokra"

"Dad?" asked Carter, "How did you get here? You look like you have been here for a few days. Did you come through the Stargate? Let me tell Colonel O'Neill that you two are here." Carter started talking into her radio, but no one responded. "I think they have been captured."

(sorry to interrupt this nice story but I just have to get this little story out of my system. It's been stuck in my head all day.)

SG-1 is currently in the SG-C, in the briefing room, waiting for General Hammond, and Colonel O'Neill decides to share an embarrassing moment with everyone

"As I was saying," started Colonel O'Neill, "When we went to….. (4 hours later) and that's the reason why I was late to the Stargate." Colonel O'Neill looked around at the three other members of his team. They were all asleep, except for Teal'c, who was in a deep state of kelnooreem (did I spell that right?). "Hello!" yelled Colonel O'Neill, everyone woke with a start.

"What!" yelled Daniel, "are the Goua'uld attacking! Is the briefing over? Ok. Bye! I have to go and finish translating something."

"I'm going to go finish running my tests on the naquida bomb. Bye!" Carter left, and then Teal'c said, "Want to go and get lunch O'Neill?"

"Ummm…. Ok" replied Colonel O'Neill, and he and Teal'c left to go to the mess hall.

General Hammond walked in after the four hour phone call with his two granddaughters. "Sorry for the wait, my granddaughters had to tell me about their day at the aquarium. Now major Carter about that….." No one was there.

(that was my short little story. It feels good to get it out of my system. And now back to the main story)

As they walked, Major Carter with her dad and Sango with Martufe, talking, then a strange passerby came upon them.

"Kikyo!" yelled Sango, "what are you doing here? Why do you have Shippo? Shippo! Are you all right?"

Just then out of now where a staff weapon blast came through the trees and hit Kikyo. She died, again. She fell to the floor, and so did Shippo. He ran over to Kagome and jumped into her arms. Thenhe jumped onto Teal'c's head. "Thanks Teal'c" said Shippo, "you saved me."

"Major Carter!" yelled Teal'c as he walked over, "Selmac, Martufe, and Sango. This strange lady… she is evil. I do not like her. When did you two get her? I believe O'Neill has been compromised, because he is not responding to my radio calls."

"Yah. I know, I think…" Major Carter was cut off because she was shot by a zat gun. She did not know who shot her but I will tell you since I am nice, Jacob/ Selmac shot her and the rest of the peeps. Martufe shot them as well.

"Naraku will surely be pleased with us" said Jacob/ Selmac as he and Martufe rode off in a cloud of demons, with Carter and the others, off in the direction of the stargate.

Ok another chapter done.

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