Disclaimer: I do not, nor have I ever claimed to, own Criminal Minds or the lovely characters who are in it. I am not the writer of Criminal Minds or one of the brilliant actors who play one of the characters. I only own my thoughts and this story. Nothing more.

Sorry the chapters aren't 1000+ words but my mind is on lock down and I can't think of much to put into the chapters. I hope your enjoying so far.


A small mini van pulled up to a broken down shack in the middle of no where. The car looked as if it had run into a wall and kept going into another wall and another. The front was all smashed in. The sides were dented, and the doors were barely able to open.

A stout, plump man stepped out of the car, struggling to get the back right side door open. He looked like a man from the Sopranos, his hair balding, clean shaven face, and a suit. Black coat and slacks and a blood red dress shirt with a black tie keeping it all together. As the door slide open, an unconcious Penelope Garcia could be seen, lying on the floor of the mini van, in her beautiful white, sparkling wedding dress, with the right side of her face bloody from the vase he had hit her with. She probably had a concussion, but the man obviously didn't care.

He dragged her out of the mini van, her dress now getting dragged in the mud. He knocked open the door, and a room with bars around it was seen, and a small bed that looked like a prison bed was shown. He unlocked the gate and tossed Garcia onto the bed.

Cackling cruely, he locked Garcia in the prison-like chamber, and sat on the outside, sitting in a small wooden chair that looked like it could barely support the fat man's body.

Nearly a half hour later, Garcia opened her eyes. Her eye liner and mascara had smeared some. Moaning slightly, she raised her hand to the wound on her head, bringing her hand back down to see the blood that now covered her hand. She glanced around at her surroundings, and then saw the man who was smirking at her.

"Sleep well, baby girl?" he asked, putting emphasis on baby girl just to show how long he had been stalking the two.

"What'd you do to me?" asked Garcia.

"Just a little head wound, darling," he smiled, "Aren't you wondering where you are? Why I'd want you?"

"I'm not as stupid as everybody thinks, you should know that if you did your homework," she said, angrilly.

"I did, Miss Analyst," he said with another smile.

"Derek won't let you get away with this," she told him.

"He'll have to. Until I get my five million," he smiled, "It should be a real treat. Trying to get it to me when he can't leave the church."

"What do you mean?" asked Garcia nervously.

"Its wired to blow. If anybody leaves. Which means your little girl and all your friends will die." he smiled, not waiting for a reply from her. "But you will if he doesn't get the money."

Garcia looked up at him, "If you even touch my baby girl, I'll kill you!" she said.

The man smirked, "I'd like you to try, baby girl."

"Call me that again, I dare you to," she said.

"Baby girl. There's nothing you can do. Your trapped in that prison cell until your little boyfriend gets me what I want."

Garcia calmed down slightly, glancing into her lap, and then smiling up at him. "I'm sure that while we're waiting, we could have a little fun?"

He smiled, standing up and walking to the gate, and opening it. "What kind of fun did you have in mind, baby girl?" he asked.

Garcia smiled and stood up, nearly loosing her balance. "What do you think?" she asked, kneeing him in the gut, and watching him fall to the ground, clutching his stomach.

"You little..." he muttered, grabbing her ankle and watching her fall as she tried to escape.

She winced slightly, as he dragged her back into the prison cell and threw her against the other wall of the cell, she hitting her head hard against it.

"You should learn not to mess with me, you can't hurt me without me hurting you even worse."

"You think your so tough, you Soprano wannabe, but once my Derek gets a hold of you..."

"He'll what? Throw me in prison?"

"No. He'll kill you."


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