Here, this isn't a chapter but I'm answering some of the reviews I've gotten.

For those who think this is too much like the book, I am sorry. I'm trying to make this un-cannon like as possible. And I'm really not stupid. I do know that changing someone's name doesn't make them different. I should know.

And as for Danny, you don't really know much about him until the second story; that was preemptive. You'll see more of him later on.

And if it's so boring, why would you read it anyway? I'm not trying to be nasty, but I am trying. If you don't like it, then don't read it, that's my philosophy. And seriously, I am trying.

And don't worry, this isn't going to be a Hollis/ Draco story.

Thanks for the heads up about the whole too male thing HarryAnyPears. I wouldn't know how a guy would act since I'm not one. She is supposed to be a tomboy since I could see no other alternative. And I meant no harm! Please forgive me! Don't send your minions after me!

Thanks for all the reviews both good and constructive and I'll try my best.