Yay, I have finally updated
I've been away on year 9 camp all week so I've been really busy
But I have finally got around to writing the next chapter
So, enjoy!
Chapter 13
BPOV
As I stumbled clumsily through the front door of the house, the home phone began to ring. I ran to the phone, tripping over some magazines on the floor.
"Hello" I said into the phone, still trying to pick myself up off the floor.
"Oh, hey it's Charlie, I was wondering if you could meet me at your schools hall as soon as you can" said Charlie.
"Sure, I'll leave right now," I said confused "what's going on?" I asked.
"I'll tell you when you get here" he said before hanging up.
That was a bit rude, I thought to myself. He would usually at least say bye before hanging up, I thought as I clambered into my truck and started the engine. I drove as fast as I could to Forks High School, parked in my usual place.
That's a bit weird, I thought, I couldn't see Charlie's cruiser anywhere. It was really eerie without the continuous buzz of conversation, it was just too quiet. I kind of reminded me of a murder movie I had seen recently.
I walked quickly to the schools main hall where I was to meet Charlie. I cracked open the door and slipped inside. My steps echoed through the large hall.
I heard something move behind me, and I whipped around to look.
It was very dark; the only light was the moonlight coming through the windows on the east side of the hall.
"Dad?" I called into the darkness.
"What took you so long? I thought you weren't going to show" my father's gruff voice came from the shadows in the corner.
"Why would I not come?" I asked, facing where the voice was coming from.
"Maybe because I'm not your father" a woman's voice came from the same corner as my fathers. An insanely beautiful woman stepped out of the shadows.
"What do you mean you're not my father? Where's my dad?" I demanded.
"Oooo, temper temper, didn't your parents teach you any manners?" she taunted as she walked towards me.
"Where's my dad?" I asked again, trying to sound tough.
"He's not here, he never was" she said with a patronizing smile.
"Not here? But…I don't get it? He just called me and asked me to meet him here?" I said confused.
"Oh, hey it's Charlie, I was wondering if you could meet me at your schools hall as soon as you can" the woman said in my father's voice "Sound familiar?"
It sounded so much like him that if I had my eyes closed; I would swear it was him
"Why did you want me here?" I asked.
"Hmmm…let's see, my husband just broke up with me because a small insignificant little girl made him fall in love with her…any of that ring a bell?" she said, starting to circle me.
"You're Edward's wife?" I asked, shocked that he would leave someone so beautiful her for someone so ordinary like me.
"Yes I'm Edward's freaking wife, who the hell did you think I was?" she shouted, walking even closer to me.
I thought she is getting a bit too close, so I started to walk backwards towards the door, but I tripped on my own foot and fell hitting my head very hard on the wooden floor.
"Ahh, perfect position." She said walking over to stand on my arm, to hold me to the ground "Would you like to know what I'm going to do to you? Well first I'm going to break every bone in your body and then I am going to bite you and let you live through 3 days of internal burning before finally, when you will be literally begging for death, will I finally kill you. Sound good to you?" she sneered.
My breathing became irregular and gasping when I finally put together her words. She was going to kill me. She was going to put me in immense pain before she will finally kill me. And there was nothing I could do to stop her.
"Are you ready to begin" she spat, and with that she slammed her foot hard down on my left ankle.
I screamed out in pain, I was sure she had shattered my bones. I tried to get up to at least hold my shattered foot, but she held me firmly to the ground. Suddenly she stamped down on the other foot, causing me to scream again. Tears stained my face as she continued up my legs, shattering every bone there. I was sitting in a pool of my own blood and the only thought that was going through my head was: this is the end.
Suddenly I heard glass shattering.
I turned my head to see what had happened and I saw Edward smashing through the glass windows.
"Edward?" Tanya gasped.
"Get away from her Tanya" he said darkly.
"No" she screeched before grabbing my arm and sinking her razor sharp teeth in to my soft flesh.
Edward screamed in fury before knocking Tanya away from me. She went flying through the air and hit the wall, making a huge hole in it. She made a quick recovery and shifted into a crouch and growled. It was the most threatening sound I had ever heard.
I didn't see the rest because I was too fixated on the burning sensation in my arm. My arm started to warm up to the point that it was getting very uncomfortable. Then it started burning I looked at my arm, trying to find the fire and put it out, but there was nothing on my arm.
The burning continued to get hotter and hotter, and it started to spread up my arm. I screamed in agony and I felt two cold arms surround me and lift me up.
"Bella? Bella? Can you hear me?" my saviour asked.
When I tried to speak, I just screamed more, the pain was just too unbearable. Suddenly I was falling to the floor and landed on the shattered glass. I flicked the glass out of my hand, and rolled onto my back. Even though glass was sticking into me, legs were shattered and blood was dripping from every inch of my body, it was nothing compared to the burning pain.
By now it had reached my heart and the heat just kept getting hotter. I started scratching at my chest, in an attempt to claw out my heart, and save me all this misery.
I heard Edward yelling "Get out of here Tanya! Get out of here! I never want to see you again EVER! Do you hear me! I NEVER want to see you again!"
A second latter, I felt two ice cold arms pick me up run from the hall and into the night.
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