Disclaimer: I don't own the Naruto charters -Only in my best dreams.- But I do own my friends Mawahaha (hmmm I wonder what type of reaction I'll get from that one...probably something like 0.o or =.=')

Authors Note: Well here's chapter two fixed! I just made slight changes like the way it's set up and such, nothing big. I remember when i wrote this one i had fun doing so, i was sitting there and was like wow that's intense. and even when i read it now im still like 'dude this right hur is one sick ass chapie!'
A side note: There so happens to be blood it this chapter, not much but if you don't like blood don't say you wern't warned ^_*.

Thoughts
Exaggerated
Narration-by me

Chapter 2: Son of a batch of cookies

Gabby(Gabrielle)

Owe. My body hurt but felt surprisingly lighter then I excepted it to feel. I wasn't being crushed and I was able to breath. In fact just the fact that I'm alive is suspiring to me.

I slowly opened my eyes, and blinked while adjusting to the light.

Wait a minute it was raining, and there was a burning building in front of me. Gahh!! Where am I!? I looked around a lake with a town on the other side stood in front of me. Awe Man, this is like that dream I had, where I was lost and then…well actually I think I died but then I woke up.

I placed my hands on the ground preparing to get up when I felt a pain shoot through my left wrist. It collapsed under me and I rubbed it remembering the falling piece of building. Great now I have a broken wrist. I stood up using my leg strength. Looking around I decided to head across the lake.

The second I got my foot into the lake there was a huge explosion.

"Oh come on! Didn't I just fuckin deal with this," I ducked down into the water thankfully only smoke came towards me. I pulled my head out to see wet purple hair rather then blonde black and pink.

Sure why not ill just have weird painful dreams WHERE MY HAIR TURNS COLORS! I shook my head and took a deep breath calming my self down; I need to learn to chill. You have the same bad habits in your weird dreams I suppose.

Someone shouted and I turned around towards the town. The building that stood in the front was blown up and in pieces. A giant blue blob with black stood inside the damaged building. I rubbed my eyes and saw it was in the form of a cat.

Why are my dreams so weird what is it I eat? before I had time to properly ponder my question someone spoke from the side of me.

I screamed and jumped, turning to look at the person who scared me. My eye twitched and I let out a fake cry.

"Why do I always die in my dreams?!" I screamed to no one in particular but my self. Before I had time to blink again a fist came towards me and I ducked out of the way putting my good hand up to block. When nothing hit I looked up to see the man flying at me. I jumped back landing in the water. I figured I had some time so I stopped to think.

'Wait a minute that guy was wearing an akatsuki clock and then there's the cat like thing and--- SON OF A BATCH OF COOKIES!' I was pulled from the water. And I looked at the guy as he held me by my hair, which like always didn't hurt.

Oh the perks of having younger siblings! Wait! That's---Awe man. Just as I thought of a way to get out a fist came flying at me. And again, Black. Shit!

I was woken up by a kick to my side.

"You know you knocked me out! The least you can do is let me sleep!" It's not enough that I hate being woken up, which is why my eyes have yet to open. But to knock me out and them kick me to get me up is way beyond cruel.

The one who kicked me laughed and began arguing with another man. I opened my eyes with a sigh realizing sleep wasn't going to be able to come back now. I sat up and looked to the men.

Oh of all people I could wind up with it has to be these two! Wait I have no reason to freak it's just a dream…although it's a dream with real pain.

A foot was pressed to my chest and I was knocked back down with the foot still on my chest, to make sure I didn't move I suppose.

"Owe! That hurts my boobs much!" He snickered having realized my pain. I rolled my eyes why would I expect sympathy from Hidan…even if it is a dream.

I looked behind me and took in my surroundings. Having recognized the place I turned my head to the left and there she was Nii Yugito hostess of the two tailed bijuu. The entire scene came back to me and I remembered Hidan's praying circle.

I looked down hoping with my life I wasn't in the middle of it, but sure enough there it was, right under me.

Wait it's a dream! Haha I win…..Nope I don't it's a dream with real pain. FUCK! I looked up to a now praying Hidan.

"Oh…boy," My voice was high pitched with a slight squeak. I moved to get up seeing his foot no longer on my chest. As I went to move my legs they didn't move getting scared I looked down, I was almost relived to see that the source of this was bindings by Kakuzu's stitching that was also placed securely on my arms.

Hidan brought his pendent up to his mouth and began to mumble words. As he mumbled a light flashed in front of my eyes. My heart began to race fear building in me but my face portraying no emotion in particular. As the light faded I was able to under stand Hidan's mumbled words.

Blah blah something about my soul blah blah. Wait! My soul, what?! A tingle ran through my body and I started to cry. Thick, warm tears ran down my face.

Hmm thick tears? I licked one of them with my tongue and crossed my eyes to look down. Blood how unoriginal, although I can't say I've never wanted to cry tears of blood. A shooting pain ran through my body and it was numb for all of two seconds before there was a throbbing pain in my chest. I looked down to see a metal stake in my chest probably through my heart.

"Don't struggle you'll make it worse,"

I turned my eyes to the voice and saw Hidan, with what looked to me almost sympathetic look on, but even if it was, it had been quickly replaced with a neutral face. My body began to feel as if it was being torn open. I closed my eyes and bit my lip tearing the flesh and making it bleed. This continued for a few more hours and I must have passed out once from the pain being when I next opened my eyes it was dark.

My eyes once again slide shut, feeling to heavy to stay open and I fell into darkness.