I Will Come Back For You

by Truth Within My Song

Those were the last words that Legolas said to his betrothed before leaving her to fight the orcs that attacked Mirkwood. Four months later, he still hasn't come for Belle. Both captured and taken in different directions to Saruman, will they be reunited?

12. Author's Note 2

Author's Note

This is all that I had written before I decided to stop. I was going to continue, but then I got a review that really bothered me. I hate to admit it, but my feelings were hurt. I am, after all, a human being.

First of all, I think that I'm a pretty good speller. I don't know where it was that I made spelling errors, and I know that my writing isn't free of mistakes, but I don't understand how my spelling could be better.

Second of all, I'm sorry that it seems Belleruraina's name isn't very well liked. I liked it. I also didn't make it up myself. I got it from this site: .

Third of all, my story was two chapters in when I got the review saying that my story had been done many times before and that Belle was a Mary Sue. I don't understand either of these statements. I didn't think Belle was Mary Sue at all, but maybe I'm wrong. Maybe she is. But I thought that, yes I have some common themes in my story, there were also some unique pieces to it. Yet, two chapters in, already it was being called cliché.

I take great pride in my writing and love to do it. I understand criticism. But I felt as though my story was ripped apart, and I don't think I can continue writing it.

Thanks to those who read the story and liked it.