Thanks reviewers, Okay, I was thinking about re-writing this story, what do you think?
I'm going to update more regularly, including Betrayal at Dusk.
I'm also going to write another!
Set in Friday a week later!
Chapter 11 – Forgiven?
Bella P.O.V
I can't believe Alice backed out! Was I in this alone? No, no I'm not alone, I have Rose and Tanya. I can't believe this! How can she do this to me? I need her to help me ruin Edwards life, but of course she'll be neutral in the war now! Yes, it may seem as if I'm evil, manipulative trying to ruin his life, but what goes around comes around. He ruined my life, what's so wrong with revenge?
I sighed. I was brought up to not think that way. I refused to talk to her for nearly a week, Alice is my best friend and I'm treating her like this, what's wrong with me? Edward! Edward is what is wrong with me! He ruined me, he chose that thing over me!
"Bella" Alice sighed behind me.
I swung round and grabbed her, hugging her.
"Eh...Hello" she laughed.
I kissed her cheek "I hate you, Alice Cullen" I mumbled jokingly at her.
She giggled "Love you too, Bellie!"
I groaned loudly, I hate that name.
"Ohh, sorrrrry. Bella" she teased.
"You better be!" I faked growled.
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I groaned and turned away from the two making out on Alice's bed.
Jasper was getting handsy but not as much as Alice, I kept on persisting, I leave but Alice ordered me to stay put, but they kept going back on each other.
To say I was grossed out was a definite understatement.
I got up and excused myself, Alice looked sad but smiled when Jasper cupped her face.
It wasn't Like I hate their relationship, it's just it ruined my chances at revenge.
Edward P.O.V
I grinned looking down at the picture in my hands, it was Bella and I when we were four, I had my arms wrapped around her and my lips kissing her small cheek. We were both dressed in light colours and surrounded by a meadow of flowers. My mother would take us to the meadow every Saturday, but after Bella and I started fighting, she gave it up.
I looked out my window, streaks of grey was all the sky had to offer. No sun. No rainbow. Just grey. I felt the happiness for Jasper and Alice escalade, I was happy for them and a smidgen of hope told me that Bella and I would be like that. The hope was overshadowed by the hate she felt for me, I despise myself for that day.
Bella P.O.V
As Esme Tanya always said, Ice-cream is for spiralling depressions. I walked down and tore through the freezer. The Cullen's were like a second family so it was normal for anyone of us kids to go at their food, the worst at it was Jacob ,boy could he eat.
I pulled a bent spoon from the drawer, my special spoon. Esme was a perfectionist so persuading her to let me keep the bent spoon was a hard job. I waddled through to the livingroom.
My spoon and ice-cream dropped to the floor, my mouth gawped
"NO, NO, NO, NO!!!!!" I shouted at Rosie straddling my brother who was kissing down her neck.
They turned to me.
"WHAT IS THIS A WHORE HOUSE? WHY IS EVERYONE HOOKING UP!!!!" I screamed.
Okay so I am going to write a new story, I need help.
It's basically about (one of Bella's parents) and (one of Edwards) get together and have a relationship. Bella and Edward, Alice and Emmet don't know about it until their parents break the news and they have to move in together. Edward has the biggest room so Bella has to share with him until her new room has been redecorated (Edward goes overboard and puts tape in middle of floor, fractioning out space) They have a very dysfunctional relationship and don't get on much. Basically the adults decide to make the family closer by doing 'family bonding time' everyday and this brings the two together.
IMPORTANT: I am letting you chose which male and Female adult you want for each parent i.e
Bella's mum is Esme and The others dad is Charlie or mum Renee or dad Carlisle (you get me?) You can chose the adults: One male and One female, first reviewer gets choice!!!! I'd rather not ahev Renee but it's first reviewers choice!!!!