umm...Hey this is my first fanfic :) i hope you guys like it. I've been thinking about this story for a while and started writing it in my notebook so R&R plz don't hold back on the comments(but plz no flames sparks tho lol)i need the constructive critisim *-* without further adoo...RISE THE CURTAINS!!! =) im only doing the prologue to see how u guys like it
Disclaimer: i DO NOT own alice in wonder land but pretty much all the plot and all the characters are mine
Prologue
Eight figures shrouded in dark cape-like trench coats; seemingly motionless except for the barely visible swaying of a certain lazy person. Outside there was pai nand unjust and within these walls stood the makers of it with the help of another... but that will come soon enough. The room was very dim but a humming of light ommitted from the shape that each of these beings stood at certain points of. It resembaled two stars intwing with one another. Which created a strange but incandescent figure.
At the very front of the area a large door opens, releasing a pale light onto the room. A noticeably pained and angry grunt was let out by one of the eight beings
The larger of the two, from the group of four that entered, bowed swiftly mumbling thaie apologies. After whispering simple instructions to the smaller duo, they scurried away closing the door behind them.
The couple walked uncertainly to the center of the over-lapping stars where the light shone brightest. The two pulled back their hoods to reveal twins. One had a short, boy-like haircut with spiraling tattoos that represented the warrior. This suit her well, although if it hadn't been for her petite and wekk curved body you could swear she was a boy; for she kept her pretty face in what may as well be a permanent scowl.
Her other half was another story. She kept her deep lavender hair long and flowing, and had tattos that represented the earth. There was barely any differnence between the two except for their eyes. The long haired one had a golden left eye and cream right one. Her sister had the same colors but in a different direction.
One of the eight beings on the figure stepped torward the duo. Their hand traced over the tattoos that decorated the tempals of the young girls. a disfigured looking smile stretched across the face of the person and an icy voice rang out;
"And so...it begins"
A/N: sorry it was so short *bows in shame* but i just wanted to see if it made my readers want to actually read the story. I'll try to update as much a possible but i usually can only do it during school (my computer is down at home)
R&R PLZ =)