Disclaimer: See Prologue
So here we are back again. I want to thank everyone for their awesome reviews. It's hard not to like a bunch of people telling you that you're story rocks. Also I'd like to thank all my readers, I broke the 3,000 hit mark already. and since before this story i had 4 people who had me favorited or on alert, i think that's pretty good. How I have almost 400 steady readers with almost like 11 favorites and 17 alerts. I have to say I'm lovin it. It's okay you can call me a dweeb.
To Anon Lee, I know about the stupid errors just bear with me until I feel like rereading carefully enoughto find errors. Because as I'm sure myfellow authors know, when going over you're own work you tend to skip whole paragraghs let alone small errors.
Animefan29 I wish I would of thought of that in the first place that would have been even cooler then the tornado of death. But don't worry I have some other wicked combo spells that I will put to good use.
Lonewolf - I will explain some of that along the way. I agree that Ayaka wouldn't give up on Negi and she was one of the girls I debated about added to my initial list. But would Negi give up on her? Well no, probably not. But the truth is I really can't stand her lol. But really I didn't think she brought anything specifically unique to the table. Her money wouldn't matter in the magical world. that and I had to draw the line somewhere.
Okay, now that I got that out of the way.
I'm sorry to say that I lied last chapter. Nodoka won't be comfronting Negi quite yet. A friend of mine gave me a much better idea of how to handle that, which trust me when i say it's SOO fucking brilliant I'm expecting 20+ reviews when it acctually goes down. but other than that it's a good chapter.
IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT!!
I'm doing something a little different starting this chapter. I often have side jokes or comments about what I'm currently writing. Sometimes it fits right in with the paragraph, and there's no problem. But some of the jokes or comments involve a lenghty explaination. Sometimes I just need to explain something i said in a paragraph. Either way this often messes up the flow of the scene. In the worst cases it makes you almost forget what was going on. So to fix this I have a new system. I will use an asterisk to show where a comment, joke or explaination should be. F Then at the end of that paragraph in parenteses with the asterix to match will be the joke. For example, "Anyone who's read a Terry Pratchet book should know what I mean."
(Terry Pratchet is an English satirical write who Authors the Discworld series. Quite possibly the funniest books ever written.)
See what i mean? If you guys hate it I'll take it out but I think it will help the flow of the story. Aslo at the end of this chapter I set up a vote for the next girl negi will get with.
LEMON ALERT! This is another chapter laced with adult content. I think I may have gone a little too far with the desciption on this one but I was having some much fun with the concept I couldn't help myself. I tried to keep it as tasteful as possible though. So without further yappin'
Chapter 6
Reunited
It took a while for Kotaro to settle down after the initial confusion wore off. Despite the physical state he had been in Kotaro seemed surprisingly energetic. But I suppose 5 years could make a free spirit like him a bit stir crazy. Negi had literally told him to sit like ten times. But seeing his friend jump around and act like his old self was enough to plaster a smile on Negi's face, reminiscent of a father watching his son ride his first bike.
After a while though, he did finally settle down. And the first thing he wanted to know was what he'd missed. The group spent a couple of hours filling him in on the trails and travels they'd experienced while he was gone. But they did so as they began moving out of the forest. Because while the camp was far enough that they were out of immediate danger, after the display Negi had put on it was doubtful that the Dog demons would give up their search very easily. So the more distance they put between themselves and the village the better.
It was while they were traveling that Negi and Kotaro finally had a minute with just the two of them. They were scouting ahead jumping through the trees; the rest of the group was back behind them. Kotaro waited until they were nearly a mile away, and then stopped dead in his tracks. "This should be far enough." Turning around he waited for Negi who'd been just a few trees back.
"Far enough for what?" He said as he landed on the same branch as Kotaro, who was now casually leaning against the tree.
"Far enough away from the girls that I can ask you the question I've been waiting to ask you for 5 years." He pushed off the tree, put his hands on Negi's shoulders and looked his friend dead in the eyes with nothing but seriousness on his face. "So how many of the girls have you slept with already?"
It was a long hard stare, complete with a sweat drop. Then Negi punched him right in the mouth. "Are you kidding me? I haven't seen you for 5 years and that's the first thing out of your mouth? You fuckin' mutt."
Negi's gentlemanly nature had long ago been curbed in the presence of Kotaro. Around the girls he couldn't help himself, but when it was just the two of them, he could act however he wanted. A feeling he'd sorely missed.
"Well what the hell do you expect? I spent the large portion of my time since puberty in a jail cell. You however, have been traveling with a group of gorgeous and highly 'adventurous' girls, and the last time I checked almost all of whom were infatuated with you." He shook his head and slapped Negi upside the head.
"So yes, I want to know how the good life has been treating you. And if my sweet, innocent, and most of all naive little Negi finally woke up and smelled the pu-tang pie. So again, how many of the girls have you banged?"
(If you don't know, or can't figure out what pu-tang pie is you are too young to be reading this)
Negi couldn't help but laugh at his friends brashness. "Well when you put it like that... None of your damn business!"
"Oh that's cold. 5 years in prison and you can't even answer my one simple question." He was acting the part well, so Negi gave in.
"Alright fine. One question, one answer that's it… I've had sex with all of them." Kotaro chocked on air and almost fell out of the tree.
"Are you serious? You really…"
"No you fool." Negi paid back at his friend for teasing him. "But you should've seen your face. Honestly though and don't you dare speak about this to anyone in the group. Because no one knows that I'm with any one. I've managed to keep it a secret up until now. But I didn't just sleep with them, it's more than that.
Kotaro beamed with pride. "See that's more like it. I knew you wouldn't let me down. So you are with one of them. Which one?" He looked like a puppy who just saw a squeeze-it toy for the first time.
"Wow, you underestimate me. Who said anything about one? I've slept with 3 of them and I'm on my way to a 4th ." Negi felt the immense satisfaction of not only being able to brag about having four women. But also seeing Kotaro's face as he tried to wrap his head around the concept that little Negi was a pimp.
"Wait a second, you mean to tell me that you have ongoing relationships with 4 of the girls?" A second ago he couldn't believe that he'd gotten one of them, let alone 4. Now to find out how he was also making it work.
"Well not exactly. I've had two on going relationships. And the one I said I was working on just happened before I left to come save you." Negi's head was starting to reach it's maximum swelling capacity.
"So that's 3, what about the forth one?" Kotaro was riveted. He had to know everything.
Negi's cocky, cooler than thou attitude dropped almost instantly. Even Kotaro a self proclaimed emotional retard noticed the shift in the air around Negi. "Well let's just say, it was a one time only kind deal." It was clear that this particular one made Negi uncomfortable so Kotaro quickly changed the subject.
"So now all I need are the names." Kotaro said triumphantly.
"Yeah well then I guess it's too bad you used your one question to ask how many girls instead of their names." Negi said with a laugh then began bounding through the trees at full speed again.
Kotaro gaped, "You bastard that's no fair! You answered more than one question already." He began chasing after Negi.
After their conversation the boys scouted to the edge of the forest before turning around. They knew they were going to hwind up setting up camp just inside the forest so there was little point in going past that. So they went back to the group and traveled with them until it was time to set up camp.
Kotaro of course, was far too restless to be made to do something as mundane as put up the tents so he was assigned to go hunting. Something he hadn't done in quite a while. It was like riding a bike, you never forget how. Just because you still know how doesn't mean you're still good at it. So he'd been at it a while, but he still refused Mana when she said she could do it. Just because he was rusty didn't mean he needed a girl to do it for him.
So while he was busy, everyone else helped set up camp. They got done pretty fast, so while everyone was waiting for Kotaro they started relaxing. Setsuna was cleaning and sharpening her sword. Mana as always, was cleaning her guns. Chachamaru was trying to boil some water for Eva's tea. Nodoka was sitting by the edge of camp looking out into the forest.
Konoka was generally straightening up the area that they were going to be camping in and was about to ask Negi if he would like to 'take a walk' when she was beaten to the punch.
"Hey boy, it's that time again. Come on." Eva grabbed Negi by the hand and led him away from the camp. Since breaking the curse, Eva could only drink Negi's blood. But it wasn't something she liked to do in front of everyone. It was a private matter for a couple of reasons. First she didn't want to hear anyone complain that she was hurting him.
Secondly, drinking his blood had more of an effect on her than feeding normally would on a vampire. Even for normal vampires, feeding is a serious rush and turn on. It's almost like an orgasm, except instead of just feeling satisfied you want more. So when Eva's finished with Negi she's practically in heat. More than once Negi's literally had to fight her off. Last but not least, despite all evidence to the contrary, Eva was just like every other woman in some respects. She didn't like people watching her eat.
So when they'd put a little distance between themselves and camp, Eva stopped Negi and told him to wait just a second.
Despite having her powers back, Eva seldom used her Glamour spell these days. Partially because she didn't really feel the need, but mostly because everyone made fun of her for it. Now of course, Eva couldn't care what those idiots thought. But having to listen to them laughing and make smart ass comments all day when she wasn't allowed to kill them, was pure torture.
But she preferred to use it when she fed. She said it made her feel like her old self again, and she enjoyed the nostalgia. This was part of the truth. The other part being was that with how excited she became after feeding she was always trying to lure Negi into losing control. And if he was going to succumb to anything, it would be her glamour form. Not only the body but her overly sexual outfits that she put herself in. It was really a testament to the boy's willpower that he hadn't given in long ago. Though if Eva had anything to say about it, that was going to end tonight.
His display back at the village was still on her mind, I'm already feeling horny now, it was going to be a long night if I can't seduce the boy. On second thought, maybe I going about this the wrong way. Why am I asking when I could just…
She was pulled out of her own world when Negi called over from behind a tree. "Are you alright over there? It usually only takes you a second to change." Negi had become used to the process. At first it had been a little disconcerting, the feeling of being drained. But now Negi just liked being able to use it as an excuse not to do anything for a while afterwards.
She came out from around the tree in her adult form. She didn't even pother with a full clothing set. She was dressed in a black corset with a black skirt that was really just for show since it didn't cover more than two inches. With it was a black guarder belt and stockings with high heels to match. She also wore long black gloves that went most of the way up her arm. She basically looked like a dominatrix.
With her adult forms absolutely incredible curves it was a picture of sexual perfection. After the excitement of the day before, Negi needed a little release. He had intended to try to sneak away with Konoka somewhere before he'd been called off. But, if Eva was trying this hard he might not make it that far. Negi's brain stopped working as all the blood in his upper head transferred to the lower one. Now normally Negi reminds Eva of the rules. Telling her she can only drink for about ten seconds. No trying anything funny, keep your hands to yourself. But tonight looking at her he found it hard to speak.
Of course, after living for hundreds of years Eva could tell exactly what effect she was having on the boy. She could even sense the shift in his blood flow as he started to become aroused. He was trying to fight it but she could see it in his eyes he wanted her.
She walked up to him with a evil grin on her face. She leaned in and pressed the side of her face against his neck. Eva inhaled, drinking in his scent. She could feel his heart beating through his veins. She shakily took a long breath in, the excitement building up inside so fast she was trembling. She licked his neck long and slow.
Negi also felt the heat of the moment. He had to control himself when she came in close. Their proximity began affecting him, the longer they stayed like that the less he could think. Then he felt her tongue tracing the muscles of his neck and his eyes close on their own. If he didn't stop this soon he wouldn't be able to. Actually getting his mouth to say stop however, wasn't so easy. "Eva… you shouldn't…"
She had him and she knew it. With all the pieces in place she put her lips against his earlobe and whisper in a sultry voice, "This time, you're not going to get away so easily."
Before Negi even absorbed what she said, her fingers began dancing down at her sides. Nearly invisible strings flew all around and within seconds Negi was wrapped up like a marionette. Eva laughed as she used her strings to manipulate his body, forcing his limbs into the spread eagle position.
Nodoka went inside her tent when she noticed Negi and Eva leaving together. She'd always wanted to see Eva feed on him. At least that's what she kept telling herself as she pull out her call and summoned her book. But this time instead of going into Negi's head she decided to see things from Eva's point of view.
He was so damn sexy ripping up those mutts earlier. Damn Look at him, he looks just like that damn Nagi. Except version 2.0 has a much nicer body. I think I'm going to have fun with this.
Through Eva's eyes the scene was much more controlled. Unlike Negi's unbridled passion clouding his thoughts Eva was enjoying this on an intellectual level. Nodoka dug into her bag for some popcorn. This was going to be a hell of a show.
Negi found himself tied up like a puppet and at the mercy of Eva. Normally he would just have broken out but it had been a long day. He used up a lot of energy getting Kotaro out and after that he'd traveled all day. So when he tried to free himself he found that he couldn't. "Eva what are you doing?" Negi's voice betrayed his apprehension.
She smiled at her captive, "Oh nothing special." She twitched her fingers bringing Negi's helpless form closer to her. She traced a finger down his chest letting her finger nail cut through his shirt and scratching his chest just enough to draw a single thin bead of blood. She lowered her face to his stomach and traced the line back up with her tongue. Negi's blood was like sweet wine on her lips. "You're mine now boy. If I were you, I'd shut up and enjoy the ride. Who knows you might actually enjoy this."
Negi gasped as she licked up his chest tasting his blood. He tired to protest, "Eva stop it right now, I didn't agree to this." Negi was trying to struggle but Eva wasn't called the doll master for no reason. He couldn't escape which meant that he was at her mercy. And she was loving it.
"No you didn't, but then again I don't remember asking. Also, while you might not have verbally agreed…" Eva reached down and grabbed onto Negi's manhood which was slowly growing. "but it seems that you aren't disagreeing either, despite your verbal complaints." She gave it a good tug and then let go so she could slowly circle Negi. As she walked around him she explored his body with hers hands. Tracing the defining lines of his muscles with her fingertips, she licked her lips at his body's perfection.
"So boy, it looks like all that training you've done has really paid off. You look delicious." He knew what she meant, but a vampire telling you that you look tasty is not a comforting thought.
"But Eva..." Before he could continue, she bit the back of his shoulder. His body tensed up expecting the drain that came with having your blood sucked, but she only took a few drops; just enough the fan the flame inside her. The lust in her eyes was growing thick.
She lapped up the blood that trickled out of the bite on his shoulder as her hands snaked around to the front of his body. She used one hand to undo his pants as the other slid under them. She teasingly caressed the area, as she whispered into his ear again, "Still going to tell me you don't agree to this?" She let his pants fall to the floor, and then came around the front to inspect her prisoner. "Very nice boy. You're even sexier than your father." His body was so well defined, he was practically a sculpture.
"Now this is for you, so you better watch." She took a few steps back and Slowly started peeling off her own clothes. Negi gave up complaining, half because he knew it wouldn't help and half because he was starting to like it. He watched Evangeline strip for him, her voluptuous adult body bending and twisting in the sexiest of ways. She was beautiful, there was no denying that, and her wickedness gave her an edge that Negi had to admit made her practically irresistible.
When Eva finished all that was left was her black lace stockings and the contrast against her pale skin was perfect. She took a few more steps back and snapped her fingers, making a blanket appear on the ground behind her. She carefully laid down, making sure that Negi got a clear view of her whole body. Her legs spread, facing Negi so that from his angle her head was between her raised knees. She looked at his eyes tying to see what he was thinking. Because just like with his father, it wasn't enough just to take it, she want him to want her.
Negi's eyes were locked on her body. He was trying to take in every detail at once. And when Eva started tracing her hands over herself Negi nearly fainted. Eva was laying back caressing her own breasts and rubbing her hands along the inside of her thighs giving Negi a front row view of Eva's delicate flower. Then she raised a finger and beckoned him over.
Still helplessly bound, Negi's body moved forward and knelt down in front of Eva. She smiled as instead of complaining or looking away Negi greedily licked his lips. Using her strings to guide him Eva lowered Negi's body onto her own. Meanwhile, making his hands slide all over her body.
Now at this point while she was doing all the general movements Negi was doing his part too. He was making use of the little control he had, working his fingers over her skin in unison with her moving him. She leaned up and captured his lips for a kiss. Negi was surprised when it was soft, sweet and slow.
He'd been expecting oral warfare, with the temptation that was quickly growing being the artillery. But she kissed him with love not lust. And while it took a second for him to respond, Negi quickly fell deeply into the kiss.
His hands were near her waist and with the tiny amount of control he had, he grabbed her hips and squeezed pushing his fingers up along the crease of her thighs. She responded in kind wrapping her arms around his neck and pushing her hips against his hands.
She still had him at her mercy and as they broke the kiss she made sure he knew it. She lifted him slightly so they had some space between them. As he struggled to reach her again she grinned up at him mischievously. "Be good now boy, and you might just get a treat." He stopped struggling, he was kind of curious as to what Eva's idea of a treat would be in this situation.
She began moving her hands and before he knew it, Negi was the one on bottom. She straddled him making sure to sit on his now rock solid manhood but not to let it inside her. "So boy, it seems to me you aren't resisting anymore." She slid her hands up and down his chest. "Could you be enjoying this?" she knew the answer but she wanted to hear him say it.
"Eva, you have no idea." Negi said with a dreamy smile. A man looking up at a girl as beautiful as that straddling him is pretty much in heaven. And you could hear it in negi voice.
That was for the brief few seconds before Eva ran all of her nails roughly down his chest. Each scratch quickly filling with blood, "Did you forget how you were supposed to address me?" She leaned down very slow and sexually her exposed breasts brushing over his hips. She slowly licked up each trail of blood. Savoring the sweet pleasure it gave her, she closed her eyes until the very top where she'd stare into Negi's licking her lips.
It had been years since she had stopped making him call her by that name. But in a situation like this, it was no time to argue, so Negi just played along. "Forgive me…" he waited until she was looking dead in his eyes and added, "Master."
Her grin was so big she could've been mistaken for the Cheshire Cat. She flipped her hair back and slid her body up Negi's until her ample breasts where hanging just above his face. Using her strings she moved his arms up and he took the command in stride, gripping one in each hand. He strained his neck trying to lift his head to go for it, but Eva had it held down.
"Did you want something?" She asked accusingly. Staring at her chest hungrily Negi nodded. "What do you say then?"
His fingertip found her nipples and gave a soft twist. In the most submissive voice he could muster he said, "Please Master."
Eva was in heaven. She couldn't help but reward Negi for his obedience by giving him what she desired. And as he greeddy kiss and nibbled along she was amazed by how good it felt. Either he was very good at this or it had been way too long, Eva was starting to expect it was a bit of both.
Negi was ready and waiting when Eva decided to move even further up, positioning her hips above his face. She used her strings to show him where to put his hands. Even thought he had already started, next the strings wrapped his head forcing his mouth against her.
It wasn't long before Eva was going crazy. Moaning, panting, hell at one point she called out to Satan. She waited until he brought her over the edge and then let up on the strings letting him lay flat on the ground as she stood up. "That was wonderful, boy. You deserve another treat. But let's see how you do in round two, now that you're going to have a distraction.
(I don't know about you but I just don't think Eva would call out to God.)
She turned around and once again put her hips over his face. Except this time, she faced the other way. Leaning down to return the favor, she looked back into his eyes as her hand wrapped around him. She gave him lustful smile and said, "You don't really deserve this, but I'll make you earn it later."
Negi watched mesmerized as she slowly lowered her head. Entwined in a heap of passion and ecstasy, they devoured each other ravenously until they both reached their peak and collapsed. They were sweating, panting and their bodies felt like they were in a fire of ice, it was amazing. Eva was still weak from the waves of pleasure running through her body, began pulling herself upright.
Straddling his hips, this time it was no tease. She sat down hard and now they were one. Eva had been too weak to even turn around. So as they grind together Negi gets quite a show. Eva seized the opportunity to use Negi's hand to spank herself via her strings. She turned around when she got a little more energy. She bounce up and down on him so wildly she neglected the control of her strings and Negi's hands ran over her freely.
After that she began changing their posistion and pace. Negi was on top but he was still just along for the ride. With Eva controling everything from what posistion to how hard her pleasure was unreal. It was like having a animated interactive blow up doll. It wasn't long before once again they were on the edge. She once again got on top of him
Eva slowed down trying to savor it. Grabbing his hands as they grabbed her chest. She didn't have the concentration to use the strings anymore, so she simply grabbed his arms by the wrist and pinned them by his head, leaning down and kissing him. She increased her pace and as they reached the edge she broke the kiss and buried her head in his neck biting him hard. They reached their climax together as she drank from his neck. When her euphoria ended she lifted her head panting as she licked the blood from her lips.
She looked down at Negi just to find him passed out. In her zeal she might have drank just a bit much and she had worked the poor boy pretty hard. So she gave him a soft kiss on the fore head and just for a moment rested her head on his chest. "Thank you for that Negi, you were amazing. Well on the bright side, at least we have a good excuse about what took us so long. I refused carry you all the way back."
Nodoka was in her tent in a sweaty, panting mess. That was even hotter than she'd hoped for. Going through Eva's eyes had certainly been a great idea. The way Eva could keep her mind focus trhough the waves of pleasure was amazing. She must've had some serious experience. Not to mention that watching her dominate Negi like that was a huge turn on. Nodoka herself could never be so forceful, so watching it was that much sweeter.
Another thing that surpirsed Nodokawas how sexual of a being Evangeline was. In her 10 year old form it's easy to forget that she's lived for hundreds of years. The words that went on inside her head were so dirty and hot that even though she was already watching them have sex, it still made Nodoka blush. She hadn't been able to help it and while she watched she took care of her own needs.
Laying in her tent with the smell of sex in the air, Nodoka couldn't help but smile. Now that she'd gotten past the initial hurt of Negi being with another girl she was free to enjoy the show more completely. As she cleaned herself up and exited the tent she thouught to herself.
I wonder who will be next?
hA/N: So Nodoka asks the big question; Who will be next?
You decide who will be Negi's next conquest. And they will be rejoining with the rest of the girls soon so feel free to say anyone. I just ask for no repeats and I have plans for a couple of the girls so...
Here's the list of eligible girls, in no particular order.
Setsuna
Kaede
Mana
Ku Fei
Yuna
Makie
Chisame
Yue
Haruna
Asakura
Anya
Chachamaru, (Hey, robots need love too)
Don't be shy vote for your favorite. And think about what happens if there is a tie. Please 1 vote per person. So don't be like "either ?? or ??".
So there are your contestants, lets see who you're favorites are. It won't be in next chapter because I am going to give you guys some time to vote but I want to keep writing. And you readers without names I accept anon. reviews so feel free to add your oppinion.
Until we meet again.
Donny BlaZe
