I'm sorry that I haven't updated in awhile guys but I was trying to think of ideas. I know that I suck at writing but if you check out my story could you review it just to give me your input. I still don't own twilight or it's characters but I've been trying…. :)

Oh my gosh, I thought the outside was beautiful it's nothing compared to the inside. It had that old nice calming feel but was designer all at the same time. Once you walk in there's a fireplace with a huge flat screen TV hanging above it. The furniture was all white and there was hardwood floors. To the right there was a very spacious looking kitchen. The to the left there was a hall which I think led to the bedroom and bathroom.

"What do you think, love?"

"Oh my gosh Edward it's beautiful, I love it thank you for bringing me here."

"My pleasure, do you want to maybe take a tour of the bedroom?"

The way he looked at me with lust in his eyes and that crooked smile that I love, I got a little wetter, if he kept this up he wouldn't even have to touch me.

"Sure." Damn I really need to learn how to be sexy. Edward can do it so easily, but I have to sound like a bumbling idiot great just great.

He didn't say anything else just took my hand and led me down the hallway. The bedroom was the last door in the hall. The room was equally as beautiful, in the middle there was a huge king size bed with a light blue blanket and white pillows. To the right there was a bathroom and the room was accompanied with beautiful oak pieces.

Edward walked past me and went straight to the bed, he laid on his side with his hand holding his head up. With his other hand he beckoned me to come to him. I stumbled my way over to the bed and stood there looking at the pure beauty in front of me.

"Why don't you come lay down with me this big bed is pretty lonely " He winked at me.

I kneeled on the bed next to him.

"So mam what would you like to do now?"

"Um whatever you wanna do is fine with me."

Not even before I finished speaking Edward was on top of me holding himself up with his hands on either side of my head.

"Wow eager are we."

He chuckled at me. "Bella I've been waiting for this since I've meet you, so yah I'm a little eager.

With that said , he kissed with all the passion I think he held. "I love you Bella so much." He proceeded to kiss me along my neck were he stopped and sucked on my pulse point. "Mhmmm Bella you are amazing."

"Are you trying to kill me."

"Hahaha no silly girl I'm trying to pleasure you."

I heard a loud ripping noise the felt a chill. In one quick motion Edward had ripped the top of my bathing suite.

"Sorry I'll buy you a new one, you are absolutely beautiful love."

He had kneeled up on his knees staring at my chest. I don't understand how he thought I was beautiful I had nothing to offer in that department, I mean I wasn't flat but I was close.

After Edward took a moment to memorize everything on the top half of my body he leaned down and took one of my already erect nipples into his mouth, being overly careful of his teeth. His mouth was cold but still highly pleasurable at the same time. It felt so good, I couldn't help the small moan that came out.

"Do you like that babe?"

After he said that he slightly bit my nipple not hard enough to draw blood but enough that I felt it.

"uhhhhhh"

"I'll take that as a yes." he chuckled

He stopped toying with my breast and I slightly whimpered.

"Ha-ha, Bella what do you want me to do to you?"

I thought about if for a second then responded with something I never thought I would say.

"I want you to tongue fuck me Edward."

I'm very proud of myself I said that with full confidence and didn't even blush. It either shocked him or he found it sexy, because his eyes hot darker and he had a lustful look plastered on his face.

"Mhmm Bella your so fucking sexy."

Edward dirty talking if possible made me wetter.

He started to slowly descend my body leaving a trail of kisses. When he got to my bottoms he started going at an agonizing slow pace.

'Edward could you please stop teasing me I'm going to combust." He didn't need to be told twice he ripped my bottoms of faster than he did the top.

"Oh my god Bella you are so hot it's not funny, I fucking love you."

"Mhm I love you tooo."

"Well Bella I'm going to eat your pussy now."

I cant believe he just said that but I don't care, as he started to kiss my thighs.

"Oh Edward please."

Edward didn't waste any more time as he slowly licked my clit. I moaned out loudly as he stuck one of his long fingers in side of me. When he found his rhythm he added another and started nibbling on my clit.

"Bella you taste so goodd."

He curled his fingers and increased his pace as I started bucking into his face and moaning wildly.

"Mhm Edward right there don't stop!"

He quickly moved his fingers and put his tongue inside of me and rubbed my clit in circles with his thumb. As my moans got louder as his pace increased and he put my right leg up on his shoulder. Which made him go deeper and faster.

"Edwarddd I'm go-nna ccum."

With one more thrust of his tongue I was gone, I arched my back and moaned out Edwards name. When I was down from my high he slowly pulled out of me and hovered over me. He kissed me hard and I felt his tongue on my bottom lip begging for entrance, which I gladly gave. Even though his tongue was just inside of me he tasted amazing, his tongue was soft and gentle but strong and fierce all at the same time. We broke away so I could breath and Edward looked kind of nervous.

"So was it ok for you?"

"Okay? Edward you just gave me the best time of my life of coarse it was okay, no it was more than okay it was fan-fucking-tactic."

"Oh really."

"Was it okay for you?" I blushed

"Bella do you know what you do to me?" He took my hand and guided it to a pretty big bulge in his swim trunks. "Bella this is all from you I want you so bad it hurts."

"I want you to Edward, but you're the one who said w have to wait not me."

"No Bella you were all to eager for that. But I'm trying to give you a little before the wedding I know we both want it."

I rolled over so that I was straddling his hips.

"We'll then Edward I guess I'm going to have to repay you."

"Oh really." He had a playful glint in his eye.

"Yes." I kissed him. "It's your turn.

So what did you think? It's my first lemon so be nice.

Please review my story. know it's long but I got started writing and couldn't stop. But anyways I hope you at least like it.

~ Kayla