Okay, so this one was really fun. I know that I'm posting two in one day, but I couldn't resist! It was so fun!
It is just dialog, I was practicing writing a scene without descriptions, trying to make it so the reader still knows what's going on without making it sound unnatural. I hope it worked, because I was amused!
Tip: Try and read it like they were talking and imagine their voices. It makes me laugh, I don't know about you haha.
Warning: Slash, unless you have an amazing imagination...
Word Count: 298
074. Are You Challenging Me?
"I am not going to say it again."
"Oh come on, please?"
"No! It was a one time thing, be happy with what you got."
"Just say it one more time, one more and I'll leave you alone."
"No."
"Please?"
"No!"
"Please, Master, please?"
"Don't ever say that again."
"But it's what you are! See? These are the puppy dog eyes!"
"You're only doing this to annoy me, and quit with that smile! No smiling for you."
"Aw, Peter, come on! Just say it one more time!"
"No!"
"Fine, I guess that I'm not important enough to you."
"What is that supposed to mean?"
"I guess you wouldn't care if I just cut my anklet right now and ran."
"Neal…"
"Don't fake caring. It doesn't work."
"Neal, wait!"
"No!"
"Neal, I mean it, get back here right now!"
"Are you challenging me?"
"Maybe I am."
"Is that a yes?"
"That's a come over here and find out."
"I like the sound of that."
"Neal, that's not what I-mmph! No, Neal, someone will mmf!"
"Frankly, Peter, I don't really care right now."
"Mmff—nn—Fine! Fine, I'll say it!"
"Haha, say it then."
"You… are the Great Neal Caffrey."
"What? What was that, I couldn't hear you?"
"No."
"Peter, I guess we'll have to start this all over then."
"You are the Great Neal Caffrey!"
"Thank you. I think about the entire office heard that one."
"Are you satisfied?"
"Are you blushing, Peter?"
"I'm taking you back to jail."
Thank you so much for reading! Let me know if you understood the scene, it will help me out in my future writing. Please, drop a review! Tell me what I can improve on, what you liked, what you didn't like, anything. I hope that my experiment worked, haha.
-Edit- I changed the last line, it was more in character. Sorry for spamming your inboxes xP