Hey Gleeks! Here's my 5th chapter:
Chapter 5- Room 305
RPOVI woke up at 8 today, only because it was a Saturday. My parents were at work, so I was here alone. I made myself some breakfast and sat down to watch TV. I was flipping through channels and there was nothing on. I looked out the window. Looks like the mail had already come. I sighed and waked out to get the mail. Finn was also getting his mail he waved to me while walking down to his mailbox. As I waved back he had a scared expression on his face and was running toward me as fast as he could. This is weird… I looked to my right and then I saw it. A big SUV was swerving from side to side out of control in the road. I tried to run away but I was to late. Then everything went black.
FPOV
The car obviously a occupying a drunk driver had not noticed he had hit my Rachel and therefore, he kept driving. I was about to scream at him when I realized I didn't have any time. I ran to her side kneeling beside her. I moved a piece of hair out of her face and put behind her ear. She had a big cut on the side of her head from under her eye to halfway down her neck. "Oh my gosh Rachel." I whispered quickly. I took out my cell phone as quickly as I could and dialed 911. "911 what's your emergency?" the operator asked. I told him the location and what had happened to my Rachel. "People are now on their way." The operator said. I told the woman Thank you and hung up. I quickly dialed my house number to call my mom. "Finn?" my mother asked she sounded confused. "Mom get outside right now!" I told my mom. "Finn sweetie, what's going on? Are you ok?" she asked now concerned. "I am, Rachel's not!" I practically shouted into my phone. Then she hung up.
The next thing I knew my mother was right beside me. She asked me about a million different questions at once including, Did you call 911?, What happened?, Is she breathing? Did you call her fathers? I replied with "Yes, a drunk driver hit her, I don't know, and no." she took my cell phone out of my hand and dialed Rachel's dads numbers. She told them what had happened and to meet us at the hospital. It was then I could hear the sirens in the distance getting closer and closer. The ambulance drove around the corner and stopped in front of us. The driver got out and asked "Is that Rachel Berry." Pointing to Rachel lying on the ground. My mom replied yes. I looked down at her. What if I was faster would I have been able to save her? Would she be conscious right now? I questioned myself. I knew the answers to those questions and they were most likely. I would probably be the one they were loading into the ambulance on a stretcher. But, it would be worth it for my Rachel. The medics let me and my mom ride in the back of the ambulance with them and Rachel.
When we arrived at the hospital they put her in her own room floor 1 room 305. It was horrible watching what they did to her. They gave her two electric shocks and hooked her up to a heart rate machine. They gave her a bunch of shots and she was hooked up to IV. It was heartbreaking seeing her like this.
Me and my mom stayed all day at the hospital with Mr. and Mr. Berry at the hospital. When the doctors told us to leave everyone's eyes were puffy and red and stained with tears. The doctors said Rachel would probably wake up sometime tomorrow morning, so we would all becoming here around 9. Mr. and Mr. Berry thanked me from saving Rachel from any further damage. I need to tell Rachel how I really feel tomorrow morning when she wakes up.
I'm sorry I know it's not the best chapter, but keep in mind it 1 in the morning and I just started and finished writing it so…
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