The Craziest Camp in the World 3
Momma bear walked back to her cave with her cub following close behind her. When she saw the kids lying on her cavern she became furious. These were the same exact kids that had bothered her cub the night before! Now she was gonna get revenge. She walked over to the one kid that had touched her cub and scratched her stomach until blood started pouring from it. The child, or Jennifer, awoke with a jolt feeling the pain. Jennifer saw the bear walk over to Alvin and start dragging him towards the cave exit. She tried screaming but no words came out of her mouth. The bear dragged him over Jenna and Jenna got scratched by the bear on her left arm. She woke up to and almost started screaming she was so scared. The bear then dragged it over Simon but didn't hurt him. He felt something brush against him and saw a huge ten foot tall bear dragging Alvin to the exit of the cave. He tried pulling Alvin, but that just made the bear mad and it stood on its hind legs and knocked Simon down with a hard blow. His glasses fell off and shattered into a billion pieces, and he bumped into Eleanor, who woke up Jeannette when she saw what was going on, who woke up Jenny, who screamed and woke up everyone else. The bear stopped dragging Alvin and ran towards Jenny and knocked the wind out of her. She panicked until she was able to finally breath again, and when she could she started screaming again. Brittany tried running out of the cave but the momma bear just grabbed her by her clothes and threw her up in the air and she landed on top of Alvin who was already unconcious because he had been so scared. Jennifer ignored her bleeding stomach and aching pain and decided to try and scare the bear away. She decided it was too mad to scare at the moment so she tried to kill it instead. She got the bear's attention and it started charging towards her. The bear stood up on its hind legs again when it got to her to frighten her a bit. She ignored it and threw a knife at its exposed belly, making it wince and run away, its cub following not far behind.
"Well I didn't kill it but I hurt it and it got scared enough to run away." Jennifer said. Nobody was listening to her, they were too pysched about what had just happened. Jennifer got out her first aid kit she always carried with her and bandaged everybody that had been scratched or torn up. She threw some water on top of Alvin's face and he gained concious again.
"I think I'm going to have a talk with Max and Lillian about this campsite. I knew it would have wild animals, but this is ridiculous!" Jenna said with a huff. Everyone agreed with her, they wanted to go home as soon as possible. Once they got to the campsite, they saw Max and Lillian lying on separate towels drinking lemonade and chatting with each other.
"Max, you have a lot of explaining to do." Snarled Jenna while Jennifer was tapping her foot to emphasize Jenna's point.
"What did I do wrong?" Max asked all innocent as if he didn't do anything wrong. "Oh and I just called your parents squirts. Dave and Miss Miller are on a trip to the Bahamas for six weeks, so that's how much longer you have to stay at this wonderful camp."
"Max, this is a terrible camp! We just got attacked by a wild bear, it was so scary, and I almost died." Jenna said exxageratedly. Jennifer nodded.
"I lost my glasses and I didn't bring my spare pair with me." Simon said.
"My most favorite clothes just got ripped to shreds." Brittany said.
"I got pulled by a bear and it knocked me unconcious." Alvin said.
"Oh man, I forgot that you squirts were in that cavern, I'm sorry guys." Max said appolegitically.
"Does he call all kids squirts?" Theodore asked Jenny. She nodded.
"Max, you've forgotten very important things before but that was just the last straw. I HATE YOU AND I DON'T WANNA LIVE WITH YOU YOU'RE THE WORST BROTHER EVER I'D RATHER BE LIVING ON THE STREETS THAN LIVE WITH YOU! WHAT HAVE YOU EVER DONE TO BENEFIT OUR LIVES?" The chipmunks and chipettes stared at Jennifer. They had never heard her talk above a whisper, and she never said insulting things to anybody except for Jenna. Jennifer realized everybody was staring at her and ran to her cabin and slammed the door shut. Jenna just shook her head and followed Jennifer, and the chipmunks, chipettes and Jenny just decided to think things through. In a way Jennifer was right, Max was a slacker and he did do something really stupid just now but it was a simple mistake. Had he done other things to make her mad at home before? The chipmunks and chipettes and Jenny hoped things would get better at this camp soon or otherwise they would have the most terrible time of their lives at this camp.
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