Technology Troubles.
Chapter 1
This is my first ever fanfic so don't bug me if it's bad.
Disclaimer: I own nothing!
"blah"=speaking
'blah'=thinking
"blah"=monstrous
One Day Later…
The ICU of the hospital was fairly empty. No huge missions had been taken lately that would put a shinobi at huge risk and have to be admitted to the ward. Thus the doctors and nurses making rounds there had only one patient to care for. One who had been out for a day now.
Inside Bill's room the Third Hokage, Hiruzen Sarutobi sat next to the boy's bed as he had the previous day for a few hours. Needless to say when Kotetsu arrived in his office out of breath and panting about a kid collapsing at the gate he was shocked. Even more so when he found out the kid had extensive wounds and no parents, or any type of guardian around to speak of.
Sarutobi's thought were interrupted however when the patient slowly started waking from his body recovering and the incessant beeping of the HR monitor beside him. "Ugh. Ohhhh, where am I?" Bill groaned.
"You're in a hospital." He sat up quickly not noticing the aged Hokage next to his bed at first. "We found you unconscious at the gate several hours ago."
"Oh, right" Bill said remembering what happened.
"Tell me son, what's your name?" Sarutobi asked.
"Bill Dark and you are?" Bill answered.
"Hiruzen Sarutobi, I am the Leaf Villages' Third Hokage." He said.
"Hokage?" Bill said not knowing what a Hokage was but he had a guess if the robes he wore were anything to go on. "Well from the formal attire I'm guessing it's a position of high power but you can tell me everything later."
"Sure. So tell me Bill, where are you from?"
"…It's complicated and you probably wouldn't believe me" Bill said.
"Try me" The Hokage dared.
Bill told the 3rd his story of his accident over three years ago, how it mutated his DNA, how it split his personality & body in three, when he and his new siblings built their own ships to escape and parted ways, leading up to when the fleet was shot down over the Earth and he wandered for days till he ended up here.
"So that's my story" Bill finished.
"It all seems a little farfetched" The Hokage admitted.
"Yeah I know"
"This accident, how badly did it mutate your DNA?" The Third asked intrigued by it.
"This bad." Bill stood up and started being surrounded by a black energy and his physical appearance started to change. After a couple minuets he had transformed into some kind of 6ft tall turtle monster comparable to Bowser but without the spike collars, a five foot tail, six crystal spikes jutting out of his shell instead of the several smaller ones, a smooth black shell, bigger and sharper teeth and blood red eyes with vertical slits.The Hokage watched in awe at what was taking place before him. It takes a lot to surprise the 3rd Hokage these days and this was a lot.
"Now do you believe me?" The monster Bill said in a very deep and menacing voice that rumbled a little.
"I never said I didn't." The Third said still staring.
"You never said you did either…" The 3rd chuckled when he heard that.
"Well I believe you." He said putting his pipe back in his mouth
"Good the last thing I need is someone thinking I'm crazy" said Bill as he transformed back to human.
"What was that black energy surrounding you?"
"Oh that. That was Dark Energy, my body naturally generates it. It has a lot of uses." He explained.
"Do you have any other abilities?"
"A good number more, but I can't access most of them because of the fighte between me and my brother.. Even my regeneration ability was affected."
"You can regenerate?" The Hokage said in a surprised tone.
"Yeah, but as you can see its working very slowly. That's why I was so beat up." Bill explained.
"Ummhmm." He hummed. "You mentioned a brother. Tell me more about him."
Bill grimaced at the thought of having to explain all his brothers acts against all of creation. All the torture, lives lost and destruction at his hand. "….Can I tell you another time?"
Sarutobi cocked an eyebrow. He would've pressed further but he decided to let it slide since he only just woke up from a 24 hour coma.
"Anyways I was hoping to maybe stay here in the village." He asked.
"Until you are ready to leave?" The Third guessed.
"Nah, I'm tired of wandering between dimensions. I was hoping to stay here permanently, plus I miss solid ground."
"I'm sure I can arrange something, but I'm going to need some information to make you a birth certificate, medical records and…"
"Yeah I get the point. So can I take a look around?" Bill said wanting out of the hospital.
"Well the doctor said you would need a crutch to get around with that leg of yours." He explained.
"That's fine with m…" Bill trailed of and stared into space.
"Bill?" He gave no response as his eyes began to turn red and started growling.
'What is this power? It's enormous! Where is it coming from…" Bill closed his eyes and let his senses show him where the two powers where coming from. 'Impossible! It's coming from a kid!'
"Bill?"
"Huh?" He said snapping out of it
"What was that?" The old man questioned.
"What was what?"
"You just stared at the wall and started growling."
"Oh, it's my beastly instincts kicking in. I found a massive source of power here in this village and it's coming from a kid!"
'Hmm. He's probably found the Kyuubi.' "Why don't you show me?" The Third said intrigued by this.
"All right and after that could I get some new cloths seeing as these are, you know…" He said looking at his clothes.
"Heh heh, of course."
Bill and the 3rd were walking through the village and were attracting some attention, partly because the Hokage is not seen in public often and partly because of the boy in ragged clothes next to him.
"Is the child close Bill?" He asked him.
"Yeah, it's right around the corner."
They turned the corner to a busy marketplace and Bill Picked out a gloomy looking boy with spiky blonde hair wearing a black t-shirt with an orange swirl on the back and a pair of shorts.
Bill pointed to him and said, "That's him." Bill froze again and stared at the boy he saw the power in him and it began to take shape, into a fox. There was a spike in the power and Bill jerked back. "Whoa! I think I saw a fox inside him!" He said. This time it was the Hokage's turn to freeze. "Yo! You alright?" Bill said poking him.
"Uh yeah… I should probably explain." The Third told Bill the story about the Kyuubi and how it attacked and how the Fourth Hokage sealed it into Naruto.
"Why's he looked depressed? He's a hero!" Bill said.
"Almost everyone in the village hates him." The Third said looking sad.
"Why's that?"
"The Kyuubi killed hundreds of people so everyone thinks he's the demon but he wasn't told it's inside him and no one's allowed to speak of it."
"Oh. Now I feel really bad for him." Bill said looking down, not the direction.
Then the Third got an idea. "Naruto come over here."
Naruto looked to where the call came from and immediately brightened up when he saw it was the 3rd.
"Hey old man!" Then he noticed Bill. "Who's this and what happened to him?"
"My names Bill and I was… attacked by bandits." He said quickly thinking up an excuse.
"Whoa cool! Anyways, my name's Naruto Uzumaki!" He said with enthusiasm.
"Heh, nice to meet you." Bill said.
"Nice to meet you too!"
Bill noticed a girl with violet hair wearing a black t-shirt with and a pair of baggy pants and she also had pale pupil less eyes with a little lavender in them.
"Hey old man, who's she?" The 3rd looked and recognized it was Hinata.
Then the Hokage got another idea. "Hinata come here." Hinata shyly came over obviously nervous.
"Hey Hinata!" Her eyes grew wide when she saw who was talking to her.
"Oh umm h-hi N-Naruto." She turned to the 3rd. "Umm y-yes Lord Hokage?"
"I'd like you to meet somebody" The 3rd gestured to Bill and she looked over to him.
Hinata instantly gasped seeing his leg. "W-w-what h-happened to y-you!" She said.
'Boy she really has a stuttering problem.' Bill thought. "My name's Bill Dark and I was attacked by bandits."
"Oh! A-are you g-going to be all right?" She said a little worried.
"Yeah. So are you going to introduce yourself?" He said.
"Oh! Umm I'm Hinata H-Hyuga."
"Nice to meet you." Bill held out his hand to shake but she hesitated. "What? It's polite to shake hands with someone new you meet."
"O-oh s-s-sorry…" She nervously shook his hand.
"It's alright."
"Hey! You didn't ask to shake hands with me!" Naruto said annoyed.
"Look at your hands!" Naruto looks at his hands and sees them covered in dirt and other things.
"Oh" He begins wiping them on his pants.
Bill rolled his eyes. "Hey old man?"
"Hmm?"
"I'm gonna hang out with these guys for a while ok?" Bill said.
"Sure, come to the Hokage Tower to get the key to your apartment when you're done and here's some money for cloths and food."
"Alright" Bill, Naruto and Hinata begin to walk down the street together.
"So, how's about you guys help me with cloths shopping." Bill suggested.
"Ok" They both replied.
As they were walking down the street, Hinata couldn't help but take quick glances at Bill's infected leg.
"Go on ask about it." He simply said.
Hinata jumped when she heard him. 'He-he knew?' "H-how did y-you k-know?" She said surprised.
"I've seen you glancing at it for the past 2 minutes"
"Oh…" She said feeling ashamed.
"I know you're wondering about it you can ask."
"Well… I-I'm act-ually wondering w-w-why y-you're not in the Hospital for y-your wounds." She asked.
"Oh. Well I was until about 20 minutes ago." He answered.
"Really?" Said Naruto.
"Yeah"
"W-when d-did you g-get in?" Hinata asked.
"Don't know. Last thing I remember before passing out was stopping at the gate and seeing two guys by it. They had headbands on. Maybe that was yesterday."
"Oh" they both said in unison.
"How did the bandits get you?" Naruto asked.
"Get caught? Umm…." 'Crap I didn't think of that!' He panicked "…they… ambushed me in the forest." 'Please buy it.' He hoped
"Oh. Y-your p-p-parents must be w-worried about y-you." Hinata stammered, Bill then suddenly looked depressed.
"Bill?" Naruto said.
"Umm w-was it s-something I s-said?" Hinata said worried it might've been her fault.
"No umm it's not your fault. You see I lost my family a long time ago." Bill said solemnly.
"Oh. I-I'm s-sorry." Hinata said. She somewhat knew the feeling.
"It's alright."
"Wait a minute… what were you doing in the forest by yourself?" Naruto said in realization.
"O-oh y-yeah, w-why were y-you?" She said realizing it as well.
"Oh. Well when I lost my family staying in my old home became too painful for me. So I decided to go to the next town and get a job. But then the bandits came, and captured me. I fought my way out in the middle of the night and I was limping around for 3 days." He explained thinking up a somewhat convincing story.
"3 DAYS!" they both cried out in surprise.
"How come your not dead!" Naruto cried.
"I drank the dew on the leaves to stay hydrated." He said.
"W-what about f-food?" Hinata stuttered.
"Didn't eat, didn't sleep neither" Bill said.
"WHAT!" They both shouted.
"You must be starving!" Naruto yelled.
'Grrrrrroooowwllllllll.' "W-what was t-that?" Hinata said.
"Oh, umm. That was my stomach, heh heh." Bill said smiling sheepishly.
"Well I know a place that serves the best ramen in the world! To Ichiraku's!" Naruto yelled and dragged them both in the direction of the ramen stand.
Hours later Bill finished his cloths and food shopping and had had at least 30 bowls of ramen at Ichiraku's and everyone was amazed he could eat so much. It was late by the time they were done so they said their goodbye's and went their separate ways, except for Naruto who offered to carry a couple bags home for him but they first had to stop at the Hokage's office.
"Thanks for helping with the bags Naruto." Bill thanked.
"Ah it was nothing, besides you couldn't do it yourself with that leg." He joked playfully.
"Heh, that's true!" They shared a laugh for a while. "Are we almost there?" Bill asked.
"Yeah take a right at this next street." He directed. As they turned the corner a big red building came into view. "Is that it?" Bill asked staring at it.
"Yep" Naruto answered.
Bill set down his bags with a grunt and said, "Let's take a break."
"Ok"
Then suddenly a glass bottle fly's out of nowhere. "Look out!" Bill pushed Naruto out of the way right before it whizzed behind them and shattered against the wall.
"Sweet mother of God, who threw that?" Bill yelled.
"Hey!" A man yelled. "Why'd you save him? He's a demon so let him take his punishment!"
"Why should I? Naruto's done nothing wrong!" Bill yelled back emphasizing his name.
"He killed my Wife! He killed hundreds of innocent people! He deserves this!" The man threw another bottle. Naruto cringed waiting for the hurt to come, but it didn't. Bill had caught the bottle in his hand and looked really pissed!
"Ok, now, I'm, ANGRY!" He screamed the last word and that made everyone watching flinch.
Hinata was making her way to the Hokage building looking for Naruto and Bill. She had gotten something while she was with them and left the bag with them by mistake.
"Why should I? Naruto's done nothing wrong!" She heard from around the corner.
'That sounded like Bill.' She thought recognizing the voice. 'What's going on?' She turned the corner and found a bunch of people surrounding something. She found a gap in the crowd and scooted to the front. Hinata was shocked to find Bill facing a man with Naruto on the ground behind him. Hinata was still puzzled until she saw the broken glass bottle behind them.
'That man, attacked Naruto? But… why?' She thought not understanding what's going on.
The man started yelling, "He killed my Wife!"
"W-what?" She gasped.
"He killed hundreds of innocent people! He deserves this!"
'This doesn't make any sense. Naruto's never killed anybody.' She thought now afraid.
The man threw another bottle at Naruto and Hinata not being able to watch covered her eyes. She waited for the sound of breaking glass but instead heard gasps throughout the crowd. She slowly opened her eyes and saw the cause for the gasps. Bill had caught the bottle in his hand and had a look on his face that was filled with such rage it caused everyone to take a step back.
"Ok, now, I'm, ANGRY!" He screamed that last word and it was filled with so much anger and hatred that it made everyone watching flinch.
"Heh. You don't scare me!" The man said even though he knew he was close to wetting himself.
"You'll be scared soon."
He then crushed the bottle in his hand and that was enough to scare him and everyone else even more.
"I-I'll beat you to a pulp!" He charged at Bill and he simply stepped aside. "Hold still brat!" The man swung at Bill again and again and Bill just side stepped every time. "I said hold still!" He swung at him again but this time Bill caught his arm.
"I've got you now" Bill said in a deathly calm tone.
With one punch to the gut he sent the man flying clear across the street. Everyone looked to where the man landed and to their amazement he was knocked out.
"Well I was hoping that I wouldn't have to do that but he wouldn't let up."
"Naruto! Bill!"
"Hinata?" They both said.
"A-are y-you guys a-all right?" She asked still a little shaken.
"I'm fine thanks." said Bill.
Naruto slowly got up. "I'm fine too" Bill could tell the man's words took a toll on Naruto emotionally but he wouldn't show it.
"Umm N-Naruto…" Hinata said timidly.
"What is it Hinata?"
"Nothing that man said was true right? You've never killed anyone before right?" She asked. She wanted to believe what he said wasn't true but the words still hung fresh in her mind.
"What? No! I've never killed anyone in my life!" He cried.
"T-then why d-did he s-say all t-that?"
"I don't know… Everyone just, hates me." Naruto said looking down.
"Oh…" 'That… That's so sad. He doesn't even know why.' She thought sadly
But the next thing she saw was even worse. When she looked back at Naruto she saw a tear rolling down his cheek.
"N-Naruto, are y-you crying?"
"N-no... Sniff. …I've just got something in my eye." It was too much for her to handle at that point and out of pure impulse, she hugged him.
"Wha-" Naruto was surprised at what was happening and he wasn't sure what to do but it seemed like his arms moved on their own and he hugged her back.
'I… I'm hugging Naruto, and he's hugging back!' She thought excitedly.
'What's going on? Why do I feel so… warm?' Naruto thought trying to process this strange new feeling.
"Ahem." They looked over to Bill. "Not to, ahem, break the moment…" Then they both realized they were still holding each other and they broke apart blushing madly. "…but I've got to get the key to my apartment and Hinata you forgot this." He handed her the bag of stuff she got while they were shopping.
"T-thank you Bill. Mind if I help?" She offered.
"No problem." They got to the Hokage's office without further incident and a note on the door saying his apartment was right next to Naruto's and he enrolled him in the same ninja academy class as them. This made Naruto very happy that his new friend would be in the same class as him. Bill grabbed the key and Naruto explained the ninja academy to him on the way to his apartment. Once they got the bags to Bill's apartment Hinata had to go and this time she didn't forget her bag. Then he and Naruto went to their own beds as well.
"Yawn!" Bill yawned still sleepy. 'Well, it's my first day at the Academy better get ready.'
After he had changed into some green plad pants and a white t-shirt and tennis shoes, showered, eaten, grabbed his crutch and the set of kunai, shuriken, scrolls and other things he bought yesterday, he set off for the Academy and met Naruto along the way.
"Hey Bill!" Naruto greeted with his usual enthusiasm.
"Hey Naruto." Bill said.
"Ready for your first day at the Academy?" He asked.
"Yep but I have one question."
"What?"
"What's it like in there?" Bill asked.
"It's sooooo boring but I try to spice things up a little." Naruto said.
"How so?" Bill said intrigued.
"With some pranks like, whoopee cushions or a tack in his chair…" Naruto said naming off the things he'd done.
"I can do better than that!" Bill boasted.
"Oh yeah?" Naruto challenged.
"Yeah. Just go to get an apple and some paper and I'll get some water and paint."
"Uh alright." Naruto said slightly confused and they both went to get their items.
Later they met at the front of the Academy with the items.
"So what are we gonna do with all this?" Naruto questioned.
"Shit bomb." Now Naruto was interested. "I'll mix the water, paint and paper to make it look like crap and then you cut the apple open, pour it in, I'll slap an explosive tag on it, and cover it with red paint. Then you are going to put it on his desk when he's not looking and when the time is right BOOM! He'll be covered in what he thinks is crap!" Bill explained nearly cracking up.
"That's great! Oh! Put these chunks of meat in it too!" Naruto said pulling out an instant ramen cup.
"I like your thinking! Just remember to put, the darker side towards him."
"Got it."
"And if I read the instructions right, I use the ram seal to set it off right?" Bill asked.
"Yup." Naruto confirmed.
"This is going to be great!" After their preparations were made to the apple they went inside for class.
"Alright everyone take your seats." Iruka said. "Today we have a new student." Chatter instantly started about who the new guy was. "Come on in." In walked a kid with tennis shoes, plad pants, a grey t-shirt and was covered in a lot of bandages and using a crutch.
The girls started whispering to themselves. "Isn't that the boy from yesterday?" "He's kinda cute." "I wonder what happened to him?" "He's really strong. He knocked out a man with one hit and he didn't get hurt!" Were some things.
"Why don't you tell us a little about yourself?" Iruka suggested.
"Ahem. My name is Bill Dark, I'm not from this village, and I like pizza, ramen, and soda, but especially pizza. I'd tell you more but I'm too tired right now, I'm surprised I got out of bed this morning."
'I like this guy already.' Thought a lazy looking boy with a spiky ponytail.
"Tell us what happened to you already!" Said a boy with a white dog on his head.
"Kiba, be quiet!" Iruka yelled.
"Well if you must know dogboy…" Snickering was heard throughout the room. "…I was attacked by bandits." This started up murmurs in the room.
"I don't believe it." "He beat bandits?" "He's so strong…" "Wow bandits…" Some people whispered.
"Well take a seat anywhere Bill."
"Kay." Bill took a seat in the upper middle section directly across from Naruto.
"Alright now today's lesson is on Genjutsu." Iruka-Sensei turned away from the class to the chalkboard. Bill caught Naruto's eye and nodded. He nodded back knowing what to do. He quickly dashed up to the desk and placed the apple[bomb] there with the dark part facing him. Iruka-Sensei turned back and noticed the apple on his desk.
"Oh!" Thinking a nice student put it there he grabbed it to take a bite.
'Almost there' Bill thought. 'A little more' Iruka-Sensei was just about to bite the apple when… 'Now!' Bill made the ram seal and the apple exploded and Iruka-Sensei was covered in what everyone thought was crap.
"AHHHHHH!" The whole class burst into laughter. "NARUTO! Get down here now!" He yelled.
"Oh man that was great!" Bill roared.
"You too?" Iruka said surprised.
'Uh-oh!' Bill thought.
"Get down here!"
Later at lunch Naruto and Bill were recounting the events that happened only recently.
"I can't believe you didn't get detention! You're lucky you're new here." Naruto said a little jealous.
"I know but did you see the on his face when it blew up!"
"Yeah, that was great!" They both burst into laughter.
"Umm, c-can I s-sit here?" Said a timid voice. They stopped for a moment to see who it was.
"Sure you can sit here Hinata!" Naruto said. Hinata blushed and replied with a quiet "ok."
"So what did you think?" Bill asked.
"Huh?"
"The prank!"
"Oh umm, I-it was p-p-pretty g-good." She complimented.
"Thanks!" said Naruto. Hinata blushed even more.
"Hey!" They looked up and saw Kiba and two other boys approaching the table.
"What is it Dogboy." The two boys and Naruto started chuckling.
"Shut up!" He yelled.
"Whew! Make that dogbreath!" Bill said fanning the air in front of him. This just made them laugh harder.
"I said shut it!" Kiba yelled.
"You too idiot!" That got Naruto mad.
"I'm not an idiot!" Naruto said standing up.
"Yes you are! You're an idiot idiot idiot!" Kiba chanted.
"Shut up! One day when I'm Hokage you'll regret this!" Naruto said.
"You'll never be Hokage!" Kiba accused.
"Why not?"
"Because I'm going to be Hokage!" By this time people were gathering around them.
"No I will!" Naruto said.
"No you won't! No one would make a retard Hokage!" Kiba countered. This hit Naruto hard and got Bill mad.
"HEY! Don't call Naruto a retard! Have you ever seen a retarded person?" Bill said standing in front of Naruto.
"Yeah he's right behind you!" That hit Naruto even harder and just made Bill madder.
"Naruto is NOT a retard! I have seen a retarded person and he's standing right in front of me!"
"What? I am not a retard!" Kiba yelled.
"What you say is what you are!" Bill chanted.
"Hey!"
"I know what a retarded person is like! They can't take care of themselves, they're mentally impaired and they need someone to help them with most everything!"
"Exactly what Naruto is!" Kiba said twisting his words. Now Naruto was shaking uncontrollably and was on the verge of crying.
"What! He is not!" Bill's temper was rising by the second.
"Yes he is! He can't take care of himself, his grade suck and he needs someone to do everything for him except eat!" Bill was getting way beyond pissed off, Naruto was shaking even more and all Hinata could do was watch.
"Will you shut up!" Bill yelled.
"Why just because what I'm saying is true?" Small tears had begun to run down Naruto's face.
"It is not!"
"It is so!"
"Is not!"
"Is so!"
"Is not!"
"Is s- wait your right." Kiba said getting a thoughtful look.
"Huh?" Bill said puzzled.
"He's way beyond retarded!" "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Everyone in the crowd was laughing including Kiba, Naruto was breaking down fast, Hinata felt like she couldn't do anything and Bill had had enough.
"SHUT UP!" Everyone stopped laughing immediately surprised at the change in his voice. "I have had enough of this! I haven't even gone through my first day here and I already found someone I hate! All you've done so far is nearly pushing Naruto over the deep end and I'm sick of it!"
Kiba was getting scared but was trying not to show it. "Y-you really think a little voice change is going to scare me?"
"Maybe not but this might."
"What are you talking abo-" Before he could finish Bill took in a deep breath and let out a monstrous roar that sounded very similar to a T-Rex and literally blew Kiba across the room! Everyone in the room was scared stiff at what just happened, including Naruto.
"Well he had it coming" Bill said his voice back to normal.
"H-h-how d-did you d-do t-that?" Asked Hinata still a little shaken from it.
"Which, the voice or the roar?"
"B-both"
"Well I practiced lowering my voice to scare anyone that gets me really mad and the roar, is something for another time." He said.
"W-wow"
"I know" He said.
"Hey Naruto are you ok?" Bill said.
"Y-yeah. I-I'm gonna go." He said and started to slowly walk out of the room.
"Alright…" When Naruto left the room Bill turned to Hinata. "Alright Hinata I can tell you like Naruto." Hinata's eyes went wide.
"I-is it t-that obvious?"
"Yeah sorta. It's a wonder he hasn't noticed yet." He noticed her looking in the direction Naruto left. "You're worried about him aren't you?" She just nodded.
"D-do you th-think he's al-alright?" She said worry evident in her voice.
"I don't know, though he probably isn't after what Dogbreath said about him. Retard is a strong word." Hinata just nodded again. "A little advice. If you want him to notice you, one kick the stuttering habit and two, show him you care about him." She nodded understanding and walked off to where Naruto went.
After class Bill and Hinata were waiting outside the Academy for Naruto. After about an hour or so he finally did come out and Hinata said she had to get home and left in a hurry.
"Come on Bill let's go." Naruto said.
"You go on ahead I'll catch up" Naruto just shrugged and left. Bill started in the direction Hinata went. 'There was something strange the way she ran home…' He thought and started after her.
He eventually caught up to her and stayed far enough away so she didn't notice. After half an hour of tailing her she arrived at the Hyuga Compound. Bill hid on the roof and watched Hinata approach a man in formal robes
'This must her father." He deducted.
"You're late." He said with a steely voice.
"I-I know f-father, I w-was waiting f-for an f-fri-" She attempted to explain.
"No excuses!" He yelled.
"Y-yes f-father." She said looking down.
"And stop your stuttering it shows weakness." Hinata cringed at the last word.
"Y-y-yes f-f-f-father." Then Hiashi hit her.
"Didn't I tell you to stop with that stuttering! Go to your room we'll discuss your punishment later." He demanded.
"Y-y-y-yes f-father…" she started towards her room when she was stopped by a familiar voice.
"Is that any way to treat your daughter?" Bill jumped down from the roof in front of Hinata.
"Who are you boy?" Hiashi demanded.
"My name is Bill Dark. I'm a friend of Hinata's"
"Well leave here now. This is a family matter."
"I don't care! You don't have the right to hit her just because she's late!" Bill said.
"I will treat my daughter the way I see fit!"
"Well then in my book you're a terrible father treating her like that!" Bill shouted.
"What gives you the right to criticize me! I'm the head of the Hyuga Clan!"
"And again I don't freakin' care!" Bill walked over to Hinata. "Come on Hinata you're not staying here."
"What gives you the right to take my daughter away?" Hiashi said.
"My right as a friend! I'm not letting her stay with someone that treats her more like trash than human!"
Hiashi stepped in their way. "I will not let you leave here with my daughter."
"Then I guess I'll have to fight you!" 'I hope I can still do this' Bill placed his hands on the ground and concentrated.
'A summoning? No there were no hand signs.' Hiashi thought. A blue glow emanated from where Bill's hands were. 'What is this?' Hiashi thought and got into the Hyuga fighting stance. Seemingly out of the ground Bill pulled out a huge hammer with a big square head one square foot on the front and back face, a foot and a half in length and a 2 inch wide, 2 ft long handle. 'A hammer?'
Bill swung the hammer over his head and brought it down yelling, "Thunderclap!" The hammer hit the ground and a loud boom issued from the contact spot.
A visible shock wave of air and electricity came from it and then, "AHHHHHHH!" Hiashi cried out in pain as he was electrocuted. After a second he stopped and fell to the ground. Hinata let out a gasp.
"Don't worry…" In another flash of blue light the hammer was gone. "…I only did enough to cause a chemical imbalance in his brain. The kind that knocks you out, he'll be fine and should wake up in the morning." Bill assured and Hinata breathed a sigh of relief. "Grab your things we'll go to the Old Man, maybe he can sort something out for ya." She just nodded and dashed to her room.
Later at the 3rd's office Bill had told the 3rd what he had seen and done. He was puzzled how he had pulled a hammer out of the ground but Bill told him it was another one of his abilities. Thankfully Hinata was waiting outside and didn't hear what he said about that part.
"So that's the story." Bill finished up.
"Interesting, you were able to beat the head of the Hyuga with one strike in your state. That isn't an easy feat you know."
"I understand that, I think. So I think Hinata should have an apartment of her own, maybe the other one next to Naruto's?" He suggested. Hinata blushed at the thought of living so close to Naruto. "Also did you find out anything about the… you know. Hinata listened more intently trying to find out more.
"No, I haven't found anything yet, Hiashi wasn't very cooperative." "Oh." "But I'll keep looking; I'm as interested in this as you are. Here's the key to her apartment, right next to Naruto's."
"Wait, shouldn't this have taken more time? You know cause of the paperwork?" Bill said puzzled.
Let's just say a little bird told me she would need it so I filed it in advance." Sarutobi hinted.
Bill still had questions but decided they could wait till later and walked out of the office to Hinata. "Here it's the key to your apartment." He said handing her it.
"O-oh thanks." She said.
"Come on lets go." She picked up her bag and followed him to her apartment
The end of the first chapter! Sorry for all the rewrites but it needed it. Anyhow I demand reviews! Flames are ok, I want constructive criticism but please no multi-paragraph rants.