Authors note: Okay so I kinda feel I might have upset some people in the last chapter letting that guy get away / But there's a reason for it :3 Oh and the reason the writings a little bad is because I'm typing fast and I'm half asleep ... Anyways uhmmm ... I need a name for the guy who shall be un named for this chapter and I'm being stubborn but easy , Can I please have three reviews ? I know it makes me sound desperate but I kind of am I need feedback and pointers on how to make the characters seem more like themselves / okay so sorry for ranting *Bows* heres the next Chapter
Chapter 2:
*Hatori*
I heard Kyo snap a couple of curses under his breath, the officer turned to face him.
"Um Sir do you think you could give us a description of the guy?" the officer asked embarrassed.
"Yea, shady looking small beard black hair almost a military cut, he was a little built he was wearing sweats and it looks like his nose may have been broken before." Kyo snapped at him but the officer seemed to understand why and didn't yell at him.
"Well Officer if thats all I would like to get these two home." I said to the officer
"Yeah, keep them home from school for a little too until then what is your number if I need to contact you." The officer replied.
"Mine is (716) 338-2893 Kyo's is (716) 352-8893." I gave him the numbers and Kyo walked the half awake Tohru to the car.
"Thank-you and have a good day." The officer said as he got in his car and left, I walked to my car and got in.
"Don't say anything." Kyo snapped from the back seat as I looked back I saw that Toru was using his lap as a pillow.
"I wasn't I'm not Shigure or Ayame." I replied.
"Whatever." He turned his head away from me towards the window but I could still tell he was blushing.
*?*
I woke up on the ground and saw the orange haired brat who knocked me out talking with a police officer, I didn't think twice now was my chance, I got up and ran for the trees in the direction of his house. He told me once I was done trying even if I managed to fail I had to report what happened. The run there was longer then it seemed because I was hiding in the shadows of whatever I could find, crouching when I heard a car or someone else. Once I got closer to the house I had to be extra careful not to be seen, that was harder then it sounded. I went to the wall of the inner area of the house and crept through the broken corner, as I made my way to his house my body was shaking I was afraid of what he might do to me when I told him I failed at getting the girl. I walked up to his house carefully and opened the door, I walked into his room and saw him sitting there looking un-amused. I braced myself and took a deep breath
"Master Akito?"
Dunh dunh duuunnnnh!
Sorry it was so short I have a bad case of writers block because I am also working on a short story for my English class -_-"... but I hope to be over it soon ;) ... I know its kind of stereotypical that the mystery guy works for Akito but I figured who else would want Tohru gone in the meanest way possible. I'm going away from wed-sun of the March break so I cannot type then but if I get enough reviews I have time for 2/3 more chapters if I make them long ... if there short I can update them every day but Please can I get a few more reviews ?
Special thanks to KashinoXIchigo4ever for being my first reviewer ! :D