Hello everyone,
I didn't have the heart to replace my first fanfic, so this is the edited version of what i first wrote. Thank You 9peggy for the review. Your kind words are greatly appreciated.
I'll never forget what he did to me. Unforgivable and all for what? Money! That merciless, cruel monster! His betrayal, the tears I shed because of him, the sorrow that washed over me; as soon as he strikes.
"I feel so...."
It's the agony I get whenever I think about him, that leaves me lifeless and limp. He had cradled my heart in his sweet loving embrace, holding it ever so softly; affectionately. An illusion. He deceived me.
He willingly dropped my heart as if it were something to be rid of instead of treasured. He let it go SPLAT! " the awful sound" on the cold ground, all the love he had nurtured within me, oozed out never to return. It seeps into the snow, dyeing it a grotesque crimson. My soul returns to the Earth.
"It hurts...I'm so cold."
Never will that hollow gap in my chest heal. It will always be a reminder of my end. The bastards mark. Never in my life, would I have thought it would end like it did. How could I have known? He was so cunning, he could have been an actor.
All along I believed he loved me too, but then again you never really know someone until you've seen their flaws. The one thing both have in common. Only his were carefully hidden and I never took advantage of them.
"Why does my heart ache?"
I gave him everything, my love, the family jewels and a satchel of gold. When he said to bring the family fortune and meet him by the graveyard there should have been warning bells ringing. I assumed we were to elope.
"I can't breathe."
I should have questioned his reason, I should have been prepared. But no, my vision was clouded by a false love. A one-sided love.
I should have been stronger than that… Why didn't I listen to my father when he told me to stay away from him? Why did I let this happen? Why did he have to take my dreams away?
"It's dark...why aren't you with me..."
A life ends and another begins...