To molly547: It's hard to be in character if there weren't many episodes for this show to begin with, you know? And how are they too out of character? It's not like I made them do anything ridiculous. I actually took conversations from the show and tweaked them only a tiny bit. Too short? I've seen stories with under 200 words, these are all 1,000+ . If you don't like it, go read fanfics that get a lot of reviews but are really horrible! People happen to like this, so instead of just saying it's out of character, maybe list some ways of how. P.S. It's hard to be 100% true to the character. I'm not the writer of the show, so of course they don't say exactly what they say in the show!
On to chapter 5! I usually don't like to do multiple point of views for the same situation, but it's kind of stuck with me now, haha. Two updates today, wow! I'll work on my book a little more after this and then post a little preview for it. It is at it's very first stage, so it may not be as good as it could be!
Falcon was happy that he wasn't checking out today, which meant that he could just lay down and relax, instead of worry about getting up so early. He was still in town for a few more days.
Just as his eyes were starting to close, his cell phone rang. "What, Steven?" He grumbled.
"It's Caroline, actually."
"Oh, Caroline, hey."
"What is your room number?"
"30." He figured she'd be here to see Steven, but he would probably be back by the time she'd be here, so not telling her that he wasn't here should be fine.
"Okay. Do you mind if I stop by?"
"Of course not. I'll see ya later."
"Bye." He hung up the phone and then went to lay back down.
When he heard a knock at the door, he went to go answer it. "Caroline." He gave her a hug, and then led her into the room. They both sat down on the couch. "So, Steven's with Tom?"
She nodded. "Yup."
"Have you talked to him about, you know, the legal stuff?"
"No. We barely saw each other for five minutes. ...I was hoping that he would go out to dinner with me tonight so that we could at least talk about how long he is staying. I wouldn't want to Tom to get excited and then find out Steven was going back to Hawaii, you know what I mean?"
"Yeah." He nodded. "I could text him if you want."
"Sure." She said.
Falcon texted a quick message to Steven: Caroline wants to know if you want to go to dinner tonight. She wants to talk more about Tom. (Aka, she wants it from you, BAD!) ~Love Falcon :)
Falc, I highly doubt that. Sure, I guess. I can't really deny anything that has to do with information on my son… Wow, it's just weird saying my son.
Falcon nodded.
"Great."