Me: Chapter two of Runaway Love. I'm not sure how good this is gonna be but please no negative reviews. I worked hard on this and dont like 500 word reviews telling me how bad my writting is. The disclaimer is in Chater 1
My name is Ash
I'm only ten years old.
I'm steady trying to fighure why the world is so cold.
Why I'm not handsome and nobody seems to like me
Acholic step-dad always wanna strike me
Yells and abuses
Leaves with some bruises
Teachers ask questions
I'm making up excuses
Bleeding on the inside crying on the out
There's only one girl really knows what I'm about.
Her name is Dawn and we became friends
Promised we would always be tight until the end
Until one day Dawn got shot
A drive by bullet went astray on the block
Now I'm stuck up in the world on my own
Forced to think that hell is a place called home
Nothing else to do but get my clothes and pack
I say "I'm gonna runaway and never come back."
Ash looked at his handi work, sighed, and grabbed his back pack. Pikachu hopped onto his shoulder and the quietly, slipped down the side f the house thanks to the Ivy that grew alongside the walls, and took off down the street, never looking back and never saying goodbye.
Me:End of chapter two. Stick around for the third and final chapter.
One star = you need to work on it...alot
Two stars = I liked it but it needs a bit f work
Three stars = It was pretty good
Four stars = I liked it
Five stars = OMG I LOVED IT
Me: I hop you enjoyed it!
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