Authors note

Hey I just want to say I'm currently working on the 6th chapter of Change in the wind but I so have a really big problem. I've got a bit of a writer's block and I would really like to know what you guys think of my story before I continue.
I know it's not the best story in the world but it would mean a lot to me if you can give me some suggestions to make the story better in the next chapter. I really would like some feedback to what you think, I don't want to change that much of the plot or characters but any suggestions you can give me would be greatly apresiated, I will get to finishing the 6th chapter soon as possible, thank you.

Note: I apologize for making dozens of my own characters but I can't help it when I make one I always find another to go with it, but I am trying my best for it to sound believable.