How Onewhisker Got His Warrior Name
I hope you enjoy this story and all reviews loved !~
Author's Note: Thanks to all those ideas about what my future chapters shall be! I've decided that I'd be doing all of them (after I think about what to write for that cat, of course) and if you have any other suggestions, again, don't hesitate to ask. Next chapter, I shall be writing about Barkface (decided by both bookworm2091 and Kendall'sgirl234) and then I'll write about Lionheart (suggested by Gabalot) and then I'll think about what to write for my other chapters afterwards. Plus, who was the leader when Onepaw was an apprentice? I'm just going to put Heatherstar, but I don't know whether she was the leader at that time. Anyways, enjoy, read and review (reviewing is optional; I don't force people/cats to review)!
One day, Onepaw was stalking around in the bare hills of the WindClan territory. He was searching for prey; it was part of his assessment to become a warrior. In fact, it was his last one, as Heatherstar was going to make him a warrior that day. Suddenly, he noticed something hiding in the tall grass. Onepaw was sure it was a rabbit, so he leaped and sank his teeth into his 'prey', only to realise that it was Tornpaw.
"What the hell?" snarled Tornpaw. He shook himself and blood started dripping down. "That hurt! Now my mentor's never gonna make me a warrior because of this!"
"Soree…" Onepaw muttered. "Not like I care…"
"Oh yeah?" Tornpaw quickly ran towards Onepaw and pulled a whisker off. Onepaw shrieked, "That hurt, mouse-brain!"
"I'll just keep pulling your whiskers off, then!" Tornpaw tugged at another whisker, which fell off immediately. Onepaw yowled with pain and clawed Tornpaw on the ear. Tornpaw already had a torn ear on his left, so Onepaw clawed at Tornpaw's right ear. It was now Tornpaw's turn to howl at the pain.
"This is revenge, furball!" he snarled, pulling at yet another whisker.
"OW!"
TUG!
"OWWWW!"
TUUGG!
"OW! OW! OOOWWW!"
Soon, Onepaw had practically no whiskers left apart from one on his left side of the face. He growled, "I'm going to get that right ear of yours and tear it apart!"
"Oh no you couldn't," Tornpaw meowed, grinning. "I'll just—"
Too late, for Onepaw had just clawed Tornpaw's ear off. "This is what you get for making me lose all my whiskers!"
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TWO DOING TO EACH OTHER?" Heatherstar just appeared from a few mouse-tails away from where the two apprentices were doing their fighting.
Onepaw wailed, "Tornpaw took all my whiskers off apart from the only one on my left side of the face!"
"Onepaw clawed my other ear off," Tornpaw complained.
"Geez," Heatherstar sighed. She glared at Tornpaw. "You know, I was going to name you Tornear for when you were a warrior, but now it seems I can't call you that anymore."
"Then what am I going to be called?" Tornpaw demanded.
"We'll find out back at camp," Heatherstar replied.
…
"From this day onwards, Onepaw will be known as Onewhisker, for he has only one whisker."
"Hahahaha!" Tornpaw cracked up and started rofming {you know what rofming is, right? To those who don't know, it's rolling on floor meowing. Plus, this is the last time I'm going to repeat that} while mewing, "Onewhisker! What a laugh!"
Onewhisker was so embarrassed that he ran away crying in the nursery.
"Tornpaw was meant to be named Tornear for the fact that he had a torn ear," Heatherstar announced to the rest of WindClan. "But now, because he has lost both ears, I will have to say this: from this day onwards, Tornpaw will be known as Tornbothears."
"WHAT THE ****? WHAT KIND OF A NAME IS THAT?" Tornbothears was totally outraged as the rest of the Clan laughed.
"You lost both ears," Heatherstar pointed out. "So that's why you are called Tornbothears."
Tornbothears was, too, embarrassed and he joined Onewhisker in the nursery.
"That concludes the meeting," Heatherstar declared. "You can congratulate Onewhisker and Tornbothears in the nursery."
…
So what did you think of that? It wasn't very hard to think of something for Onewhisker. Personally, I think the Tornbothears part was the funniest…hehe. All reviews welcome and thanks for reading this story. I will try to update as soon as I can, so be patient! Thank you!~
If you have any other ideas, just tell me. Buh bye! XD
