Hey, guess what! I finall did more work on that plot part! Which means I wrote the plot around the transcript of the first episode of season 6! It's easier said than done, trust me on that! Well, enjoy, read/review, and please don't hate. This isn't my best writing because I had to confine it within the important points of this episode.
Oh, and... DOCTOR WHO IS ON TONIGHT! Who else is excited? Because I. Am. Freaking. OUT!
Oh, and a little comments game. Tell me what you think the last chapter was about (who was The Man, for example, and why was Madame. K. associating with him. I'll PM you your answers!) ^.^
I am not Steven Moffat.
The Doctor and David stepped out of the TARDIS, both praising her for actually going where she was needed.
"Now," The Doctor began as a large bus pulled up, "all you have to do is pretend to be me. Shouldn't be too hard."
David nodded, pulling on a Stetson that he borrowed from the TARDIS wardrobe. Small beads of sweat were forming on his brow, and he wiped tham away with an almost violent swipe of his hand. The Doctor gazed at him, once again second-guessing his decision. David gave him what he hoped to be a reassuring smile as Amy's voice echoed across the copper nothingness.
"Thanks!" The Doctor and David saw her waving wildly and chuckled quietly, momentarily forgetting the tension thickly coating the air.
"This is it, yeah? The right place?" Amy looked around uncertainly as David clapped the Doctor on the shoulder and went to lean on the hood of a conveniently placed cherry red station wagon, his labored breathing refusing to be controlled.
The bus drove off, leaving a trail of dust for the Doctor to choke on while he ran back to the TARDIS. He climbed into the console room quietly, hoping the perception filter would be enough to hide her until David, Amy, and Rory stopped paying attention. His conscience weighed heavier on him than it had a year ago. He almost wished for his childhood, back when he was on Gallifrey and the Timelords were great and kind and wonderful. But that change was why he had to do this.
Rory looked around for a moment. "Nowhere, middle of? Yeah, this is it."
David coughed before plastering a ridiculous smile on his face. He tipped his hat and spoke. "Howdy!"
Amy and Rory turned around, giant grins splitting their faces once they saw David, and Amy called out, "Doctor!"
David turned, his smile turning lightly forced as he prepared to put on a show. He laughed and spun around, hugging Amy as he spoke. "It's the Ponds! Pond One and Pond Two! Hello, Ponds, come here!" David had a brief flash of how easy it would be to take over the Doctor's life, his friends, his adventures, his love, before shoving it to the back of his mind. Just because he had been one of the Gangers during that storm didn't mean he had to act like it.
"So someone's been a busy boy then, eh," Amy said, mockingly stern, to the Ganger.
"Did you see me?" David jumped giddily, something he knew for a fact the Doctor enjoyed. Now, he wasn't quite enjoying acting like him. Maybe it's just what I have to do. Nobody likes to die.
"Of course," Amy scoffed
"Stalker!" David laughed as Amy fixed his bowtie.
"Flirt," Amy retorted.
Rory looked at David and raised his hand slightly, reminding him, "Husband."
David gasped in delight and gripped Rory in an obnoxious bear hug. "And Rory the Roman! Oh, come here!"
Rory looked at David and remarked sarcastically, "Hey, nice hat."
David looked at him proudly. "I wear a Stetson now, Stetsons are cool."
Suddenly, a gunshot was fired and the Stetson flew off David's head. Amy, Rory, and David turned around and saw River Song. She smiled and blew on the muzzle of the gun.
"Hello, sweetie."
River and David sat down at a booth in the retro diner while Amy and Rory went to get drinks. They took out their diaries and River flipped through hers.
River pointed at a page. "Right then, where are we? Have we done Easter Island yet?"
David hastily flipped through the diary given to him by the Doctor. What do I do? What do I do? What do I do? Ah, here it is! "Yes, I've got Easter Island!"
River smiled. "They worshipped you there! Have you seen the statues?"
David panicked for a moment, flipped to a later page and asked, "Jim the Fish?"
River smiled fondly, unaware of David's discomfort. "Oh, Jim the Fish! How is he?" David breathed a sigh of relief before realizing that she wanted an answer. He began covertly scanning the passage on Jim the Fish.
Rory and Amy walked over and sat down with the sodas and David muttered what he hoped was an intelligent response. "Still building his dam."
Rory looked between the two travelers in confusion. "Sorry, what are you two doing?"
Amy looked at Rory and explained, "They're both time travelers, so they never meet in the right order. They're syncing their diaries.
"So what's happening, then? Because you've been up to something." She glared at David.
David smiled before growing serious and looking at the three humans in front of him. "I've been running...faster than I've ever run, and I've been running my whole life. Now it's time for me to stop. And tonight I'm going to need you all with me."
Amy looked worriedly at David who attempted not to look guilty for his deception. "OK, we're here, what's up?"
David smiled. "A picnic! And then a trip. Somewhere different, somewhere brand-new."
"Where?"
David took a breath before saying the words the Doctor had reiterated as the most important in their little deception. "Space... 1969." Now, all he had to do... was die. What have I done to myself?
So... Yeah, I rewrote this, and I'm a lot happier than I was last night
How was that episode, huh? Pretty fantastic, if you ask me! anyways, R&R, and trying playing my little comment game :)
