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"What are you doing now, sparkles?" Haddock growled, Rose giggled, though she tried to hide it. The Doctor slowly stood up and turned, he didn't have the patience for this whelp.
"Edward, give me some time to free the boy and then we'll go look for your Bella, okay?" the Doctor said calmly, though perhaps not as calmly as he could have, his anger levels already dangerously high from having had to deal with this boy all day. Edward lowered the gun slightly; actually it looked more like an alien rifle, the Doctor glared at the weapon.
"Where did you get that Edward?" he said. Haddock and Rose stepped back a little; they knew this wasn't going to end well. Edward looked at the Doctor; he took a few steps forward, and looked at the other two.
"It doesn't matter where I got it, I-," he glared at the Captain "I'm not a 'fairy princess' you old drunk!"
"I didn't say anything." the Captain said, raising an eyebrow.
"You can read minds can't you." The Doctor queried, Edward paled; the Doctor stepped forward, holding his hands up with his palms facing out.
"Tell me where you got that weapon." The Doctor said a little more forcefully.
"NO! It's the only way to save my BELLA!" Edward yelled.
This was slightly confusing to the Doctor, how could Edward holding the gun, be the only way to save Bella?
"What do you m-?" Edward shot the Doctor before he could finish. An electric beam left the rifle and hit the Doctor in the chest; he was flung back a couple feet and landed in a heap near the wall. Rose ran to him, while the Captain and Edward stared in shock. Rose knelt by the Doctor and screamed as his body shook violently, from the electric charge. She watched in terror as waves of electricity ran up and down his body. Rose tried to touch him but got an electric shock, she shrieked as she drew her hand back. The Doctor struggled to lift his head and look at her, she cried as she saw the pain in his eyes.
"R-r-ose…d-don't…" he gasped, the electrical waves stopped and she held him in her arms, the Doctor grabbed her shoulder and grunted in pain as he felt the electricity moving inside of him. He stared into her eyes as his world went dark. Rose felt his hand let go of her shoulder, his eyes closed and she felt his whole body go limp. Rose buried her head in his shoulder and cried. Haddock turned to see Edward walking towards the Doctor.
Haddock stepped in front of him, Edward looked shocked, this human didn't seem to know when to give up he thought.
"I can read your thoughts old man remember?" Edward hissed through gritted teeth, Haddock didn't flinch.
"I don't care what you do to me boy, but you're not hurting the Doctor or the girl." Edward placed the barrel of the gun on Haddocks chest and cocked it.
"Don't test me; I'm doing this to save Bella." Edward said.
"Then do your worst because I'm not letting you harm them." Haddock said without any hint of emotion. Edward had to admit this man was brave, or he was just being foolish. Edward moved around him and ran to the Doctor, Rose yelled at him to back off, and after Haddock cursed he ran after Edward to stop him. Rose clung to the Doctor trying to protect him; Edward grabbed Rose by the neck and lifted her up off the floor, she gasped for breath and kicked her legs. Edward squeezed slightly, Rose's vision started to blur, she screamed as loud as she could (which wasn't all that loud as her air supply was being cut off), Haddock pulled at Edward's arm and yelled at him to let go of her. Edward tossed Rose against the opposite wall, she slid to the floor gasping for breath, turning Edward lightly (for him) punched the Captain in the ribs. Haddock cried out in pain as he fell to his hands and knees, lifting his head he glared up at Edward, who hit the Captain with the butt of his gun. The Captain fell on his stomach and groaned he lay there for a moment as he watched Edward walk over to the Doctor.
"You two will understand I can't have anyone stop me from getting Bella. The Alien agreed to give me Bella in exchange for the Doctor, something about his collection." Edward bent down to pick up the Doctor. Rose got up and grabbing a broken lead pipe that was near her, she ran and swung it at Edward, it bent as it came against his back; he turned to her and growled.
"I didn't want to do this but I'll have to so you won't follow me, or intervene." Edward grabbed her leg and twisted, Rose screamed as she fell to the floor. Edward picked up the Doctor and ran out of the room, Haddock yelled and cursed after him.
The Captain got up with some difficulty and staggered over to the girl who was lying on the ground. Her leg was in an odd position, and slightly crooked, Haddock knelt next to her and ignored the pain he felt. Haddock found some broken wood and told her he needed to splint her leg so it wouldn't hurt as much. Rose looked at the ceiling and nodded, she was trying so hard not to cry.
"Rose I'm very sorry but this is going to hurt." Haddock said, the last thing he wanted to do was cause her more pain, but they had to fix it. The Captain straightened her leg and held it in position, Rose screamed, and then started to cry, Haddock quickly placed the wood by her leg and used his jacket to tie the splint on. He picked her up and held her as she cried, she grabbed his arm with both hands and squeezed, as the pain subsided. Haddock knew they needed to find the Doctor before the Alien hurt him or worse.
