Well, hey guys, I'm currently in Perth, and have decided to whip out the laptop and get some more work done. I don't have any internet so I'll just go from what I last saw on the story, please I want more reviews. But yeah, no pairing, main or side. If you don't like that then you should have checked out the poll. If there is something wrong with that then please review and tell me. Review with suggestions, review with constructive criticism, review with compliments, just review. Ys I know I'm acting weird I just want this story to get the most reviews possible. I think I've explained what all the types of talking and thinking are, so lets go.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto; all things Naruto technically belong to Kishimoto. But I still own this fan fic, even if it doesn't get me any money. In your face Kishimoto, I have this fanfic and you don't. by the way if you do read this Kishimoto, that was only for humours sake, love your work.
P.S. many of the page breaks here skip large periods of time, they will all add up to one month in the end.
Chapter five: one month's training
And so the last days of the challenge past, all through the day they would train, while at night they would visit Chibi, Minato and Kushina. It was on their last night in the tower, right after they had fully mastered water walking, that their three mental tutors decided to try teaching them some moves to try and learn.
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NOW THEN, Chibi said to the nine hanyous gathered around him THERE IS AN IMPORTANT MATTER THAT I SHOULD PROBABLY ADDRESS, THIS AS ANOTHER ONE OF THOSE THINGS THAT DOESN'T CONCERN NARUTO THOUGH.
"Seriously Chibi" groaned Sakura "it's always the same, we have to learn this but Naruto can skip out, we only barely have any form of stealthy clothing thanks to your 'fashion advice' if that's what you call it."
"in his defence" said Minato, having decided to try and defuse the situation "you didn't exactly have stealthy clothes to begin with, after all, I'd hardly call a red dress stealthy"
"WELL I'D HARDLY CALL A WHITE CLOAK WITH RED FLAMES STEALTHY EITHER" Sakura yelled, her eye twitching like crazy.
Chibi sighed LOOK he said THE REASON THAT THIS DOESN'T APPLY TO NARUTO ISN'T BECAUSE IT'S SOMETHING HE ALREADY KNOWS, ITS BECAUSE IT'S A DISABILITY THAT HE DOESN'T HAVE, WHEN KURAMA TRANSFORMED YOU YOU WHERE ALREADY DEAD. Taking their stunned silence as a sign to continue he did YOU SEE YOU ALL HAD BEEN SEVERELY WOUNDED IN SEVERAL VITAL ORGANS, AND THE SHOCK OF ALL KURAMAS POWER RISING WAS ENOUGH TO PUSH YOU THAT LAST BIT, SO WHAT HE DID WAS ANCHOR YOUR SOULS AND CREAT NEW BODIES FOR YOU, HE TRANSFORMED NARUTO SO THAT HE WASN'T KILLED WHEN THE SEAL FINALLY BROKE. NOW BECAUSE OF THAT ALL OF YOU, EXCEPT NARUTO, ARE UNABLE TO USE ACTUAL JUTSU, AND EVEN NARUTO CAN ONLY USE JUTSU WITH A FEW HANDSIGNS. HOWEVER, DON'T THINK THAT THAT MEANS YOUR HOPES AS A NINJA ARE OVER, IT JUST MEANS THAT YOU NEED TO USE STRICTLY RAW CHAKRA MANIPULATION. YOU SEE SASUKE THEIR CAN STILL USE HIS FIRE BALL AND WHAT-NOT, AND ANY KEKKAI GENKIA THAT YOU HAVE ARE BURNED INTO YOUR BLOOD, SO YOU CAN STILL USE THEM, JUST WITHOUT THE HANDSIGNS.
"but wait" Sasuke interrupted "we just learned the shadow clone jutsu off of Naruto so how is it that we can use that?" WELL YOU SEE, YOU CAN LEARN ANY JUTSU THAT NARUTO COULD BEFORE THE TRANSFORMATION, BUT ANT THAT HE LEARNS FROM THIS POINT ON ARE LOST TO YOU, JUST LIKE ALL OTHER JUTSU, BUT AT LEAST YOUR SHARINGAN CAN COPY THE BASICS OF A JUTSU, IT WILL ALLOW YOU TO LEARN IT IN BASIC MANIPULATION LATER He explained, before turning his eye to Sakura OH, AND SAKURA, NEXT CHANCE WE GET WE'RE DOING SOME PERSONAL TRAINING. YOU SEE WHEN YOU FOUGHT OROCHIMARU YOU TOOK A BIG RISK, YOU UNCONCIOUSLY USED YOUR CHAKRA DRAINING FIELD. THAT COULD HAVE DESTROYED YOU, SO WE'RE GOING TO HAVE TO HELP YOU LEARN HOW TO PROPERLY USE IT FIRST. BUT SINCE THAT'S EVERYTHING FROM ME ITS TIME TO GIVE YOU TO MINATO AND KUSHINA, THEY DID WANT TO TALK TO YOU AFTER ALL.
"right you are Chibi" said Minato, "now then, like I said its time to try pointing you in the right direction for actual jutsu to use, now as Chibi said you will have to work on chakra manipulation, and that's your task for the next month or so, to learn all of your jutsu that you knew before without hand signs. Well that is if your have any clan jutsu, Sakura as said you've got to learn how to use your chakra draining field. Sasuke your jutsu shouldn't take too long to learn, Shino and Hinata, your pretty good, just work on using your tails more effectively and Naruto, well I'm gonna teach you a jutsu that probably only you can use, it was one of my signature jutsu and can't be learned easily. In the next month that will follow from this part of the exam to the next, and trust me there's usually a break. Time for you to learn the rasengan, I was actually going to teach you the summoning jutsu, but Chibi says that you can't, something about any summoning animal you try planning on killing you because they all have a grudge against Kurama. I don't blame them either, he's a pain. Now it's time for you to wake up"
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"ah, that was a good nap, come on Sasuke, we still have to find out who masters the water walking first" Naruto said. His excitement easily visible in the movement of his tails and ears. Sasuke smirked "sure thing loser, but we have to finish it today or else the second Phase of the exam will end, after all this is the last day remember" he said in his usual confident attitude. They had been neck in neck for completing the exercise the whole few days they were there, in fact the others had already finished and were starting on the training for the third stage of the exams. But they had way too much chakra for that, and it was annoying, they were behind on the control exercises.
So as they walked to the room that all nine of the group had been recently training in they were both dead set on winning. They could feel that they would finish the exercise today and they were determined not to lose to the other. They walked in to find that the others had arrived just before them. Sakura had ran ahead of them and was practicing with her field by having an object infused with chakra and trying to drain it away. Ino and Shikamaru were both trying to use their jutsu to control the other. Choji was merely trying to expand different separate parts of his body. Shino was meditating to get back in touch with his insects, and Kiba and Hinata were both fighting against each other using only their tails to replicate their moves.
"You ready to lose Sasuke?" Naruto asked, his confidence showing in his voice. Sasuke snorted at him.
"Keep dreaming loser, just make sure to wake up in time to see me win" he said as he stepped onto the water. His foot sank to his ankle and he struggled to stay up for about ten seconds before falling through the water.
"ha, watch and learn" Naruto said as he stepped out onto the water, and having a similar ending to Sasuke.
Both two boys continued trying, constantly inching closer to mastering the jutsu, until noon. They had mastered the technique to the point that they could stand on the surface of the water, and, seeing that the time to the end of the test was almost over they had agreed that whoever could stay on the surface of the water the longest in a spar was the winner. They were both fighting like this, and both nearing their limits for standing on the water when Kakashi poked his head in.
"hey their guys, it's time for all the people who successfully completed the second stage of the exam to report to the main hall, come on" he said in his lazy tone. Both the boys, having been fighting tooth and tail were distracted by this and as they turned their heads in confusion fell straight through the surface of the water.
"argh, please tell me I at least beat the loser" Sasuke said when he emerged from the water, jerking his thumb at the heavily panting Naruto.
"Sorry Sasuke, you both tied" said Sakura, striding over to Kakashi "now come on, we've got an exam to blitz."
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The Hokage stood before the 21 Genin that had passed the second part of the exam. The fox nine, the sand team, the sound team, the other leaf team containing Kabuto and his teammates and team 8. The largest mass of Genin to pass the second stage of the exam in the leaf village yet.
"now then, I suppose I should tell you the real reason for the Chunin exams, as you know it is to improve foreign relations. But it is also our substitute for war. Normally upon the circumstance that this many people pass we would hold a preliminary match to narrow down the competition, but audience members that have been told of this have always said that they wished to have seen the matches, so we have decided that you will all go to the final round. So I will merely give you some details. The final stage of the Chunin exams will be held in one month, this will allow us to spread to the other nations who has passed, and it will let us assemble the feudal lords and Kages that wish to see the event. It will be held in a tournament style where you will face each other one on on one, the winner will proceed to fight in the next round while the loser is disqualified. You are allowed to win by any means necessary but if the proctor says that the match is over than you will immediately cease fighting. Your Jounin-sensei know where the finals are and will tell you when they see fit, I recommend that you train in preparation for the tournament, as some people in this part may have seen your tricks already. I will see you when the time comes for the tournament, fare well"
Naruto stood their "well I guess it's a good thing their aren't any preliminaries but it still is anticlimactic for that to happen" he said. Kiba nodded.
"yeah but I was hoping to beat up some weakling, so I'm still a bit ticked off. Well, come on Akamaru, I know you haven't been getting much attention lately because of this transformation but I promise I'm gonna change that" he said, before walking away.
"well I guess we just have to deal with that, come on you guys, we all have way more training to do" Naruto exclaimed before running out of the tower, and surprisingly straight through the forest and any animal that got in his way. Kakashi sweat dropped.
"He really needs to get a dose of reality, he was supposed to be escorted out by his sensei, now I feel kind of useless" he deadpanned, oddly enough still reading his book. "well lets go, he is right, you have much more training to do, and I have just the thing to teach Sasuke once he gets his original jutsu down." He said as he walked in the same direction as Naruto Sakura and Sasuke walking behind him.
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Naruto stood in the training ground, with several bags and a box full of rubber balls in his hand.
"alright dad, I bought all this stuff that you told me to. Now what?" he asked, he was seriously confused. Why had his father asked him to buy a box full of rubber balls and two bags full of water bombs? It made no sense.
Alright Naruto, the rubber balls will be useful later, for now what I want you to do is fill the water balls with, well, water. After that I want you to try and pop them by rotating your chakra, also I'll do you a favour, just like I did with me old sensei when I taught him this. Now if I told you the trick directly it wouldn't help you learn but if I left it just to you it might make things very difficult for you. Now before you try and pop it I want you to place the ball on the ground. He said, as Naruto knelt down and placed the ball on the ground just like he was told. Now, roll the ball from left to right and back again a few times at a moderate pace. Again Naruto did as he was told rolling the ball backwards and forwards a few times. After a few seconds of this rolling the ball popped right in Narutos face. Sending Chibi and Kushina into a laughing fit. Even Minato chuckled a bit. Now you see you need to make your chakra do that to one of those balls Naruto, do you understand?
"no problem" Naruto replied, picking one of the balls up. Without wasting a moment he started rotating Chakra inside of the ball. He watched as it started to flatten out, thinking that it was about to pop he rotated his chakra faster. But no matter how fast he rotated it didn't pop. It went so flat it looked like a Frisbee but still didn't pop. After a while he stopped the rotating. Thinking back to when he popped it before he imagined the water in the balloon. I rotated my chakra faster and with more quantity then most people can ever hope to achieve. So how is it that just rolling the ball around made it pop? Thinking of the water when he tried to rotate he imagined it spinning in one direction, thinking on the first balloon he saw the waters rotation in that. "that's it!" he exclaimed
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"so let me get this straight" said the man in front of the hokage. He was tall and broad shouldered, with white spiky hair hanging in a ponytail between his shoulder blades. Another distinguishing feature was the red face paint underneath his eyes, going in a line downwards like the trail tears would leave. "your saying that my godson and eight other genin, almost all of which were clan heirs. Had to face against three high level Jonin between them. all of them were almost killed but then he released the nine-tailed fox, who had agreed to help, and not only defeated two of the jonin, putting the third on the run, but has turned himself and the other eight into half tailed-beast half human hybrids of varying tails. On top of that all of them have had their bloodlines power increased to levels that are just terrifying, as well as the one that didn't have a bloodline gaining one. And to put some icing on the cake it set of the fail-safes on the seal a day after the seal was destroyed, meaning that my student and his wife are currently mentally living in him and the nine-tails, now identified as Kurama, left some mental copy of himself to teach them?"
"You know jaraiya, that's actually exactly how to describe it quickly, yes" the Hokage answered the person, now known as jaraiya.
"That is it, now I know you've gone senile, are you aware of how stupid that sounds. Oh and I suppose next you'll want me to teach him when I have no idea how to teach someone with more chakra than all the major ninja villages combined" he said sarcastically.
"Well well, look who became a psychic"
"You're joking right, you know that if I try teaching him I'm going to receive death threats from Tsunade, Minato and Kushina that they'll kill me if I turn him into a pervert. And the last two are dead, so that shouldn't even be possible, plus if he's anything like Kushina then he'll come up with some annoying nickname for me that'll just infuriate me, plus can't his father teach him since he is living in the boys head?" he complained
The aged hokage sighed "while it is true that Minato can teach him techniques, the reason you're going to become his sensei is as a companion and more importantly, guardian. You see the villagers formerly would only give Naruto cold glares, and try and avoid him, tell their children to avoid him or whisper behind his back, but now that he has traits similar to the fox I suspect that they may take things a step further, even if they don't, he still needs someone to protect him from those that would take his power for their own benefit. Now do you see why you must do this? Minato may be in his mind but that's all, he's in his mind and he can't help in the real world in any way other than teaching Naruto some tricks" he explained.
Jaraiya sighed "fine, but don't expect me to teach him any overpowered techniques, he can teach those to himself, or Minato can do it, but not me" he moaned as he walked out, following the chakra signature that Sarutobi had told him to, now that he thought about it how had he missed that when he came into the village, it was huge.
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Jaraiya landed on a branch just in sight of Naruto.
And almost fell of the tree in shock, there was the kid, nine tails, an orange jumpsuit that made the sun look dim, fox ears on top of his head. But that wasn't what shocked him, what was amazing was that he was holding a water balloon in his hand seeming to focus on it. Suddenly the surface would become rough, before seeming to become spiky, then popping. In response to that he would get angry before grabbing another balloon and try again.
"Amazing. Minato, you might be going too far, teaching the rasengan already, but if he can already use it to the point of getting that close to mastering the third stage, then he truly is something" he said to himself as he got ready to go down and talk to him.
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Huh, hey dad why can't I just use my ails to help with manipulating the chakra, we already know I can do that, so why keep trying to learn this instead of getting some more different jutsu in my arsenal? He asked
Naruto, you may be able to use your tails to form a complete rasengan but sometimes you may have your tails occupied with blocking an attack, or you may want to actually be able to use the advancements of the rasengan that I want to teach you, though I should give you a warning, I never learned these advancements, but I've been thinking of things that you would be able to do and think that it's a great idea for you to learn them, also you may be one of the only people with enough chakra to do them. Along with your friends of course. So do you want to learn these jutsu or not?
Naruto grinned "oh yeah, count me in" suddenly he heard a sound behind him quickly turning around. He saw a person standing there, gently clapping.
"well done, for someone so young to be able to use the rasengan up to its second stage is truly impressive. How is Minato, apart from dead?" he asked
Hey, it's jaraiya, my old sensei good to see him again. hearing that the person was Minatos sensei Naruto relaxed.
"he's happy to see you, although I don't like the comment about him being dead" he replied slowly.
"well hey, he is dead isn't he, in body at least, the fact that he's living in your mind almost makes me want to learn a few jutsu from the Yamanaka clan though. By the way you are Naruto Uchikaze right?" he asked, upon receiving a nod he smiled "well then, as Minato probably told you I'm Jaraiya, and I'm going to be your teacher for a while. Don't get me wrong, Kakashi is still your sensei, but evidently I'm supposed to help with training" he stated. "So let's try introductions, who are you?"
"well, I'm Naruto Uchikaze, fox hanyou nine of the leaf village. I like my Mother, My father, Chibi and my fellow hanyous, and I dislike-"
"wait wait, who's Chibi?"
"Chibi is the mental copy that Kurama left of himself, he's called that just because he's basically a mini Chibi version of the fox. Anyway, I dislike people who judge others for something that isn't their fault. So, how about you?" he asked.
Without missing a beat he jumped up and started doing some weird dance "behold, all the way from mount Myoboku, the great and powerful sage, Jaraiya. And the writer of these master piece works" he said, holding up and orange book. Almost straight away Naruto started to shiver, before putting his fingers in a ram seal.
"Transform!" a burst of smoke came from where he was standing and when it cleared it showed in Narutos place a red hair woman in a green apron. "you're the one who writes those perverted books that Narutos sensei is always reading, why you" she began chasing him around the clearing throwing anything she could get her hands on
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"Ow, what happened?" asked Naruto, rubbing his head as he stood up in the ankle deep water of his mindscape.
"Well" began Minato, who was sitting calmly playing cards with Chibi, somehow "it would appear that Kushina, having seen that Jaraiya was the one to write those books, decided to take over, she has used the transformation jutsu to change her shape to her usual form and is currently trying to beat the stuffing out of Jaraiya. You'll probably be sent back into your body when she either gives up or Jaraiya is beaten to a pulp."
"But, isn't Jaraiya supposed to be my teacher?"
"Yes but trust me, Jaraiya will be able to survive any beating that doesn't involve a guaranteed kill hit, so he should still be able to teach you. Royal flush."
HOW COME YOU ALWAYS WIN, THIS IS THE 17TH GAME.
Suddenly Naruto felt himself being pulled back out of the mindscape.
"well, see ya."
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The transformation that Kushina had used disappeared in a puff of smoke as Naruto took over his body again. The first thing he saw was a very badly beaten up Jaraiya, curled in a ball and begging 'stop, stop, stop' over and over again.
"weird, so from what I can tell you write those stupid books huh, pervy sage?" taking offense at that he suddenly sprung up, looking as if nothing had happened to him.
"don't call me pervy sage, fox-boy!" he retorted "after all if you do then I just won't teach you any cool jutsu." Naruto just shrugged.
"ah, doesn't matter, Dads doing that anyway. After he finishes playing cards with Chibi." He drawled.
Jaraiya just sighed "alright fine, but don't think that your father knows every move that I can do, there are some things I can do that he can't after all, and I might teach you them if you're good."
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Kakashi stood on a tree branch looking at his young student, stupid council said he couldn't teach his whole team. Just because the nine-tails saved their lives, and they used the excuse that they had too much chakra and would be better of learning by themselves for the safety of their teachers. And the hokage had pushed it so far in keeping them from execution, having to reveal Narutos heritage, declare their powers a new kekkai genkai. But now he had finally, after five freaking hours of looking through the contract, found a loophole.
"Sasuke, very impressive, you have relearned all your jutsu in raw shape and nature manipulation. As it turns out you needed to. Now time to teach you something new, originally the council would have stopped me, but I found a loophole. They said I wasn't allowed to teach the whole team, so, unfair as it is, I'm simply going to teach you alone, and before you ask its because I know Narutos father is likely to teach him, and in case he doesn't the hokage got Naruto a teacher. Meanwhile Sakura is working on mastering her chakra draining field, so for now it's probably best."
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Naruto stared at the tree for a few moments before jumping up into the air.
"yahoo, I did it" he shouted as the tree fell over, a perfectly circular hole in it's trunk "now dad, what were those extra moves you were going to teach me." Over on a tree branch Jaraiya sighed.
"geez sensei, he's getting enough training, I feel invisible."
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Out in a dark cave nine shadowy figures were assembled. One, with purple eyes that possessed concentric rings spoke first.
"Akatsuki, we haven't gathered here together since Orochimaru left us. But now we have an urgent matter. With the chakra that a tailed beast gives off, a chakra imitated by their jinchuuriki, we have easily been able to keep track of all nine beasts, but now a true problem has come to pass. The reason we have not simply captured all of the jinchuuriki is because they have large amounts of power, but that power is closely guarded by each village, and to capture all of them would enrage every nation at once. And as the statue needs time to prepare for sealing, a period of approximately one week, and a sealing time of three days. Well if we captured all nine than we would take almost thirteen weeks to seal them all, while still somehow defending ourselves from all of the ninja villages, an impossible task for anyone, so we are preparing the statue for more rapid sealing, this will take us three years. But now we have all sensed a huge burst of the nine-tailed fox's chakra, so much that we thought it had escaped. But now it is all gone no jinchuuriki, no nine tails, it's as if he is no longer in this realm, so we are faced with the question of what to do now. We have nowhere to go as we have betrayed our villages. We cannot bring peace because the nine tails is gone. So our new aim is to create our own village, and to help its power as a village we need more, we have bloodlines between us, but not enough, so here is the plan…"
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Naruto stood before a boulder, beaten and riddled with holes, he may have had chakra that would put a hidden village to shame but all this was starting to get even his stamina to drop a little. But still he could see how this was useful. He just needed a small bit more practice, he should have it down by the third stage of the exams easy.
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He was confused, this was a new feeling for him but in front of him was one of his insects, viewed through a magnifying glass. And Shino was genuinely confused.
"what is this?"
I BELIEVE I KNOW HOW TO EXPLAIN THIS said Chibi, having seen through Shinos thoughts the source of his confusion, and it intrigued him too. Looking through the magnifying glass was one of Shinos beetles, but this one looked different. It had mandibles that looked capable of shredding through anything. Its body was slightly larger, with its wings glistening, but not quite hiding the sharpness evident on their edges. One of its legs instead of ending in a bristly foot for clinging to surfaces, ended with a spear sharp point. All in all compared to what it had looked like before it was fearsome.
YOU SEE Chibi began YOU HAVE SEVERAL THOUSAND INSECTS, AND THEY FEED OFF OF YOUR CHAKRA. YOUR CLAN, WHEN A MEMBER GETS ENOUGH INSECTS, WILL HAVE THAT MEMBER CARRY A SECONDARY HIVE TO STORE INSECTS. EACH OF YOUR TAILS NOW ACT LIKE A SECONDARY HIVE. WITH THE SUDDEN INCREASE OF SPACE AND CHAKRA TO DEVOUR YOUR INSECTS HAVE GROWN, THAT EXPLAINS THE SIZE DIFFERENCE. AS FOR THE CHANGES, WELL, EATING ALL THAT CHAKRA HAS ABOUT THE SAME EFFECT ON THEM AS IT DID ON NARUTO, ALL THAT CHAKRA PASSING THROUGH THEIR BODY HAS CHANGED THEM. THUS THEIR NEW, FEIRCE AND POWERFUL APPEARANCE, THOSE WINGS OF THEIRS WOULD APPEAR TO BE RAZOR SHARP, MEANING THAT THEY CAN PROBABLY DO PYSICAL DAMAGE NOW WITH THE WINGS AND MOUTH AS WELL AS DRAIN CHAKRA. AND IT PROBABLY MEANS THEY CAN EAT CHAKRA FASTER. THIS NEW TYPE OF CHAKRA DRAINING BEETLE IS A FIGHTING MACHINE, PROBABLY MANY TIMES STRONGER THAN YOUR FORMER BEETLE TYPE.
"hm, that is most interesting, well then, if that is the case then I will need to practice with these bugs and there new capabilities" Shino said in his normal monotone.
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Sakura stood at the centre of a clearing, unlike the other her training wasn't that straining at all. All she did was charge a stone with chakra then reabsorb it. She was just working on fine tuning her work now, and she had just finished in the nick of time to. She only had two more days until the exams but she was ready. It would only take her few minutes to beat whoever she was fighting, unless she was fighting any of her companions. After the exams she would make a fighting style for her abilities too, but for now she had just one thing left to do.
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Shikamaru smirked, he had gotten it down, he finally had it.
"I can't wait to try a battle with this. Now then time to strategise for when I fight another member."
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The landscape was asunder, trees had been levelled, boulders had been turned to dust, even the ground was covered in holes as if a giant had punched it. In the centre of the devastation stood a boy, five tails thrashing behind him
"finally I got it, this deserves a celebration, barbeque time" yelled Choji as he ran off to his favourite place in the leaf village. Leaving behind a battered training ground.
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Ino was happy, she had mastered it, there were only two more days to the exam but she had mastered it. A purple, slightly transparent image of her stood in the centre of the clearing, all its tails thrashing around, but passing through anything they touched. She would so make chunin.
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Kiba and Hinata stared at each other across the clearing waiting for the other to move. They had trained on mastering use of their tails, and they finally had it. They would win their fights and nothing would stop them. As if on a hidden signal they charged.
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All nine of them stood at the front door of the arena, they were ready, and they would prove it. They would beat anyone that they fought. It was Naruto that stated what they were all thinking though.
"We are so going to smash this competition."
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Well guys, what do you think, tell me what fights you want, I will think of what is best as well as what you want. Give me any ideas you have, by the way, I'm thinking that someday I might make a second fanfic, so I want your opinion on if I should. Any way I write when I feel like it, and I try to make every chapter go to at least 5,000 words. But yeah, give me your ideas for stuff to try, even if it's just little funny ideas that won't make any difference to the story go ahead, I want you to like this story. I'm thinking that if I make a second fanfic then it will be one of these ideas, but I might still think of something else so it's not set in stone:
The fourteenth animal: while it's true that the 12 animals were invited to the banquet and the cat was tricked into missing it, there was a fourteenth animal, one that chose not to go. Narutoxfruits basket crossover. (note: if you haven't watched fruits basket you should, it has some bits that I don't like but it's funny, plus my sister, junior by two years, is obsessed with it, I have to watch it to know some of the stuff she's talking about.)
Played in reverse: what if nothing was as it seemed. what if the sides were wrong and the moons eye plan was for a different purpose. What if they were actually trying to help? Bad good guys. Good bad guys.
Cursed: what if something was different in Orochimarus plan. Good Orochimaru, Curse mark Naruto.
So yeah, those are the ideas, tell me what you think you would like and I'll move it onto priorities, but remember, I will only do one fic at a time and I won't abandon this one, it's just which one I'll do if and when I finish this one. See ya.loop
