Hey guys, well I now have two more people that have reviewed, and their actually pretty good too. Well that's not including the guests, but i don't count the guests as extra reviewers since i think that it's just one person sending the same review, "supert history" whoever you are:

A. Your uselessly repeating yourself.

B. Your spelling it wrong, it's 'superb history' or 'super history'.

C. Your uselessly repeating yourself.

By the way thanks for your review king of Konoha, i needed the confidence boost. So ask any question you want in the reviews and i will personally PM you. For those of you that are wondering about the training they were all in training grounds that were close, secrets weren't let slip and they didn't turn to their instinctual mode. On with the story.

Disclaimer: i disclaim. Owning Naruto that is.

Chapter 6: tournament of tails

"we are so going to smash this tournament" said Naruto, taking a step forward. All the others nodded, following into the arena. As they walked in they were met with a many looks of curiosity from the foreign ninja and civilians. Evidently because of the tails. But the local civilians looks were what really hurt. They were glaring at them with pure unbridled rage. They had gotten worse since the transformation.

As they came into line the proctor, a man named Genma Shiranui,looked at his watch.

"well you all just made it, since your all here i shall ask you now, do any of you wish to forfeit?" he asked, waiting for an answer. Only one person put their hand up.

"heh, sorry, but most of the people here look just a bit too strong for me to beat, i think I'll sit this out" said Kabuto. Walking out of the arena to the various 'boos' and other forms of discouragement. Meanwhile Anko, sitting up in the higher area of the frowned. That boy, Kabuto Yakushi, if the reports are right then he's given up every chunin exam for the last six exams, and he always quits after the second portion. What is it about you Kabuto?

Meanwhile Kabuto was thinking something else entirely. I must conserve my strength, ready for the attack, i cannot afford to be exhausted when the invasion begins.

As Kabuto left Genma removed a slip of paper with the number twenty-one written on it before holding out the container, "this container has the numbers one through to twenty in it, the number you draw will determine who you will face, so come and draw" he explained. As all of the contestants walked up to him he could see some of them nervous with anticipation. As they all walked back into place he spoke up again "now, tell me what your number is, starting at the person that drew one."

"Thats me" called Naruto.

"I drew two" said Kankuro, thinking that he had an easy opponent.

"I got three" said Temari, hoping for a easy opponent.

"I have drawn the number four, I look forward to out youthful match." called a boy in green spandex, in a voice just a little too loud, his name, Rock Lee. Temari just smirked.

"I have five" said Gaara in his dull monotone voice.

"ha, six, thats gotta be a lucky sign right Akamaru?" said Kiba enthusiastically.

"hm, seven" said Sasuke confidently.

"hm, eight" said a boy, or i think it is, with long brown hair and pale eyes. Identified as Neji Hyuuga. In equal confidence.

"nine" drawled a girl with her hair in two buns, wearing a pink Chinese style dress. Tenten.

"ten" called Sakura, her tails thrashing in excitement as she put her plan to work.

"eleven" came the soft voice of Hinata.

"oh yeah, twelve" came the not so soft voice of Ino.

"thirteen, what a drag, why do I get the unlucky number?" Shikamaru said Lazily.

"heh heh, fourteen" said Zaku.

"fifteen" said Dosu, rough voice as usual.

"Sixteen" said Yoroi.

"seventeen? Thats me" said Kin.

"eighteen" said Shino, as monotonous as Gaara.

"nineteen" said Tsurugi.

"and twenty" said Choji.

"good, good, well then in that case the matches work like this" said Genma holding out a board that he had been writing on the whole time,on it were the matches

Naruto Uchikaze vs Kankuro.

Temari vs Rock Lee.

Gaara vs Kiba Inuzuka.

Sasuke Uchikaze vs Neji Hyuuga.

Tenten vs Sakura Uchikaze.

Hinata Uchikaze vs Ino Yamanaka.

Shikamaru Nara vs Zaku Abumi.

Dosu Kinuta vs Yoroi Akudo.

Kin Tsuchi vs Shino Aburame.

Tsurugi Misumi vs Choji Akimichi.

"Remember who you're fighting, and plan for it, now all competitors, up in the grand stand, except Naruto Uchikaze and Kankuro." he said as eighteen figures filed up into the grand stand. Leaving Naruto facing Kankuro in the arena. "now, let the fight between Naruto Uchikaze and Kankuro, begin" he said as he jumped out of the way.

"hey, save yourself the humiliation of losing and just give up will you" taunted Kankuro, eliciting a chuckle from Naruto. "hey, whats so funny?" he yelled, anger tinting his voice, to which Naruto looked up, slowly he held up and hand, before slamming it into the ground causing a wide but shallow crater to appear. He looked up, straight into Kankuros eyes.

"no, I won't give up, and I'll keep fighting until I win, i don't give out victory for nothing." he said, before suddenly leaping forward "now lets go." he threw out a hand, channeling huge amounts of chakra to it in the same manner he did before. Kankuro barely managed to dodge, sensing the chakra and knowing to avoid any contact. Naruto thrust another hand forward, again barely avoided. This continued for a few more attempts before Kankuro jumped back and grabbed a Kunai, holding it up to defend himself.

"you can keep trying, but using that much chakra must be taxing, and you'll simply be exhausted soon, all i have to do is avoid you until then" he said between, before noticing something. "hang on, you don't look exhausted at all, how can you keep that-" he was cut off by Naruto leaping forward again. As Kankuro continued to avoid the strike, now trying to launch a couter attack with his Kunai. As he was was dodging only one thought went through Kankuros head. How does he have this much chakra? But as soon as he thought that Naruto struck hin in the gut, sending him flying backwards from the amount of chakra concentrated in his hand. As he got up Naruto smirked.

"come on, are you gonna at least give me a challenge?" he asked mockingly, but this time it was time for Kankuro to chuckle. As he got up Naruto saw his skin cracked, like ceramic clay. Suddenly the clay covering his face broke, revealing a wooden face with three eyes. As soon as that happened the real Kankuro burst out of the bandage wrapped object behind the puppet, landing in a crouch. As he got up and turned around he pulled out a scroll.

"I'm surprised that you managed that much, but i guess i should fight all out now. Meet Crow, my battle puppet. And hes going to be the one that beats you." as he said that he twitched his fingers around, causing crow to leap forward toward Naruto, a blade extruding out of each of his wrists. As he slashed at Narutos chest he struck thin air as Naruto jumped away. "too bad you can't use those fake tails of yours to help you out or this would be a lot easier" taunted Kankuro. Eliciting a growl from Naruto.

"hey they are real, do you want me to use them?" before he could get a response he continued "fine" his tails started to wave about faster than before. He charged forward, focusing chakra to each tail as well as his hand. He launched a barrage of hits toward the puppet, every hit dislodging a piece, before the puppet was soon lying dismantled on the floor.

"now lets see that pile of scrap wood beat me" Naruto stated, suddenly the pieces all started to rattle. Before raising off of the ground, a blade coming off of each of them, and rushing towards Naruto. Reacting o instinct Naruto jumped out of the way of most of them, except one, that gave him a small nick on the cheek. Kankuro was barely able to tell that he had been hurt as the wound let off a small amount of smoke and closed immediately. He smirked.

"ha, you've been cut by crow now, and trust me, all of his weapons are poisoned, Checkmate I win" he boasted, before he suddenly felt a punch to the gut. As he opened his eyes he saw Naruto standing their, unaffected by the poison.

"as if such a small bit of poison could hurt me, you're wrong. Checkmate, I win" he said as Kankuro fell into unconsciousness. He walked out of the arena as some Medics came to carry out Kankuro.

Up in the Kage booth one old man was thinking one thing, amazing, he could create that much damage just be concentrating Chakra into his hand. No special manipulation like Tsunade, no jutsu used at all. Naruto, you really have become strong.

Meanwhile in the grandstand the first thing Naruto was greeted by was a brown, spiky haired kid up in his face with stars in his eyes.

"that was so cool boss, can you teach me how to do that, please?" asked Konohamaru. Before being pushed back down by Naruto.

"sorry Konohamaru, but that requires a large amount of chakra, it isn't a jutsu, just a whole lot of chakra and I doubt that you would be able to get that much, but i'm sure you could do something cool yourself" he said, eliciting a pout from the young kid, before Ebisu grabbed the boy by his shirt collar.

"young Konohamaru, the grandstand is for the contestants. Hello Naruto, sorry that I couldn't train you over the period before now, I had offered to but it turned out you already had a teacher. I shall see you later." with that he shunshined back into the spectators seats with Konohamaru.

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Up on top of the arena walls was one shadowy figure. Quietly pondering something.

That was the Jinchuuriki of the nine-tails, but the nine tailed fox disappeared. He should be dead. How interesting. He thought as he sank into the roof.

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Genma stood in the center of the arena again.

"the next match will be between Temari versus Rock lee, please come forward for your match" he said. Temari, enthusiastic about the match jumped down from the Podium, as did Lee, though he was yelling something about if he couldn't win then he would do this or that, and hoping for a 'youthful' battle. When they had both settled down and stood facing each other in their respective battle poses Genma raised his hand. "Let the the second match, begin" he said, before jumping away. Almost before Temari could react Lee had charged forward. Reacting on instinct she jumped away, and pulled out her fan. Swinging the large metal object a wave of wind came from it. As it touched the ground it kicked up a huge dust cloud, obscuring the view of what had happened to her foe.

"hah, crazy idiot couldn't even dodge one attack" she said with a smirk as the dust cleared. Expecting to see a beaten body she was amazed when she saw nothing.

"your youthfulness is exceptional miss Temari, I truly shall enjoy this match" came the voice of her foe from just behind her.

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Meanwhile the fox nine where talking about the battles that they would face, more specifically the next match between Kiba and Gaara.

THE MATCH WILL BE HARD KIBA, YOU'RE GOING TO HAVE TO MAKE IT QUICK IF YOU WANT TO WIN Chibi explained to receive an instant response from Kiba.

"but you said that we only had to be one or two tails stronger than the tailed beast we're fighting in order to overcome its experience advantage, so it shouldn't matter how long i take should it?" he said, genuinely curious. Chibi just sighed.

KIBA, THAT ASSUMPTION WAS MADE BASED ON THE THEORY OF YOUR CHAKRA CONTROL BEING PERFECT, AS IT IS YOU USE UP FIFTEEN TIMES MORE CHAKRA THANYOU CAN WITH PERFECT CHAKRA CONROL, ALL OF YOU. BECAUSE OF THIS NARUTO IS PROBABLY THE ONLY ONE THAT COULD FACE OF AGAINST THE ONE TAILS, DUE TO HIS HIGHER LEVEL OF CHAKRA. THAT IS, FACE OFF AND HOPE TO WIN. Chibi explained. SO, YOU HAVE TO MAKE THIS A QUICK MATCH, TO PREVENT HIM FROM DRAWING ON TOO MUCH OF THE ONE TAILS CHAKRA AND PARTIALY RELEASING IT, IF HE DID THEN SHUKAKU MAY BE ABLE TO EXPLOIT THE WEAKNESS AND ACHEIVE A COMPLETE TRANSFORMATION. AND TRUST ME, THAT WOULD NOT BE PRETTY.

Kiba just nodded "fine, but I don't think it'll be a prob-" BOOM all nine people turned their heads towards the area to see two pillars of dirt explode out of the ground. Chibi chuckled HEH, I KNEW IT, HE DIDN'T HAVE A TRACE OF CHAKRA, AND IF THAT'S TRUE THAN HIS TAIJUTSU MUST BE TRULY AMAZING, YOU MIGHT WANT TO WATCH THIS. IF YOU CAN GET A GOOD VIEW BEFORE IT'S OVER THAT IS. Before any one could react and try to watch the match a voice called out, somewhat bewildered, from the arena.

"winner, Rock Lee" as they peered out over the they were shocked by what they saw, Temari was lying on the arena floor, somewhat badly beaten up. While Lee was standing their somewhat shakily but otherwise fine. Naruto gulped.

"I have to face against that next round, oh boy" he said fearfully. Sasuke patted him on the back consolingly.

"don't worry, we all hope you win" he said before muttering afterwards "not that that's likely". Naruto growled at him.

"oh yeah, you really inspire some confidence don't you" he said, balling his fists.

"next match, Gaara vs Kiba Inuzuka." came the voice of Genma from in the Arena before Naruto and Sasuke could get into a brawl. And potentially destroy the arena.

"alright Akamaru, now its our turn to show 'em what we got" said Kiba, rubbing Akamarus head. As they jumped into the arena Lee walked into the grand stand, still a little shaky on his feet.

I'm sorry Gai-sensei, but if i hadn't used the 4th gate i would have lost, I hope my next match is not too youthful, as i cannot yet use more than the first gate until after that, at an estimation he thought as he stood at the railing and rested his weight on it. Next to him stood his teammate. Neji, who's thoughts were running a different line.

Lee, I shall not be outdone by you. It is your fate to be a loser and that shall not change. Now then, I still need to observe my potential opponents, it is better to be prepared. He thought as he observed his potential opponent.

In the spectator seats sat all the people who were happily watching the match when in between the leaf team senseis was a puff of smoke. That cleared to reveal Kakashi.

I was searching for him for ages, saying we had to make a last minute entrance, but no, he had to arrive on time. I thought that students tried to take after their senseis. He thought, and sighed. "hey guys, did I miss anything?" he asked

"aside from seeing Naruto smash a pile of wood apart with nothing but focused chakra to his hand, using nothing but that to defeat another Genin, who was a very talented puppet master might I add? No, nothing at all" Kurenai deadpanned.

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As Gaara entered the arena his sand began to swirl around his hand. His face split into a maniac grin. And the cork that sealed away his gourd disappeared. Kiba walked in with a serious face.

I have to finish this quickly. Chibi was right, we can't face against him yet. He thought. "ready Akamaru?" he asked as he placed his battle partner onto the ground.

"match three, begin" called Genma, jumping away. Kiba wasted no time and charged at Gaara, his tails flared out.

"Fang over fang" he yelled, jumping into the air and spinning violently, his flared out tails increasing the size of the attack as well as it's damage. Gaara stood there unwaveringly. Just before the attack hit a wall of sand came up,blocking the attack. It withstood the attack for enough time for Gaara to comfortably move from where he was standing to a safer position. Just as Gaara moved out of the way the shield broke, letting Kiba through. Gaara lazily moved his hand towards his foe, palm open.

"Desert coffin" he said in his usual monotone, clenching his palm. The sand that Kiba was just breaking through wrapped around him. Just as Gaara was about to clench his hand, ending his opponent. The sand moved from Kiba to his left, intercepting a white blur.

Up in the arena Temari gave it a regarding eye. Interesting, to restrain all of the tails it took all of Gaaras sand, but in order to stop the dog it had to move to block. For once the automatic defense that his sand has prevented, or at least slowed down a victory. While she was thinking this Kiba was rotating again, heading towards Gaara, whos sand was completely occupied dodging the rapid attacks from Akamaru.

"Fand over Fang" he yelled, charging at Gaara again. His attack collided with Gaaras side, but strangely he was not injured. Cracks covered Gaaras entire body, making it appear like he was a ceramic vase just a touch from shattering but he was still unharmed. Even as they watched the cracks began to disappear,meanwhile Temari was freaking out.

Thats Gaaras sand armor, if he's resorting to that then we may have a real problem. She thought. Going over the only ways that this could end, taking into account the crazed look in Gaaras eyes. This could only end in someones death.

Gaara grinned, he raised his hand into a ram sign as a typhoon of sand rose up behind him. Kiba panicked. Before he could reast the sand crashed down, surrounding both Kiba and Akamaru. As Gaara raised his hand into a ram sign again ,about to crush both of them he was stopped by all three sensei of the fox nine plus the proctor. But not before the sand compressed a little, rendering Kiba unconscious, but just sparing Akamaru.

"this match is over, go back to the stands" the proctor said. Gaara just huffed and walked back up. Some medical ninja came into the field and carried Kiba away. Meanwhile the sand was mysterious filtering out of the arena. As Gaara reached the stands again the proctor called out the next contestants "will Sasuke Uchikaze and Neji Hyuuga come into the arena for their battle" as he called the crowd became restless, this was the match that most of them had been waiting for. The showdown between not just two Genin, but the geniuses if their separate year and the Hyuuga and "Uchiha", as many of them still preferred to think.

Once both Sasuke and Neji had arrived in the arena Neji decided to put some real salt on the wounds. "you should just surrender, you are fated to lose to me" he said in his ever arrogant voice. Sasuke smirked.

"So, I'm fated to lose to you am i?" he asked to which Neji nodded "and because of that i am going to lose to you no matter how hard i try" another nod. "And if that's the case then i have no choice but to be defeated?" nod "so if thats the case if i surrendered it would be my choice on whether or not i was beaten by you" Neji started to nod, before doing a double take. Before he could react though.

"match 4, Sasuke Uchikaze vs Neji Hyuuga begin" the proctor yelled out before jumping away. Without any delay Sasukes eyes went red and two rings each with three commas going in opposite directions swirled around his pupils and veins bulged around Nejis eyes with the pupil becoming slightly visible. Nejis eyes widened at what he saw.

"amazing" he whispered. He was a master of the Byakugan, and he knew how to understand it, the brighter the chakra coils the more chakra they had. But this was amazing, with his 360 degree vision he could see not just Sasukes chakra but also the rest of those tailed Genin's chakra. But not the chakra coils.

Their chakra was so plentiful it was as if their entire body was made out of it, it was amazing.

Suddenly reacting on instinct he moved his head to the side. Just barely avoiding a punch from Sasuke who, using the distraction had shot forward and jumped with a punch. As he was passing he tried to knee Neji, but found his knee caught. Continuing to push forward with his knee he used Nejis hand to pull himself back wards, aiming for a punch to the back of the head. Only for Neji to block again.

So, this is the power of the byakugan, to see 360 degrees, meaning i can't get behind him for an attack Sasuke thought. Suddenly he smirked.

The next thing anyone knew Neji was knocked off of his feet and Sasuke was standing over him as he got up.

"you may be able to see my moves no matter where i am" He started "but you only have two arms, so what happens when your opponent has a few other limbs, like lets say, eight tails" he said. As Neji got up his eyes were practically burning in charged forward, his front two fingers pointed out. He might not be able to make out the chakra points, but a hit would still hurt.

In response Sasuke also charged forward, his tails flared out and ready to strike.

I have to remember that he has a huge advantage, he has too much chakra for me to close it, off he has an extra eight appendages and enough stamina to keep fighting for days on end. I have to use my experience and finish this quickly. Neji thought as he threw his left arm out, only for one of Sasukes tail to wrap around his wrist, he hit the tails, causing it to withdraw. Suddenly all eight tails lashed out at him, he reacted as fast as he could.

"rotation" he called out, spinning and surrounding himself with a dome of chakra, it prevented all eight of the tails from hitting. He pulled out of the spin, "You are within range" he said softly. He leaped forward "eight trigrams; one palm" he said, striking one part of his opponents arm, "two palms" he struck a point in one of his legs. "four palms" he struck another two points on his body, slightly faster.

"Eight palms, sixteen palms, thirty-two palms" he called, increasing his speed the whole time until he was practically a blur. "Eight trigrams, sixty-four palms" he called, before finally ending his barrage with an open hand strike to the chest and knocking Sasuke backwards and off his feet. Neji smirked and turned away, his Byakugan deactivated. he didn't need to close the chakra points. He had simply charged so much chakra to his attacks that they each would have left a wound. He would be down for a week.

"ow, that hurt" came a voice from behind him. He turned around, eyes widened. Sasuke was just standing their. There was steam rising off of almost every point of his body, but he was almost completely uninjured. "ahh man, that hurt so much" Sasuke continued his rant before stopping. "hey why are you standing their looking like codfish?" he asked, much to the laughter of the crowd.

Neji closed his mouth, he can't be standing, I put all his chakra into that move. It should have had him in the hospital he thought fearfully, but covered it well. "you should surrender, those who know greater suffering have greater strength" he said in an idiotic moment. Obviously forgetting who he was talking to.

Sasuke just started laughing "oh yeah, and what would you know about suffering might I ask?" he said. Instead of answering Neji removed his headband, revealing a sign that looked like an 'x' with a line on each side.

(One long explanation of Hyuuga politics and Nejis suffering that I do not want to write later) "you see, you cannot escape destiny and your destiny is to lose" he finished. Again Sasuke chuckled his ears twitching.

"you call that suffering" he said "I admit its bad and all but your saying that because of that you've had it worse than me?" he asked before beginning his story "While i was still in the academy my older brother killed of my entire clan then forced me to see it over and over for three days with a creepy genjutsu. I lived until a month ago consumed with the idea of revenge. I had to be killed as a human porcupine and brought back to life with ears and tails to snap me out of it. And you're saying that you've had it worse?" he said getting louder and louder before going to an almost sweet voice "oh, by the way, you lose" he said as a shadow clone, who had used the fact that Neji had let his guard down and deactivated his Byakugan to sneak up on him, hit him in the back of the head.

"winner of the fourth match, Sasuke Uchikaze" the proctor called "could Tenten and Sakura Uchikaze come into the arena for the next match" he said as Sasuke walked back up to the grandstand.

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After both Sakura and Tenten were on the ground floor the proctor raised his hand "match five Sakura Uchikaze vs Tenten, begin" he called before jumping away. Sakura charged forward, trying to get close. Tenten pulled out a double handful of Kunia and shuriken and, jumping up, threw them down at Sakura. Forcing her to back away.

Great, this is so not my match up, i need to get close to drain her chakra but she keeps me away. Guess I'll have to thank Naruto for teaching me the shadow clone jutsu. She thought, going through the three hand signs. "shadow clone jutsu" immediately almost the entire arena was filled with clones.

"ah, i was hoping to not have to use this either" Tenten said, pulling two scrolls from a pouch just behind her back. She quickly flashed through some hand signs "rising twin dragons, as two plumes of smoke rose up and swirled around before disappearing to be replaced with two scrolls an Tenten right in the middle. A small puff of smoke would come from one of the markings on the scroll and she would reach into it to grab a weapon before throwing it at one of the clones. Half the clones targeted were caught by one of the weapons the other half managed to dodge or block.

"I'm not finished yet" she called, a group of threads becoming visible on the tips of her fingers she pulled all of them, causing the weapons on the ground to rise up, impaling a clone on the way. She threw her hands downwards, sending another rain of weapons at Sakura and her clones. Again most of the clones managed to doge or block, but their were too many weapons and most of the former clone army was obliterated. Tenten landed in a circle of the last ten clones.

"hmm, done alre-" suddenly she fell over in exhaustion. The nine clones dispelled leaving Sakura, who merely walked away. As she walked away she thought one more thing looks like there were some upsides to that matchup, being one to focus on weapon throwing she has less stamina and thus less chakra then the average chunin candidate. she doesn't need chakra to summon the weapons, she just passes chakra over the spot and the scroll brings it out. While her accuracy is fearsome she couldn't hold her chakra very long when each clone was draining chakra.

YOU REALLY SHOULD CONSIDER YOURSELF LUCKY FOR THAT SAKURA piped in Chibi AFTER ALL, EVEN THOUGH YOUR CLONES CAN ABSORB CHAKRA THE ABSORBING ABILITY IS THINNED OUT, MEANING THAT A CLONES ABILITY TO ABSORB CHKRA DOESN'T CHANGE OVER DISTANCE, JUST AN AVERAGE GENIN A MINUTE FOR A RANGE OF FIFTY FEET.

Yeah, and the biggest problem is that beyond chunin level chakra they can withhold their chakra from the clones. So I have to drain the chakra myself. She replied.

"next match Hinata Uchikaze vs Ino Yamanaka" Genma called out. Putting Sakura on another train of thought.

How on earth can he speak that loudly with a senbon in his mouth?

Both Hinata and Ino jumped off of the grandstand into the arena and stood facing each other.

"so Hinata, ready for a good match?" Ino asked, to which Hinata nodded, still a little shy, and being the center of attention for hundreds of people didn't help. Putting her hands together in the one handed sign to activate the Byakugan she channeled chakra through her eyes. Veins bulged out on her temples, her iris twisted into a yin-yang symbol and around the out side of her pupil her red ring formed.

"Match six, Hinata Uchikaze vs Ino Yamanaka, begin" the proctor called before jumping away. Hinata lunged forward, attempting a strike while Ino prepared her jutsu. Ino caught her opponents hand with her tail as she finished focusing chakra for her jutsu.

"Speed mind transfer jutsu" she said as a purple version of her burst out from her. Hinata jumped away but the chakra form followed her, at a rather impressive pace too. Hinata went through her options.

It's a mind transfer jutsu, so it should only be able to move straight forward she thought, jumping to the side. Only for the chakra form to swerve towards her. She moved out of the way again, running toward the unconscious Ino. Suddenly the chakra form floated into the way, going back into the body. Ino's eyes jolted open and she jumped out of the way of the attack, instantly focusing chakra again. Once again her chakra form came flying out at Hinata, who barely dodged it this time.

Meanwhile in the stands Inoichi was flabbergasted, this is amazing. this was like the normal clan jutsu, but it was also so different. Their where no hand signs needed, the jutsu moved at a rapid pace, it could return to the caster at a command. The only downside was the visible form of chakra. And to make something like that, the amount of chakra required must be enormous.

Back in the fight Hinata had been repeating the process, testing the limits of the chakra form. It was like extending ons body, if it touched her then it could control her, she knew that much at least. She could keep this up for the whole day if need be, but that might cause some problems, the audience wasn't that patient after all. She had to find a weakness. Suddenly it hit her. She had no other choice. All or nothing then.

Once again she charged for, Ino. Once again the chakra form retreated back into her, and once again she jumped out of the way and started to mould chakra to perform the jutsu. As the chakra form came rushing out at Hinata she held all seven of her tails in front of her. Channeling chakra to them to form a shield, the chakra Ino bounced off of the shield. Hinata smirked, she had it. Closing in on Ino she prepared for her jutsu.

"eight trigrams: nine palms" she called, thrusting her hands and tails each toward a different chakra point on Ino.

"eighteen palms" again she hit a chakra point with each off her appendages.

"thirty-six palms, seventy-two palms" she was out of chakra points to attack so she started on parts of the body that would immobilize "one-hundred and forty-four palms, two-hundred and eighty-eight palms" she finished, having cut off her opponents chakra, movement and even leaving a few flesh wounds in order to divert the healing ability. Up in the stands Hiashi smiled.

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Well guys, i know i might have overpowered most of the fox nine. But I figure that if their chakra reserves are that high then they would be powerful. Anyway, here's the idea, i have three poll that i am opening. One is one whether or not i include fillers, not including shippuden flash backs. The second, should i make some sort of special thing for the members of team Gai, just to slightly even things out. And the third, should this have an alternate storyline to the original episodes, or just be the original episodes with an over-powered bunch of hanyous in it.

Anyway, i have figured out what i will be writing if and when i finish this fanfic. A Naruto x bleach crossover. Though that might take a while. After all life has finally decided that i need to put some effort in so i can't spend as much typing time as i want. Therefore my updates are almost guaranteed to take several weeks since i never publish any chapter with less than five thousand words, the first chapter to this story the only suggestions are welcome. By the way, send me ideas for Narutos special Namikaze seal, i have one idea but it just doesn't seem very Naruto. Send anything in the reviews.

This is kit signing out and going to live (some sort of) life:

later.