Author's Notes
Okay, I've been thinking about rewriting this one. For the most part, it's going to be mainly the same, but I'm going to try to correct some mistakes I've made as well as add some more crazy ideas. First off, I'm going to (hopefully) improve the paragraphing. I know how many people complained about it and I'll try my best to improve in the rewrite. Also, I'll try to not do the whole "Hi! I'm your son/daughter from the future and here's a memento I have from you." thing with all the kids, even though this is basically how the kids respond to their mothers or Chrom when talked to in their paralogues. One thing change is that the OC children I made now come from an alternative future were Grima was defeated, yet the Risen somehow managed to survive and evolved to become more intelligent. Also, some of the pairings might change. Most of the pairings were from my current playthrough at the time. This time, I might use some pairing from my other two playthroughs. By the way, here are who I paired everyone with in my three playthroughs of Awakening if you were curious:
(Person: First Playthrough, Second Playthrough, Third Playthrough)
Avatar: Cherche (It just happened. Plus, I wanted Batman as a son) , Lissa, Chrom (I played as a female in my third playthrough)
Chrom: Sumia, Olivia (hard as hell to do), Avatar
Lissa: Vaike, Avatar, Stahl
Sully: Stahl, Stahl, Vaike
Miriel: Ricken (I had no idea what I was doing), Kellam, Gregor
Sumia: Chrom, Frederick, Frederick (Filler pairing since everyone else Sumia can marry was taken)
Maribelle: Libra, Gaius, Ricken
Panne: Frederick (No idea of what I was doing), Gregor, Libra
Cordelia: Gaius, Lon'qu, Virion (Severa ended up looking a lot like Miku Hatsune from Vocaloid)
Nowi: Donnel, Donnel, Donnel (You can tell that I like NowiXDonnel, plus it makes Nah overpowered)
Tharja: Henry, Virion, Gaius
Olivia: Lon'qu (ironic since Lon'qu's afraid of women yet Inigo's a flirt), Chrom, Henry
Cherche: Avatar, Henry, Lon'qu
Anyway, I might have Basilio and Flavia have kids as well. If I do decide on doing this in the rewrite, Basilio's getting a daughter and Flavia's getting a son. (And speaking of Basilio, am I the only one who noticed that he kind of looks like Team Fortress 2's Demoman?) Another crazy idea I had was including a female Robin (named Raven) and a male Morgan (named Mark) into the mix. Another idea I had was to make Robin female and have her marry Chrom and then have male Robin be her twin brother who secretly helped the Shepherds by leaving rare and legendary weapons for them in their barracks and on the shiny tiles on the battlefield before being discovered by them and ultimately joining them.
Well, thank you for reading and reviewing this story and look forward for the rewrite and this version will probably be deleted after I post the rewritten version
Disclaimer: I do not own Fire Emblem, Vocaloid, Batman, Team Fortress 2 or anything else I mentioned above.
