Elza here, Thank you for reviewing, I guess I will reply to my first review then.
The thing about Tobirama's OOC, it is due to his disposition as an Uchiha that he is emotional (It is something related to the plot and something that I will utilize in the near future). I have to admit, along the way I do felt that his OOC is a little bit more than what I had intended. Perhaps due to this being a 1st Person's POV fic that he will automatically be more talkative than ever. But he is still a man of few words if you count how many conversation that he does. Heck, imagining Tobirama talk is really hard and I have to give my applaud to Reader06 to be able to do it so naturally.
I suppose it is probably better if I approach this fic in a 3rd Person's POV. But I am training to create a Novel that is focused on 1st Person's POV so I will try to mend the OOC but not completely changing the POV. Maybe I will change the POV sometimes when I feel like it though.
Perhaps it is due to Tobirama calling Izumi with Izumi-nee, I guess I will change that at least in the monologue, we don't disrespect our elders in Japanese culture right. By the publishing of this chapter Izumi-nee on the monologue will be effectively changed to Izumi.
I hope this removes the OOC for fanfictionfan456. Well if it doesn't then you can contact me on how to do it, that is if you are willing.
And so we shall enter part 2 of year 5 and interlude, since there is somebody nice enough to review I guess a vote on how this story goes will be available in the near future.
Interlude (Year 5)
Death, and life. Why do people have to suffer in this world? Why is there a need to fight? It is something that I do not understand, something that I kept on searching for yet still remain unattainable.
Death.
Death of many shinobi that protect the village from the 9 tailed fox.
Why would they need to protect the village from the 9 tailed fox?
They will die even if they do not protect the village. They may survive if they would try to escape instead. What does it mean to protect this village, isn't this place just a living place. Escaping from danger is something that would be done logically. Yet what reason would the people have to protect the village.
The 9 tailed fox isn't something human alone can handle, yet they still tried.
Life.
Birth, a new life.
When I remembered it, it was pleasant, joy, happiness. A brand new possibility, and yet at the end of the line, they will have to face death. What does being born means if one is just going to die again.
The answer, the more I think about it, the less sense it makes.
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Something worth to protect (Itachi and Shisui)
My little brother Uchiha Izuna, and Uchiha Sasuke are very different individuals. Albeit being twins they don't share the same disposition.
Sasuke is a very competitive, cheerful, and a kind little brother. He always follows me around either asking me to train with him or just to play together. His competitive spirit may have been the result of father's teaching, as he is told that the Uchiha are and must always be superior to others. He seems to idolize me for some reason.
While Izuna shows a very different disposition. He is quiet, serious, and sometimes act like an old man or some war tempered veteran ninja. The only time he ever shown any serious emotion is when he is playing with Izumi. He may have a soft spot for women. Although he is not competitive, he shows great sign of intelligence and ability.
He is able to do what is taught almost simultaneously, especially ninja arts. He spends his time either thinking or secretly training chakra control. And for no reason only show the same skill amount as Sasuke when he is told to do something. For some reason he is fixated on doing water jutsus. When father found out about it he got scolded badly.
He is diligent in his training. If you see Sasuke as a child in his prime than you can see Izuna as a kid training to be black ops by his own.
He kept on secretly doing what father denies him to do and make friends with the nine tailed fox's jinchuriki.
Father is tired of him and neglected his training. That's why I decided to ask Izumi to help him train which she agrees to spontaneously. After all she is close to him as well. Ever since then they have been training with Naruto, and become almost an Inseparable group.
Seeing these kids made me wonder. What is the best future for the Uchihas? Who and what to protect is still unclear to my eyes.
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"Those who agree with the rebellion, please raise your hand" the moderator of the meeting exclaimed.
14 of 30 People raised their hands.
"Those who do not agree please raise your hand" the moderator exclaimed again
8 out of 30 raised their hands.
"The odds are still around 60% to 40%, with 40% agrees with rebelling and 20% completely reject the idea. If this keeps on going like this, there will be a rebellion against Konoha soon" my cousin whispered to me.
This is Shisui. My cousin, he is a proud descendant of Uchiha Kagami, a once renowned Uchiha of the clan, known for his loyalty towards the village. He possesses a great ability called the koto amatsukami, a sharingan ability. He is able to cast a genjutsu so real that the target will not be able to realize he/she is inside a genjutsu in the first place. Not many knows this ability, albeit myself, the Hokage, and the elders of konoha. It is unknown whether this is a genetic trait passed down by Uchiha Kagami, or something his mangekyou sharingan produces.
It is our plan to try and stop this rebellion and he is the key player in stopping it. Koto Amatsukami can only be used twice in succession since one usage will render an eye useless for 10 years. So we only have 2 chance and we need to get all the opposing elder right in the middle of that genjutsu without fail.
This rebellion has been planned since the tension between the Uchiha and Konoha worsen due to the second hokage's reign. At first it was a small amount of individual, only trying to incite rebellion with neither backbone nor planning. It is only due to their sheer greed and rage of the Uchiha clan's treatment. Yet, the attack by the nine tailed fox had presented the possibility of the rebellion happening, since Konoha is now weak enough to be taken over.
Their harted of the second hokage, and the sense of superiority that they pursue is the drive of this rebellion. And unfortunately, my father is the heart of it now. Which is why, when Izuna said he admires the second hokage, out of the blue, with no reason, my father becomes infuriated with him.
The rebellion will cause more bloodshed. The symbol of peace the leaf village that our ancestor has struggled so hard to obtain will simply be destroyed through hatred and greed. Even if the rebellion succeeded, those who succeeded are only waiting to be killed by Iwagakure or kumogakure due to their hatred.
In the end there will be no hope of peace, if Konoha is destroyed. The Uchiha will only face it's doom either way.
Sasuke…. Izuna…. If there is any god controlling this pathetic world, I can only wish for their safety.
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And that's a wrap. I must say, a battle with 3rd Person POV is a better one, so I may decide to switch POV during battle, like fate/stay night. Funny is that I have been a type moon fan for 12 years or even longer, yet my first fic is Naruto.
And a total change of plan with shisui, I guess I am letting him die, since there is a new and better plot that I've manage to think out.
The next chapter may be tomorrow or next week depending on my schedule.
Elza-out
