Hello. It's me again.

After a few minutes of self-reflection and a bag of m&ms, I decided I needed to clarify a few things. I will drop this story if no one responds to this. When I say "better plot" and "characterization," I mean:

Lavi is a junior undergrad drinking his way through college papers and his loud obnoxious roommate. One night, while out drinking with his friends (Allen, Kanda and so on), Lavi meets Tyki Mikk, a stranger who approaches him at the bar and challenges him to a game. Impressed by Tykki's uptake on his literary references, Lavi accepts the challenge and lost a round of cards. Surprised, he challenges the man again and loses once more. Frustrated, Lavi challenges him again, leading to a one night stand and him sneaking out in the morning to make it to his first day of class for the Fall semester. Unfortunately, one Tyki Mikk comes in the form of a college professor who's bent on making Lavi's life a living hell by making him feel quite... stupid.

I don't know about you, but I love witty banter and flustered/frustrated Lavi is the best Lavi as well as smug Tyki is the best kind of Tyki.

This plot line will be revised many times, but it is the current one I am toying around with.

Well.

Thank you for your time and patience.

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