A/N: I really shouldn't of posted this... Oh well what the heck. Can't believe said lunatic is still around.

Fantasy


Nick now lives in an apartment alone. Judy made sure of that once she knew of his living conditions.

Beth has moved to Zootopia since she's dating Nick at Judy's request. Bunny family traditions are strange like that and that's why most bunnies have harems of at least one if not more does.

Nick has the time of his life on a double date with both Judy and her friend Beth. This date empowers him to do what he really wants. To try to write a story for once. One of the fantasies he's had but never tried indulging in.

After the date, he goes on his computer and types for hours. After various attempts and multiple drafts, he finally has something ready to post.

Nick is rather disappointed by the reception or rather the lack of for his story. He calls Judy and Beth and asks both of them to read his story. Surely, he will receive praise from them.

After a rather short period of time, Judy calls Nick back. "Nick, have you actually checked the story yourself?"

Nick replies, "But I worked so hard on it, it must be worth reading."

"Have you actually read the story you posted?"

"No, I haven't."

"Take a look then."

"Wait, this isn't the story I wrote. This is more like something from an IT class." Nick learns that this website is rather prone to trouble. "I've fixed the issue."

"I'll read it now and get back to you."

A day passes and they go to work again.

Nick asks at work, "Do you have any feedback."

Judy replies, "Save it for after work."

Nick is rather thankful for parking duty today because it's a job that doesn't require much effort and he can think of various plots in the meantime. Parking tickets given out and the day passes without an incident.

Nick goes home and realizes Judy never gave him feedback. Nick calls Judy, "What feedback do you have for me?"

Judy replies, "How do I put it? The plot is unrealistic, the characters are flat and uninteresting, There's several mistakes in English and a lot more that's wrong."

"It's fantasy for a reason Judy."

"Yes, but even fantasy has its limits. Your premise is flawed."

"Isn't that what fantasy means?"

Judy takes a deep breath, "Fantasy or not, there's still suspension of disbelief."

Nick hangs up uncertain of what to do with the response. Meanwhile, a few animals have praised his story. He thinks that must be good enough for now. Yet as days went on more and more animals shared Judy's view point.

Nick asks himself if fantasy truly means the ability to do what one wants. He notices the lunatic has posted again, that reminds him that fantasy is not an excuse for writing anything and everything. Nick decides to heed Judy's advice and sets to rewrite his story. It gets better and better with each draft.

It still wasn't good "enough" there's always critics of one thing or another but at least for now they aren't united anymore. They no longer shared a common front. It's not the best thing ever to be written or the worst. It's simply the story he chose to write and one they chose to read.

One day, he decides to update his story only to hit a blank screen. That screen gives the illusion of all is well but in reality, everything that hits it is lost to the void. He finds out about that later. It's rather refreshing to him that because of that error certain stories didn't see the light of day. They were still there just no one knew.

Tomorrow, is another double date with both Beth and Judy.

They stop by at Bugga-Burger. Apparently, another bunny tradition is that they would eat their mate's favorite food occasionally, today was this occasion.

Nick says, "I'll order a cricket burger." Both Judy and Beth comply and order the same.

Nick feels extremely happy in watching Judy and Beth choke down the cricket burger. It's just them eating food but for him it's somehow erotic. Both of them finish their meal. Nick just fulfilled another fantasy of his.

Judy says, "Do you know the other rabbit customs?"

Nick replies, "Do they matter?"

Beth educates Nick, "One day, you're going to eat our favorite foods. I saw how much you enjoyed us eating this. This world doesn't revolve around your fantasies."

Judy remarks, "One day, you'll have to satisfy ours."


A/N: Another commentary.