A/N:Wow this fic is lacking for reviews. I suppose I shouldn't be surprised since Ayame is such a minor character and probably doesn't bring in anyone. Still, it bugs me that this fic isn't doing too hot when it's the first one to see my new style and attitude toward writing. Oh well, if I make it good enough people will have to read it eventually, right? Anyways, a warning on this chapter for teenage lesbian sex. If you somehow don't want to read about that then you should go somewhere else.
Disclaimer: 2 + 2 4 (and I do not own Masashi Kishimoto's Naruto).
Sakura could not avert her eyes as they captured the radiant beauty of the one she so yearned for. It had been four days since the last time she had seen Ayame and now in the girl's presence she remembered why those days had been so hard.
It was mid-afternoon the day after she had been dragged to the ramen shop and made aware that the one she treasured was still her friend. She remembered how when she went home the day before the tears of before didn't return, only a content feeling of accomplishment as she contemplated meeting Ayame the next day.
The sun was high in the cloud dotted sky as Ayame rushed toward her as if she had waited some time for her friend's appearance. Rather than her usual Ichiraku uniform, Ayame was dressed in casual clothing, a simple skirt, a soft blue in color, and a fashionable but modest green blouse.
"You look great" Sakura started with a grin that hid more devious thoughts, "This is the first I've seen you in something other than your work clothes."
"Oh, r-really." Ayame blushed a vibrant red at Sakura's words. She then replied in a soft tone, "You look beautiful today too."
Sakura countered the girl's blush with her own, perhaps wishing she had picked another way to start the conversation before responding as she reexamined her own outfit, her usual kunoichi dress, "Oh, but this is just the same sort of thing I wear all the time."
"Yes, but it's nice." Ayame said smiling nervously, "It reminds me that I'm friends with a real ninja."
Sakura nodded happily and gave a soft giggle. After a pause she asked, "So am I late? I thought I gave myself plenty of time."
Before leaving Ichiraku ramen the previous day Sakura had asked Teuchi to inform his daughter that she would be coming to spend time with her the next day. She had told him to make sure that Ayame was ready to join her at 3:30 the next day. Sakura had left her house an hour ahead of the meeting time so that she would have plenty of time to walk to Ayame's house. She wasn't expecting the girl to be already waiting for her in front.
"No, you're actually about half an hour early, Sakura." Ayame tried to laugh through new found awkward shyness.
"Sorry." Sakura apologized with her own laugh hoping she was still successful in masquerading her intentions, "But since were both ready I suppose we could leave now."
"Right." Ayame replied enthusiastically as the two of them went off into town.
The day was spent in idle chatter as the two young girls traversed Konoha's busy streets. Hours flew by as they engaged in activities proper for young girls, visiting every store they could, trying on all the latest clothing fashions, chatting with any friendly acquaintance that passed by, and enjoying the sights and sounds of the beautiful village they called home in the warmth of the clear summer day. The sun had already set when Sakura suggested that they should find something to eat. Ayame agreed and the two found their way into a nearby sushi restaurant.
After being served and taking her first bite Ayame giggled as she said, "I feel kinda guilty eating at a rival restaurant."
"Ichiraku was on the other side of the village from where we were." Sakura responded assuringly as she tasted her own food, "By the time we got over there, your father'd likely be angry for you staying out so late."
"No, I wasn't complaining." Ayame said shaking her head slightly, "It's just different is all."
"I bet you've had enough ramen in your life where this is a welcome change of pace." Sakura gave a soft laugh.
"Definitely." Ayame nodded exuberantly. She returned to politely eating away at her sushi before returning her eyes to her friend and saying, "You know, I had a lot of fun today, Sakura."
"Me too." Sakura acquiesced with a wide smile.
"I hope we can do this again in the future." The ramen server said in a distant tone.
"Of course we can. We're friends, Ayame. We can do this all the time." Sakura said excitedly.
"Friends..." Ayame's tone drifted into a soft lull, "I've never had as good a friend as you Sakura."
"R-really?" Sakura asked shyly.
"There are other girls my age, I guess, who I've spent time with," Ayame explained herself in a whisper like tone, "But this was the first time I've felt this way. Like I was just happy that this person was here with me."
Sakura turned an intense red as she pondered if perhaps Ayame's intention toward her had somehow became the same as hers toward Ayame. She forced herself to doubt the possibility. Ayame wasn't someone depraved and disgusting like her who could harbor such terrible, unnatural feelings. Ayame just wanted a best friend who would always be there for her and Sakura needed to get it through her head that that was as far as this could possibly go.
"I'm sorry. I know this stuff is embarrassing." Ayame started again after a moment of silence. She then said in a more subdued fashion, " I bet you've had plenty of friends like me though. I mean you had Naruto and Sasuke and all the other shinobi."
"Yeah but I haven't had a real good friend that was my own gender since Ino back at the academy." Sakura said comfortingly, "You're friendship still means a lot to me. Believe me it's a whole different experience spending time with another girl than with one of them."
"You're right." Ayame chimed in with a smile, "If you did this sort of stuff with a guy it'd be like a date."
Sakura's again blushed as she heard the other's words. In her mind this had played out as a date, even if she knew it couldn't lead anywhere. She had hoped Ayame wouldn't be able to see through it, but Ayame was a bright girl. Sakura hoped Ayame did not see the insidious intentions she held in her mind. She did not want to scare her treasured friend.
After a moment she found a cover as she took the same biting tone she usually did with Naruto saying, "Believe me if I took either Naruto or Sasuke around shopping with me like that it'd end up more like torture than any sort of date."
Ayame gave a laugh as she nodded in agreement, the girl finished the last of her sushi then added in an inquisitive tone, "Sakura, is there any one you like?"
Sakura gave a slight gasp at this question. What was the girl looking for. She couldn't be hoping for Sakura's truthful reply, "Yes there is, you, Ayame," could she? No they had just been talking about Naruto and Sasuke; it was obvious Ayame was just curious about Sakura's love life or perhaps wanted advice on her own. Sakura had found it odd that the subject of boys had not popped into their meaningless girlish conversations of the day but she had been glad. She honestly didn't know how she should respond; she knew she didn't like boys anymore but she also knew she didn't want to lie to Ayame.
"N-no, not really. I don't think so." Sakura forced herself to lie with great difficulty seeing it the only way out.
"Oh, is that so?" Ayame gave a devious laugh at Sakura's frantic expression, "I always thought you liked Sasuke."
"I used to." Sakura admitted knowing it was the truth, "But ever since he betrayed us, I haven't found myself capable of trusting a man with my heart."
Sakura wished she could pull back her words as soon as she had said them or at least alter them so Ayame could avoid picking up on their subtext.
"Oh well, I'm sure you'll find a guy some day, who you can trust and love." Ayame said failing to notice any awkwardness in Sakura's words, much to the kunoichi's relief, "Being amongst all those shinobi you're sure to run into someone wonderful for you."
Sakura was feeling more and more guilty as the young ramen girl spoke each new word in an effort to close the discussion she decided to flip the initial question, "What about you Ayame, there someone you have your eye on?" Against her better judgment she decided to leave out the follow-up: "And if so, tell me who he is so I can kill him."
Ayame blushed awkwardly before saying nervously, "Yes, yes there is."
"Oh, and who would that be?" Sakura now asked hoping all her anger was being kept inside.
"This brave, strong shinobi that visits Ichiraku all the time and loves my ramen." Ayame said in a romanticized tone as she answered.
"Naruto, you are dead." Sakura said on the inside. On the outside she smiled and said masking her feelings of defeat, "I'm happy for you, Ayame. I hope it turns out well."
Ayame looked down briefly then said in a sad low tone, "It won't. I'm no match for a shinobi."
"That's a load of crap. A girl like you could have anyone she wants." Sakura spoke in an angry, curt tone before adding with a viscous smile, "Besides I'm your friend now, so anyone who rejects you has the pounding I'll give them to look forward to."
Ayame gave a hard laugh at this. "Thanks Sakura." She then paused a minute before saying delicately, "You know, I might just try confessing now."
Sakura's smile vanished in a instant. Her words had caused the girl to amass confidence she needed to confess to this other person she loved. That kinda sucked, she thought. She was just trying to make the girl smile, not give her the drive to fall into another's arms. Still, there was nothing she could say or do, Ayame could never be hers anyway.
"You ready to go." Sakura asked masking her depression well, as she pulled out her wallet and retrieved the cost of their meal.
Ayame nodded softly, contemplatively, as the two girls got to their feet and walked out of the restaurant. They were only a short distance from the door when Ayame stopped in her tracks turning to face the kunoichi.
"Sakura. Before we go home, would you take a walk with me? There's a place I want to show you." Ayame spoke in a sharp, forced tone as if through much difficulty.
"Sure." Sakura answered at once without even thinking.
Ayame led the way as the two of them began to walk once more through the village. The hustle of that afternoon had cleared and now the two of them were as if alone. It was approaching midnight by this point and the sky was dark and clear the full moon illuminated the peaceful world below. For that moment Sakura's world seemed perfect; just the moon and the stars her and the woman she loved. Soon Ayame had led her astray from Konoha's streets to instead take a path into the surrounding forest. Both girls remained silent as they moved deeper and deeper into the forests. Sakura began to wonder where the other was taking her. She had said she had a place to show Sakura. She began to wonder what would happen when they got there. She didn't know, and she didn't ask and tried to even not think. what the answers would be. Whatever they were she would be happy just having time like this walk with Ayame.
After about half an hour of silent walking the trees split to reveal a clearing, a serene peaceful hill overlooking a riverbank. Wildflowers grew sporadically all around and the sounds of life echoed in full from the forests. Everything seemed to glow in the moonlight especially Ayame.
"I-is this what you wanted to show me?" Sakura started in disbelief.
"Y-yeah." Ayame spoke hesitantly with an embarrassed smile.
"It's beautiful, Ayame." Sakura said as she turned around in circles taking in the landscape before finding a seat on the side of the grassy hill. Ayame sat right next to her before she could ask still in awe, "How'd you find this place?"
"I know it's probably not the safest thing." Ayame admitted in a low tone as she gazed endlessly at the stars above them, "For someone like me to explore these forest alone." She turned her attention from the stars to the other girl before she continued with an air of melancholy, "but, this way, I can escape the drudging monotony of working at Ichiraku everyday and remind myself of all the wonders of the world."
"Is it really that bad, Ayame?" Sakura looked back at the girl as she asked her question.
"It is." She took a deep breath, "Or it was, I was contemplating quitting, telling my father that I wanted to leave to see the world for once. I mean it's not like Ichiraku doesn't make enough money to hire replacements for me. I wanted a change from that life as the ramen girl, I wanted something different."
"Then why didn't you do it? Your dad is a great guy. He'd definitely understand how you felt." Sakura said with enthusiasm.
"Those feelings. The ones I told you about. They started to form. They weren't focused at first but suddenly I didn't feel like leaving anymore." She had a dream like blank gaze as she said each new group of words.
"Ayame..." Sakura said longingly turning the girl's gaze focus on her.
"Sakura would you promise me something?" Ayame asked suddenly as if it was the most important question in the world.
"What is it, Ayame?" Sakura asked shaking slightly, unsure of anything.
"Promise me, that no matter what I say tonight, you won't hate me." Ayame said showing an eager nervousness on the same level as the other.
"I could never hate you Ayame, never." Sakura said with due confidence.
Ayame gasped for air before continuing with a shy yet determinant speech, "You remember that dream I told you about, that on where the brave, strong shinobi sweeps me off my feet?"
"Of course." Sakura nodded.
"The last few nights I've been having those dreams constantly. Only now the dreams are vivid and I'm able to see the shinobi clearly." Ayame's words were as if visible next to the incredible tension in the air between the two girls.
"So do you know who it is?' Sakura asked beginning to shake as she tried her best to avoid Ayame's eyes.
"It's the same as the one I like." Ayame said now forcing Sakura's eyes to focus on hers as she spoke.
"Ayame..." Sakura didn't know what to say next.
"It's you Sakura. It's you." Ayame confessed a tear forming in her eye as she did. Sakura just opened her mouth in shock and disbelief as if this had been the most terrible and disturbing thing Ayame could have ever told her, not realizing through the fog veiling her mind that it was exactly everything she had ever hoped for.
When no response came from Sakura's mouth, Ayame started trembling and looking away as if she had made the biggest mistake she possibly could. She started in a frantic tone through soft tears, " I know, it's wrong Sakura. But after that night, after all that I couldn't help it. I just couldn't."
"I did nothing that night to make you love me." Sakura said coolly, collecting the words that were hitting her finally.
"I know it's not right Sakura. I'm so damn weak that it doesn't even matter to me if it's a girl. If someone does something wonderful like that to protect me, I can't help but fall for them regardless." Ayame continued to cry as she forced difficult feelings to the outside.
"That's not what I meant. You're not weak." Sakura explained in a serious but somehow calm tone. She could only surmise that she was able to stay calm at this moment because Ayame needed her to be. Sakura gave a hard breath before saying somberly, "I was why you were put in danger, I was why you were hurt, and I was the one who subjected you to things I shouldn't have."
"I never blamed you for any of it!" Ayame about yelled as she caught the look of self doubt in the kunoichi's eyes, "Sakura, the reason I faced danger, the reason I was hurt, was because I 'm not as strong as you. But with you at my side a completely terrifying situation suddenly became better."
"Ayame I..." Sakura started but didn't know where to go so just waited for the other to say something.
"I told father that you killed that man in order to protect me." Ayame began to say in a low focused tone, "That was a lie, wasn't it? You killed him because seeing him go so far to hurt me left you unforgiving. You cared so much for your friends that you were willing to go so far. After that I knew. I knew that I loved you, Sakura"
Hearing her actually say the words made Sakura's heart melt, she had trouble thinking but somehow she felt unsatisfied with this conclusion. She continued to argue frantically against herself, "Your right, I murdered him right in front of your face then turned around and like some common rapist, forced you out of your clothes against your will."
"You made your intentions clear from the start, Sakura." Ayame was now the one speaking calmly. She looked away before adding, "You were just going to help me heal, I only fought your offer because I was embarrassed. By that point I was already so enamored with you that I thought it might be hard to resist when you're touch was upon me."
"But you ran away with little more than a word of thanks." Sakura said now in an accusatory, unbelieving tone.
"I couldn't think at that time!" Ayame let out losing her calm to add force to her words, "My only other option was to run up and kiss you and tell you you were my hero and I would always love you."
"Ayame..." Sakura found herself for a third time unable to make any advance in the conversation.
"But love like this isn't something acceptable. I know that's why you're trying so hard to denounce it." Ayame's voice dropped into a depressive lull.
"No. Ayame, don't you see I'm the same?" Sakura admitted feeling liberated as she did so.
"That's a lie. I know you've always fought so hard to make me feel appreciated, but this would be going too far Sakura. You don't have to..." Ayame replied not giving in to Sakura's words.
"I fight for you because I love you!" Sakura raised her voice to a steady one full of certainty, "I have for some time now. That's why I fought so hard for you that day."
"You can't mean that..." Ayame now had a look of disbelief on her face.
"I do. You're the only reason I ever became a regular at Ichiraku." Sakura incorporated a laugh into her words for the first time in a while that night.
"Is that so?" Ayame found a smile and then added in a faux angry tone, "Does that mean you really don't like my ramen as much as you always said you did!"
Sakura began to frantically shake her head saying in a deeply apologetic tone, "N-no, I love your ramen, I could eat every day for the rest of my life and be happy."
"I'd never make you go that far." Ayame gave a chuckle and a warm smile.
"That's a relief."Sakura joined in for a good laugh.
A moment passed with them just laughing and smiling. Soon both girl's eyes were locked into those of the other and things went silent again.
"Sakura?" Ayame broke the silence but not her endless stare into the kunoichi's eyes.
"Yes Ayame." Sakura stared back beginning to blush a little as if she knew what was about to happen.
"S-since you love me a-and I-I love you..." She took a deep hard breath before continuing, " shouldn't we..."
Sakura broke Ayame off in mid sentence, saying in a sensual tone, "Yes, Ayame, we should..." only to brake herself off again before moving in to connect her lips to the other girl's.
Ayame's lips were soft and warm against her kiss. Sakura reveled in how the girl she loved pushed back against her with equal intensity as they kissed for the first time. Sakura soon found that her right arm had found its way behind the other girl and had pulled her closer, deeper into her embrace, deeper into her kiss. Ayame's own arms were then wrapped completely around her, resting on her lower back as they kissed. Sakura took this as a signal and slowly began to use her left hand to stroke the girl's face and soft brown hair. Sakura was soon surprised to find Ayame's tongue flicker against the edge of her lips in a wanting manner; eager to escalate things from intimate to sexual Sakura slowly began to ease her moth open as if she was guiding the other. Ayame began to explore her mouth hotly, the new lovers tongues twisting hard against each other as Sakura and Ayame kissed in the moonlight. Sakura found herself invading the other with her tongue just as excitedly before pulling away to gasp for missed breaths.
"That was..." Ayame was panting heavily as he removed herself from Sakura.
"Amazing..." Sakura who was also panting took the liberty to finish her lover's thoughts.
"Yes..." Ayame nodded through her continued gasps.
"We should go back to my place now." Sakura began to say with a look of deep lust still on her recently kissed lips, "I want to do more with you Ayame."
"No." Ayame replied with passion.
"Alright we don't have to go any further. We could just kiss like that some more, either way I need you."Sakura said with marked disappointment.
"No, I want to do it here tonight, Sakura." Ayame said putting her hand to her lover's face soothingly, stoking it lovingly as her head fell interlocked between Sakura's shoulder and neck.
"In the middle of the forest, Ayame?" Sakura said in disbelief jerking slightly away, jostling the other girl slightly.
"Yes, I want to hold you close to me surrounded by this beauty and this moonlight." Ayame's romantics seemed a little rushed by the raw sexual energy that was forcing them out.
"Okay. It's what I want as well then."Sakura said realizing how undeniably hot the thought of showing Ayame the depth of her love in the middle of this forest, where anyone who stumbled upon them could see, was making her.
"Thanks, Sakura." Ayame cooed into the kunoichi's ear before placing a kiss on her cheek and then down to the line of her throat.
Sakura gave pleasured moans as her lover kissed gently at the flesh of her neck. Gently, Ayame began tugging at the fabric of Sakura's shirt in a beckoning way. Noticing the girl's efforts, Sakura pulled the deep red shirt over her head shyly but excitedly, choosing to undo her simple cotton bra in the process. She watched Ayame's eyes as they explored the newly revealed flesh of her body under the gentle moonlight.
"Beautiful..."Ayame sighed, completely enamored by Sakura's slight but beautiful, feminine frame.
"You think so? How about you show me what I get to play with now?" Sakura said sexually. Somehow being half naked in the open was making her shyness and doubt dissolve.
Ayame nodded with a lusty laugh as she got to her feet. Effortlessly and vigorously she removed her blouse and her own bra, a sexier black piece, and then proceeded to go a step further than the other girl and stripped herself of her skirt; when she returned to her seat next to the one she loved she was naked save for the sexy black undergarment covering her most intimate parts.
Unlike Ayame, Sakura didn't say anything at the new sight of her lover's flesh. Losing herself to her raging sexuality Sakura opted for the more direct approach as she pinned the ramen server to the grass of the hill forcefully. Their mouths were thrust together once more as Sakura attempted to fill every inch of Ayame's sweet, warm mouth with her eager tongue. Sakura's hands traveled magnetically to the Ayame's ample bust, playfully squeezing at the wonderful soft flesh she found there. Breaking the hard kiss, Sakura led her tongue down Ayame's neck and shoulder and finally to take the place of her right hand as it encircled the other girl's hardened left nipple. Ayame was moaning in ecstasy as Sakura, still forcing her to the ground, explored her body with her hands while suckling hotly at her breast. Sakura switched her attention to the other succulent mound of flesh as she found her hand naughtily on a track to explore Ayame's more private bits. Ayame gave a suppressed scream in anticipation as she felt Sakura's hand penetrate the fabric of her remaining lingerie; two fingers at once beginning to pressure her sex as if expertly.
Noticing the intensity of Ayame's new moans, Sakura in full curiosity removed herself from her suck and weaved her head down to explore this new pleasure directly. Lust in her eyes, Sakura enthusiastically stripped the last small piece of cloth from the girl. At the sight of Ayame's sex, pulsing with hot fluids from her previous touch, Sakura found the desire in her surging. Soon the kunoichi's tongue had been inserted into the ramen vendor's sexual core; Ayame was writhing in bliss as she felt Sakura begin to move her tongue within her. Sakura couldn't believe how much she was enjoying the intricacies of this girl's slit, the warmth, the taste, the wetness; somehow with each new lick she couldn't help but think this was the most enjoyable thing she had ever tasted. Her tempo was becoming more and more furious, as were Ayame's hard reactions. Soon Sakura felt Ayame encircle her head with her legs, forcing the kunoichi deeper into her endeavor, and watched as the girl tried her hardest to suppress whatever profane screaming she undoubtedly on the inside wanted her new lover to hear. Noticing Ayame's struggles against herself Sakura braced for what she knew was next; Ayame's muscles convulsed and she gave a hard panting gasp as Sakura soon was rewarded with a soft gush of orgasmic juices.
Ayame's breathing was noticeably heavy as she released Sakura from her leg lock and allowed her to remove her mouth from her still pulsing sex. After recovering enough breath to do so, Ayame said in a soft, sensual voice "I never knew anything could feel that good."
"Hmmm, well I never knew anything could taste as good as you." Sakura replied with a a voice steeped in sexuality. The area around her mouth was glistening with wetness and her tongue was still eagerly licking at her lips.
Ayame opened her mouth to speak, but couldn't find anything to say at this declaration. She was still hot from the sex and desperately wanted more from Sakura. She re-closed the gap between them as she sat back up and took Sakura's lips again, making sure to explore the girl's mouth fully and completely.
Ayame pulled away from the lip-lock after a few minutes. She licked her lips lustfully before saying in a heated voice "You're right. I am pretty good. But here's betting I'll like your taste better."
Sakura laughed at this for several moments. "Let's just see about that then, love." Sakura got to her feet now and proceeded to remove her skirt, then the shorts she wore under them, and then finally her simple, but now thoroughly wet, panties, which she threw to Ayame who took in their smell ad their taste with a single lick allowing her at once to realize what she wanted.
Without letting the kunoichi return to her seat, Ayame slithered forward and forced her mouth at once to Sakura's tight, fluid-spilling sex. Sakura was surprised at this but the feeling of Ayame's hot breath and her even hotter tongue on her most sensitive bits was overwhelming. She could tell Ayame was loving doing this to her as much as she had loved doing it to Ayame as Ayame's tongue excitedly searched out her clit and began to pressure it lightly. Ayame's licks were becoming more and more intense and she soon was finding it harder and harder to remain standing; Ayame soon took notice of this and put forth enough pressure to the girl that made her break and fall at once to the ground where she continued to lovingly force Sakura to writhe in delicious pleasure. Sakura could feel her juices welling up inside her and could feel the electric tingle in her muscles and knew that soon she would give into the girl's hard work. Her hands traveled to the back of the girl's head forcing the girl even deeper inside of her. After a few more well placed licks, Sakura felt her release as she gave way into easily the most intense climax of her young life which she lovingly watched Ayame lick up.
"Did I make you feel good, Sakura?" Ayame teased, knowing the answer very well from the warm liquid that glowed on her lips.
"I really do love you, you know." Sakura laughed and then pulled Ayame into another kiss, this time allowing her to taste herself which she enjoyed.
They kissed lovingly for several minutes. The sounds of their moans into each others blending seamlessly into the soundtrack of the surrounding forest. After several minutes they broke the kiss simply to gaze at length into each others eyes.
Sakura broke her gaze reluctantly as rational thought returned to her. It must be very late by now. Her parents would already be asleep by now and Teuchi probably was wondering where his daughter was. She slowly got to her feet and began collecting her clothing as she spoke in a soft tone, "We should probably be going home now. It's gotten so late and it's probably best we don't stay out here all night."
Ayame remained seated in the grass, apparently not ready to end the night's magic. After digesting Sakura's words she whispered hopefully, "Alright, but who's home would it be that were going to?"
Sakura, now half-dressed, turned to her still naked Ayame at this question. She wasn't expecting the other to be so determined to have things continue, but she was in no place to deny Ayame or herself what they wanted. In a hot voice she said simply, "My parents don't stay up this late. It'll be easy for us to sneak back to my room and have lots more fun if that's what you want, love."
Ayame finally stood and began to dress herself at this saying in a coo as she did so, "Sounds nice."
Once they were fully dressed the two new lovers were locked arm in arm and were rushing at the fastest speeds Ayame could muster toward the Sakura's home. In both their minds they knew that this had only been the beginning.
A/N: I think this might have been my longest chapter ever. God, all I set out for this one was to do a simple sex chapter. I don't know why I ended up spending so much time building up to it. I just let myself write it as it came and didn't allow myself to rush. I hope I still maintained a sufficient level of detail. I'm not sure the first scenes, the one where they meet and the one at the restaurant were as good as they should have been. This chapter could have been better, but I still like it. For its length the sex was really quite simple. Nothing really new except for the change of scenery. Anyways, I've about given up on expecting reviews for this fic, as such I'm going to skip taking a vote again since I'd probably end up with only four or five votes anyway and probably end up writing another fic nobody wants to read. As such my next fic will probably be the Ino X Hinata one that got second place in the last vote. Here's hoping that one will attract more fans. Oh and expect the fial chapter for this one soon.
