Well, here I am, kiddos, I lied, I didn't get the story done. Too much distraction (mainly called family and sibling with a cold at that). I do know how it will end (please don't be mad at me) I just have to figure out to get there from the point in the story I am at right now.
For those who reviewed: Thank you here's more, I have updated. Thank you, yes, you will hear about Sasuke, see chapter, you will also like to know that we also see the daughter (who I tried not making Mary Sueish) Thank you very much. Um, danke, but sorry, I haven't tapped fully into my short chapter ability. That's just a warning. (Looking ahead, these are probably the shorter of the chapters, so deal) Thanks, oh, read, first meeting ahead. Last but not least, thanks for reading this still.
Be
warned, picky people, a character may seem OOC in this but we are
inside his mind, and one has to think that he has emotion
somewhere. Why not inside his brain? (By the way, we are switching
views)
Last but not least: Naruto isn't mine.
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10 months later: (Sasuke POV)
I really didn't want to be here. But I couldn't miss one of my top gennins battle in the final round. I sat where the kages of the lands sat. I looked over and saw Naruto looking at the battle with interest. I could tell this by the way he was leaning forward. He was looking carefully at the red hair gennin on the field. He looked like at her with what looked like some parental pride. I wonder why. I look at the girl, she looks nothing like him. I would expect any child of Naruto's to have the golden sun-kissed blonde hair with curious blue eyes. Not with Crimson Red hair and dark almost black eyes. I had not caught the name of this girl. I watch her battle. She is quick and she is strong. Two aspects that together or separate have potential to make her a very powerful ninja. She wins the battle against one of her fellow Konoha gennins. I hear a soft 'yes, good job, Satsuki. You remember your training,' come from Naruto.
I look over to Naruto. "You seemed to have been invested in that kuonichi, Naruto-dobe. Why?"
He looks at me with an odd look. "Well, you can say that she is like a niece to me. Her mother is one from our group of gennins," he said mysterious. I looked at him for a little bit longer and then turned my attention back to the battleground.
After the matches were through in which the red hair gennin Satsuki, had made it into the semifinal round before losing to a suna nin, I walked through the village. I hadn't been in this village for 14 years now. It was strange to see how things had changed. As I was walking, I was ran into by someone. I looked at this someone; it was the redhead that Naruto had seemed so interested in at the battle. She looked at me and I noticed the dark eyes that she had.
"Oh, I'm sorry, um sorry. I'm a baka. Um, I'm should really look where I am going," she anxiously stutter. "It won't happen again."
I look at her curiously. Does she know who she ran into? "That's good, make sure you don't do it again," I replied dryly.
"Satsuki, what do you think you are doing? I'm sorry, sir. My daughter at times is very much the klutz," some one familiar said from behind me. "I swear some days; she takes after her uncle in more then enough ways."
"That's okay. She didn't do any harm to me," I said turning around to face the mother of the girl. I was shocked to see that it was Sakura who was standing behind me. She, too, looked at me in shocked.
"Sasuke, you're here. Naruto said that there was a good chance but I doubted it. Anyway, it's nice seeing you again. Satsuki and I should probably get going. We're going to go out with Naruto and Hinata to celebrate this ones matches today. Hopefully, we'll see each other again one day," she says coolly. Who can blame her for being cold to me? I did practically abandon her after our little stint when I was in Konoha those many years ago. But it looked like she had moved on found another to love and to have a baby with. She looked at me for a few more seconds and then took Satsuki and left. I was left standing there all alone, just like how I wanted it to be.
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Once again sorry, if this didn't please you, you know how to complain. I don't take offense, unless you just say 'you suk' and you don't explain the reasoning behind this. You aren't giving me a direction to improve on my mistakes. (I grew up in a family that taught me that critical comments are sometimes good for you.)
Hoped you like it, will be back within a couple days maybe, so go bonkers and review. Next chapter, we see through another person, meaning not Sasuke or Sakura. Wait and find out who it is and find out what happens.
