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Hope have enjoyed this story so far (those who have been complaining about the shortness this is a longer chapter)

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Sasuke's POV

I enter the cave where the 'sound had began.' It was here where were Orochimaru had founded his first lab and started the idea of the Sound Village. I fear for Sakura's daughter. If she was here, that meant something bad was going to happen to her if it hadn't already happen. I walk into the meeting room. Orochimaru always had a grand almost throne like meeting room in his complexes. It showed the ego of the monster that was Orochimaru.

"I see you have made your way here alone. That is good. You didn't make it difficult for us. That's good, incredibly stupid but good," the man who was standing behind one of the columns replied. I heard a snap and then suddenly there were ninjas surrounding me.

I smirk at this. Does this leader of theirs realize that he is facing someone who almost become Orochimaru's host? Someone that had defeated Orochimaru by himself? I quickly get into position for them to attack me. They attack me and I quickly wipe the floor with them.

"Where is Satsuki?" I ask as soon I finish with the thugs who came after me. "Don't make me ask twice?"

"You're protective of your daughter, how quaint. I never perceive you as a caring father," the man replied. "Alright you want to see your little girl well, come with me."

I follow him. I take a good look at him, he is my height, with drab medium brown hair that had a slightly overgrown military cut to it. I follow him deeper and deeper into the complex. I wanted to take him then and there but if I do that I would not find Satsuki and return her to her mother. He leads me to the cell area, and there he attacks. He has a kunai and attempts to stab me with it. I activate my Sharingan and quickly dodge it. My response to this is a round kick to his side. We battle for awhile before I take out my sword Nagashi. This wasn't going to be as easy as I thought it would be. We battle some more ending with my sword going through his chest. I was tired and injured but I had made it out of this battle victorious.

I look at the dying leader, I ask him, "Where is Satsuki? Answer and you will be forgiven for turning against me."

He looks at and weakly smirks. "She's here somewhere, that's all I'll tell you. But find her soon, or you'll never find her alive." I was going ask him what he meant by that but he was no longer breathing.

Crud, crud, crud, crud, I doubt that she is in these cells because that would be too easy. I searched through these cells still and found nothing. I decide to use a trick that I had learned from my team-mate, Naruto. Kage no Bushin. Two clones of me appeared and we spit up and look for her.

Even with 3 of us searching for Satsuki, it still took awhile. When one of us did find Satsuki, he immediately disappeared and the remaining us, knew where to go. When we find her in one of the medical rooms, she looks like she is in pain. I dispel my other clone and I look at her. Her eyes are looking at me or through me, I can't tell. Her eyes are flickering from black to red. Ahh not good, not good at all. Her eyes when red looks like the Sharingan. Naruto told me that she had the potential to have the Sharingan not that she had it. I remember the first few experiences of activating the Sharingan. It was slightly painful, like a pinch, when I had first activated the Sharingan. This pain soon dissipated after couple of tries. I can't imagine what it feels like to Satsuki who had never felt this before and to make it worse it was out of control. I place my hand on her shoulder. She reflexively turns her head towards me.

I look at her calmly and tell her "Calm down, concentrate on the Sharingan."

She tries this and for a second, it works, but she screams in agony. "Make it stop," she whimpers. Shoot, this isn't working, if she goes back to the uncontrolled Sharingan, she'll be in pain but if she stays in Sharingan, she'll be in worse pain. What to do?

"Okay, that didn't work. Satsuki, look at me, this pain goes away, but you have relax and let go of the Sharingan."

She nods painfully and proceeds to release the Sharingan. Her eyes fade to black. She looks at me for a second and then faints. I pick her up and take her back to Oto, where she can be re-united with her mother.

When I get back to Oto, I am greeted by Sakura who gladly takes her daughter back. I tell her and the remaining ninjas since Naruto had make his way back to Konoha, that they could remain in Oto until Satsuki was well enough to travel and then if they wanted to leave they could. They agree to this. They all leave, except Sakura who remained faithfully at her daughter's side.

"Sakura, we need to talk," I said calmly but with a hint of impatience.

She looked at me with anger rising in her eyes. "You know what, the last time you said that was the night you got me pregnant. You came to my apartment and you wanted to talk. After that night, you left. You ignored me. You left me to deal with the responsibilities of being a single mom. You know what you don't deserve to be the father of my child."

I look down. I had down some rotten things in my past but Sakura was right I didn't deserve to be a dad. I don't even think I could handle being a father. She was right about me being selfish even if she didn't say out loud. I had gone to her apartment that night on a whim. I really did want to talk to her that night, to see how she was doing and to tell her of my new goals for the future, how I wanted Otokagure to be acknowledge as a good and decent village, how revenge in the long run doesn't solve a problem, it just leaves you alone and more often then naught bitter. But I saw her that night, looking alone and miserable in it. I decided to do something completely out of character, I kissed her. In response, she kissed back and one thing led to another. That morning when I woke up, I realized I had gone too far, stepped out of line and was frighten by it. She tried to contact me at the meeting but I could not let my shame down. We could not be together. She would not leave Konoha and I had a duty to Oto. So I ignored her. I left without saying goodbye, thinking that it was for the best. Looking back, I realize my mistake and am sorry for it. This is my side of the story, I cannot tell her this side because she will either laugh at me, or cry or get so angry that she can't stand my presence. The last two I fear most of all, because that meant I hurt her.

"You are right, Sakura, I don't deserve to be her father but the thing is I am. I am willing to make up for past mistakes and if you allow it let her know her father. I made not be able to make it up to you but allow me to at least get to know my daughter. She will need it now that she knows where she comes from."

"How can you be sure that she knows that you are her father? The men who took her might not have even told her of her heritage."

"Oh, she probably knows. The men had experimented on her before I had gotten there, I'm sorry, Sakura. When I found her, her eyes were flickering the Sharingan. She was in pain but she understood me. I told her to try and control the Sharingan and when she did it caused the pain she was experiencing to become worse. We eventually got her to release the Sharingan and to go back to her normal black eyes. That is when she fainted."

I look at Sakura and realize that she hadn't understood fully what had happened to her daughter back in the complex. My telling it to her had shown her the extent to which these men would go to hurt me. I think it had save Satsuki's life from being ended sooner that her father wasn't in her life and that she had her mother's family name. I was grateful to Sakura in some part for hiding my daughter from me. At the same time, I was extremely mad at her for doing this to me.

I leave Sakura there and assign a couple of my ANBU guards to stand guard. Nobody was going to get Sakura's daughter while I am in charge here. I walk back to the house that I live in. I was going to go to sleep and maybe tomorrow, it would be better. I always had hated falling asleep, it would mean a possibility of dreams that I didn't want to dream. Dreams of my family being murdered in front of me even though I knew I couldn't stop it, I still tried to and was stopped by Itachi and sometimes by others who had been close to me. I dreaded these dreams. I welcomed the dreamless sleep that came to me so rarely. I had fallen asleep when a loud knock at my door awoken me. I groggily woke up. There should be punishment for those that awake the Otokage when he is trying to sleep. Maybe I should bring it up at the next government meeting.

But anyway, my sleep was interrupted by a knock at the door. I look at the clock that is next to my bed and it reads 6 o'clock. I had gotten back here at midnight. I had been asleep for 6 hours. I went to the door in my pajamas, I didn't really care what the people who had knocked thought when they would see the Otokage answer the door in nothing else but a pair of navy blue pajama pants and matching navy blue fuzzy slippers. I open the door and see a woman around my age in a medical jacket. I instantly fear that they bring me news of Satsuki's death. She had been doing well when I left. Still unconscious but fine. Perhaps it is other news

"What is it?" I ask trying to push the fear out of my voice. I don't like letting my emotions be shown when dealing with people. When I was younger, I thought it was a sign of weakness and I continue it because I am use to it.

The woman looks at me. I know she is frightened by me. She stutters out, "Umm, sir, we have found the reason for Satsuki-san's current situation. Apparently the men who took her, inserted a drug of sorts that tampers with the genetics. It seems that this specific drug affects people with a kekkai genkai, making it painful for them to even try to activate their kekkai genkai."

I am ticked and shocked by this information. "Where would these men get this drug from?" I wondered to myself out loud.

"We don't know exactly, sir. But all guesses out there, it could be something that was left behind by Orochimaru, or they could have been supplied it by a foreign nation that wanted you to be thrown out of governing. But we don't know exactly."

I growl to show irritation. I knew that answer, she didn't need to say out loud for me to know that its origins were still somewhat mysterious. "Has the mother been told of this development?" I was not looking forward to seeing a Sakura that had learned of this condition.

"No, sir. She is currently resting. We didn't want to risk waking her up after she just fell asleep. We also know of her reputation of being taught by the legendary Tsunade and having picked up some traits from her. I'm sorry, sir, but we thought you would be less dangerous to wake up then she would be," the medic replied, eyes looking straight down.

Had I gotten that weak, that someone would dare wake me up before someone else? Oh well, this was not going to be fun telling Sakura about her daughter. Sakura could barely stand my presence in general, how will she react when I have to tell her this news.

I looked at this medic with my best attempt of 'to make sure that I am not the first one to be woken up ever again' facial expression. "Is this drug that Satsuki-san was injected with, is it reversible?"

This look from me made the medic even more nervous and she started to stutter a little bit, "Um, n-no, Otokage-sama." There goes the title, I must have made an impression on this medic. "We don't think we can reverse the affects that the drug has on Satsuki-san. I am sorry, Otokage-sama. But it seems like there was another drug injected into her bloodstream, one that would force her to activate her kekkai genkai. We think we can force that one out of her bloodstream and it will hopefully no longer affect her."

I had been wondering if there was a second drug given to her. Naruto had said nothing of Satsuki being able to use Sharingan but she did have the potential to use. It explained a little on how I found her. I let out a sigh, this was not going to be easy explaining it to Sakura. I looked at the medic, "Lets go explain it to the mother. But first I need to get changed. Give me a minute, I'll be right out."

The medic looked at me with the expression like that of a frightened rabbit when I mention explaining it to the mother. She was nervous around me but what made her more nervous was Sakura. I still couldn't help but think, have I gotten that weak, that Sakura could frighten someone more then I could? Oh well, I need to work on my frightening skills. I will be better then Sakura. When we got to the room where Satsuki had been placed in, I noticed that Sakura was resting non-peacefully in the chair supplied next to the bed that Satsuki was in. Satsuki still wasn't stirring. I walked carefully in. I nudged Sakura awake. She woke up and looked around. When she saw me, she gave me the look of death.

"Don't give me that look. I know I deserve it but it still doesn't make me want to tell you what was found out any quicker," I replied dryly. Maybe it was the fact that I was woken up before I could have my morning tea but I just couldn't deal with Sakura's not so subtle hatred towards me right now. "I just had one of my medic ninjas wake me up from a very good, very rare sleep. She's scared witless of me but her team is good. They found out what is wrong with your daughter, Sakura."

Sakura's eyes went wide at this. I knew this information enticed her into at least accepting my presence for a little while. I tell her what the medic nin tells me. She sat there quietly listening, looking like she's going to give me a chance before she rips my throat out.

When I finish, she looks at me, "Is Satsuki going to be alright?"

"Nareka and her medic team are good, she should be alright. The only thing is that she won't be able to activate her Sharingan without any pain. My medical team is not that good to remove something that already has altered someone's genetics. Unless you in your medical knowledge can do it?"

Sakura shook her head, no.

"That's what I thought."

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Well, that's the end, just kidding. There is a epilogue after this. We get to see if Satsuki is going to be alright. (some of you are probably going darn it, you didn't kill her off. Why would I kill off a character, when they aren't threatening me? Now that Story fairy however, I need to talk to it, rile it up alittle, make sure it know how to deliver a proper story to me. None of this A,B, F, Z, K, M, P,D, etc... points in the road, I would like A,B,C,D, E, F, etc...). There is a slight problem regarding that muse, it has decided to imspire me with another plot line (it probably won't be posted because this story would be very tricky to put together not that the beginning of this story wasn't tricky but this recent plot has to have a non-corny (believable) set up (Hint: think Naruto and a fairy tale (the 6 swans) fuzed)) But yeah, I'm done with the conclusion finally, will be up in a couple days, earlier if I get snowed in. You know that add chapter button is just too tempting when I am faced with lots of snow. I'll get it all posted priar December 7th (my finals start that coming week)

Um, anyway, if you find yourself chuckling at some part of this story, thank you, you share the same sadistic humor as I do. (I didn't realize writing it but looking back, I found myself chuckling at some parts)

If you can't tell I wrote this part in pieces, I was at home, my muse tends to leave me alone at home more often then naught. So if the personality changes, sorry. So some of this was my brain acting out, kinda loopy, kinda glad that I got a pillowtop double bed to claim ownership at my parents. Oh, yeah, Sakura's hate towards Sasuke go alittle bonkers. Sakura's hate was annoying me (I'm a optimist, that glass is half full) so some of it came out in Sasuke's personality. Sorry, y'all but I don't think that this story will end in a happy SasuSaku ending. That should appease some and besides in the beginning, I said slight Sasusaku, to me that means the pairing broke. I think the fangirl in Sakura's personality that goes "oh, Sasuke-kun" has been trampled and otherwise pummeled by the rest of the personality groupings in Sakura's head.

Finally, before I get a comment from someone who asks about how Sasuke knows Kage Bushin, let me just say that Kage no Bushin is something that isn't only Naruto knows, Kakashi knows it as well, and you have to suspect that others know this technique as well.Sasuke, though, doesn't use as many clones because he doesn't have that chakra reserve like Naruto does.

Correction: Sorry about the fight scene, I don't do fighting well. I tend in my stories to skip over the fighting, if you ever read my other stories you'll see it. (so if that you think the villians didn't seem powerful, sorry, i know that's an area I (and probably others) need to improve on) I killed the villian off a little too quickly? Sorry.

Oh, one last you know , read, maybe analyze and click that pretty purplish blue with review on it and send me one. (I still want to beat my 27 reviews from my highest reviewed story so far). Thank you.