The first part of this chapter is somebodies...-cough-Mira Sing-cough-. OK i have really thought about the nice reviews this time! I am so grateful! Oh and I'm sorry about the "nasty" thing. (Kara has moved in with Ki Adi and there will be some dark Jedi. I know my sentences were people are talking were incorrect,but thats the way I write. I'm sorry(
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She stood in the presence of about 15 civilians on the planet of Onderon.Beside her stood Kreia and Mandalore.
She had a cruel smile on her sheet white face.

"Are you going to help!?" one of Queen Talia's Generals (she hadn't at all cared his name.) yelled.

She nodded and with cat like reflexes she leaped up and slammed her red double sided light saber into the Chest of one of the rebel civilians. She dashed to the next one not caring for her companions. She kicked the man's legs, causing Him to fall Mandalore's repeating blaster tore through the man's skull. Mira's hand erupted in blue lighting and easily disposed of the rest of the rebels.

She stretched as Mandalore looked for remains.

"Thank you ma'am!" the General exclaimed to her.

"Yeah well I saved your pitiful life back there...So I expect a payment." She said turning on her heel and heading out.

Kara woke up, yawned, stretched,leaned over, and fell out of bed and landed on her head.

"Ouch!" she groaned loudly.

She put on her padawan robe and walked out of her room. Ki Adi greeted her on her way out.

"Where are you going?" he asked Kara.

"Out" she croaked

Ki Adi then shoved a cup of warm caff in her hands.

"Remember Training!" he told her.

Kara gave him a dazed smile and drank it.She shuffled out.

Kara was going to see a good friend of hers named Visas (This girl was named after Visas she is not "My life is for yours" Visas.) Kara began to see the dingy apartment before somebody yelled "Master Jedi!"

Kara spun around to see a woman who looked very stressed waving.

"Um I'm sorry but,-" "Please help the children at my school are over running the place!"

"Miss I will try to help as much as I can, but I'm only a Padawan." Kara said staring at her feet.

"It does not matter to me please help!" the woman cried.

"Fine..." Kara mumbled.

"The woman led Kara into a tiny building with one cramped room. Boys,girls,and aliens were cramped on small benches.

"Two of my male students Tli'twee and Teff have been harassing other students and just cut off a young girls braid!" the woman said pointing to two boys sitting on the front desk. The one boy wore rags and had dirty blond hair and the other was wearing and over sized space jacket and had black hair.

One boy wolf whistled at Kara and the other called to her saying "Hey why don't you come with us instead of that hag. We are more fun!"

Kara stood in front of the boy and slapped him across the face.

"Hey, I didn't deserve that." he said while the other howled with laughter.

"Come" Kara said stiffly.

They followed and Kara took them outside.

"Hey listen to me you two..."Kara said "I don't want to report this to the Jedi Concil, so I will give you one chance."

"Hey can we see your under-wrappings?" one boy asked.

"No-SHUT IT NOW!" Kara screamed swiping at the boy.

"Why do you act this way? Is it you life at home? Do your parents hate you? Well guess what? My parents are dead! So you can tell me!" She growled.

"My parents love me!" Both boys said at the same time.

"Please be good..." Kara said plea fully.

"Fine" the blond grumbled. The other boy stared at the blond and nodded.

"Good!" Kara said giving each boy a pat on the head.

They followed her in and Kara received a "THANK YOU!" from the frazzled teacher. Kara left smiling at the parade of young girls following her and calling her "Big Sister".

Kara knocked on Visas's door and hurt a thump and someone shout. "I told you Drakk! Go I am not paying the toll for using the public 'fresher!"

"It's me" Kara said in a bored tone.

The door opened and as Kara expected, Visas tackled her with a hug.

"Hey kid!" Visas said grinning.

"Hi!" Kara said back.

"Oh my your getting a little busty!" Visas said stabbing Kara in the shoulder with her sharp nail. (I know Kara's only 10 but i knew girls at that age who were busty!)

"What?!" Kara asked nervously feeling her face get hot.

Kara met Visas at the Jedi temple when she was 8. Ki Adi had introduced Kara and Visas was overjoyed of Kara. Visas was an expert scoundrel and she lived on the streets when she was young. Yet Visas was only 21, but she managed by herself.

"How's the old man?" Visas said prodding the fire in her fireplace.

"...He is fine." Kara answered.

"Uh-huh" Visas said while going through a drawer by the chair Kara sat in.

"I have a present for the little busty Jedi padawan!" Visas said mockingly.

"Why can't you be serious?!" Kara hissed.

"Oh my dear,dear,poor, and pitiful Kara." Visas said "I get soooo tired of being serious on the streets so it's nice to be a little crazy every once and awhile!"

"Kara you are the serious one." she continued. "I know your a Jedi,but just have fun!"

Visas then mumbled something about "Damn Jedi making kids grow too fast." and smirked at Kara.

"Can I please have my present?" Kara asked smiling back.

"Hold on" Visas said walking to her room.
Visas walked out with a small box. Kara sprung from her seat and grabbed the box.

'Twas a small violet Crystal with a note that had the message "Ka'di anitli sarwec."

"Its a light saber crystal. Ki Adi told me you wanted a violet crystal,so I have one."

"Thank-you" Kara said staring in wonder at the small crystal as if it were a book that told all of the secrets of the galaxy."What does the note say?"

"It says "Many secrets are untold." in an ancient language of the Ithorians. I just liked the way it sounded." Visas said happily, then her tone grew serious."But maybe it means that there is a boy that loves you and will ignore the Jedi code and kidnap you!"

Kara stared at the wall, her smile fading. She was about to make a come back, but there was a knock at the door.

"Hey Visas its Mission I thought we were going to have a drink..." a voice called.

"Your too young to drink Mish,wait... How old are you?!" Visas cried.

The visitor was a young blue Twi'lek.

"I am 20!" The Twi'lek hissed her head tails (or lekku) were thrashing violently.

"Anyhow..Ignore the kid." Visas said in a bored tone. "How are Rev and Carth?"

"Well they went to some major bank vault planet that starts with an A" Mission said ignoring Kara. "Oh I forgot to tell you!
After the Star Forge was destroyed Revan and Carth went in the Medical bay (The med room in the Ebon Hawk) and well you can guess what they did!" Mission said winking.

Kara's eyes grew huge and she let out a small whimper. Mission smiled and said "My names Mission nice to meet you!"

Kara replied the same and Visas asked "Where's Big Z?"

"He didn,t wanna come,'cause he was tired." Mission growled.

Visas smiled taking a drink of her Black Ale.

hours later

"Well I should go!" Kara said gleefully.

Visas stared at the wall then said to Kara,"Bye-bye go give that fried Gizka to Master -hic- Vrook."

"Maybe I should come back tomorrow it looks like your going to have a massive hangover." Kara said throwing Mission a worried glance.

"No! It's OK Kara I will stay!" Mission chirped.

"Well it was fun watching an example of a drunken Bantha,but i must leave.Bye." Kara said walking out of the apartment.

"Farewell and Good day-or is it night?" Visas said with a slurred voice her blue eyes slightly out of focus.

Kara paced through the alleys of the under city. It was past dark and she couldn't't remember which way to go.

"Oh force! I forgot my lesson." she sighed feeling a wave of guilt and worry.

Soon she was running hoping to find someone who didn't look shady or drunk. Kara ran down an ally by a Cantina. Suddenly,Kara felt an hand cover her entire face.
She bit down on the gloved hand and spun around. Three figures wearing a robe and a hood stood before her.

"Our masters will be very pleased we found you Kara Rand." one said. (This really sounds like a Dark Jedi saying "Lord Malak was most displeased when you escaped Taris alive.")

"I didn't do anything! Now leave me alone!" Kara yelled.

One of the Dark Jedi threw Kara into a Stasis and ordered "Pick her up." to the other.

Kara easily broke out of the stasis and began to kick and scream at the former Jedi holding her.

"Such anger young Jedi" The leader dark Jedi commented "you would make a great sith lord one day."

Kara began to scream something,but suddenly felt her throat tightening. Soon she hung limp in the arms of the dark Jedi.(She passed out from choking.)

"They will be communicating through the force. She won't know it's an illusion.."

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I know my spelling stinks. But soon I will spell check each and every chapter.

It's hard for Kara to follow the Jedi code. She has to many emotions so don't flip out if she cries at one point , because she can't help it.

Dustil Onasi will come into the story at one point. I have to purposely make him younger than he really is.

Well that was chapter 5. I have been having trouble with italics. Kya!

Well I hope you have a great day and thanks for the nice,cruel,vile,lovely,or whatever reviews. I will ignore the mean ones and keep on moving! punches air

Also my age...is...13! I'm 13 yippee!

The Force will be with you forever!