Well guys, I must say that it's a pleasure writing for all of you. Nobody's attempted to flame me yet, and I've been getting compliments, so I must be doing something right. Now for a little bit of back story on Nenacu. I originally got the name by tapping random keys on the keyboard in frustration once after all of my original names were all taken. Nenacu is what popped out, and I thought it was a good name. I've gone with that ever since. The character has developed in my head over the years and Nenacu is really the only name that ever fit him. So, there he is. Now, for the current harem list.
Hinamori, Nemu, Hinata, Yugito, and Ayame. The polls are still open for a little while longer, but just for a little while. Get your votes in quickly.
Oh, by the way, my friend decided to draw my rendition of Naruto for me. You can find it at her deviant art page here. Shteph22 at deviantart. Check out all of her other stuff too, she's an awesome artist. She's even drawn her own rendition of Nenacu.
Now then, if my little brainchild would kick things off..
"Bah, Nenacu does not own Naruto or Bleach. He does however own me, Nenacu. Odd how that works eh? Please don't steal me, I like it here."
Chapter 5: Long Lost Friend.
Naruto woke up earlier than he was accustomed to, probably due to the fact that he had a mission he was looking forward to. It could have also been the fact that his father's spirit had been watching him sleep for the past 15 minutes. He rubbed the sleep out of his eyes and waved at his dad before getting dressed, making absolutely sure every weapon was easily in reach. He looked at his dad again and grinned, pulling the infamous tri-pronged kunai from his pouch.
"Hey, Tou-san, where did you get the idea for hiraishin? I didn't even think it was possible until Kyuubi forced me to learn it. I guess he figured the method behind it out during the battle with you." He looked at the kunai thoughtfully before stashing it away safely in his pouch.
Minato crossed his arms, looking up at the ceiling. "You know, I'm not too sure where I got the idea for any of my techniques.. I just thought that they sounded cool at the time and I figured out how to do it. Speaking of my techniques, have you met an old pervert with.."
"Ero-sennin?" Naruto cut in. "Yeah, I know him well enough. You wanted to know if he taught me the rasengan right?" Minato chuckled ad the name his son called his teacher and nodded. "Yeah, he even told me what you were trying to do with it. I've got that down but.." Naruto looked around at his apartment and grinned. "How about I show you? We'll need to move to a more open area though, it's pretty dangerous."
Minato nodded and followed Naruto out of the house and into the team seven training ground. He smirked at the sight of the three logs still buried in the ground. He remembered his test here still. He had been the one tied to the log.
Naruto stood in the center of the clearing, holding his hand out. He took a deep breath and looked at Minato. "Now, I know this won't hurt you, you're a spirit, but I haven't tried it this way yet. I assume Nenacu-sensei already told you about the odd effect Kyuubi had on my affinity." Minato nodded, eager to see the finished product of his technique. "Well, I'm going to attempt to use all three at once. Just using the wind caused a crater."
He took a deep breath and began to access all of the different chakra flowing through his body, focusing all of it in the palm of his hand. At first, only the rasengan formed, albeit made of his new golden chakra. Soon though, a crackling of both electricity and fire engulfed the sphere in his hand while four blades of wind formed outside of the sphere. He grinned to himself and slammed the swirling mas of chakra into the ground below him. The earth below him gave way as his attack spread into a tight sphere of crackling, burning, red wind. Naruto ducked in the center of the attack, covering himself with a thin aura of chakra to protect himself from the ill effects of the attack.
When the wind finally died out, Minato saw Naruto standing in the center of a completely smooth glass crater, the fire and electricity in the attack having melted the ground. Naruto himself was panting heavily from the strain of the new technique. He climbed out of the crater and sat down cross legged, waiting for his energy to return. "Well... I think.. I may have.. overdone it..."
Relieved and amazed that his son was completely unharmed after such an attack, Minato began laughing. "I'm not so sure that's the case. It looked like you used the bare minimum you needed for that. If you ever get that off in battle, it'll be a one shot, last ditch attack. I don't need to tell you this, but I don't think you should ever do that again unless you have no other options.
Naruto stood up shakily, slowly regaining his composure. "Yeah, I don't need to be told twice. If I hadn't shielded myself when I did, I'd be in the intensive care ward of the hospital even with kyuubi helping my body regenerate. I want to try one more thing though.."
Hinata had awoken just as early as Naruto, but had lain in bed for a while longer, thinking about her actions the previous night. Thinking that she may have done something wrong instead of truly getting her feelings across, she dressed herself in a hurry, forsaking her usual jacket outfit for a pair of black capri pants and a tight powder blue t-shirt. She checked her reflection in the mirror to make sure her hair was in place before stepping into her sandals and rushing out of the compound, byakugan active in order to find the one person that shone like a beacon in her sight.
She had arrived in time to see the dangerous sphere of chakra grow and disapate and watched as the object of her affections crawled out of the yawning glass crater of his creation. She was about to go to him when she saw something strange. He appeared to be talking to somebody that wasn't there. She suddenly remembered what Naruto had been telling her about his father's spirit the night before and realized that he was probably showing his father how far he'd come.
Noticing something strange, she refocused on the scene in front of her. She watched, entranced, as she could see Naruto gathering two different chakra into his hands. Her eyes widened as his hands went through a blur of seals that she had never thought were possible to work together.
Naruto finished the set of seals and pointed at a nearby tree with the index and middle fingers of his right hand. "Hiden: Chi Dengeki no Jutsu!" (A/N literally blood shock jutsu) From the tips of his fingers what appeared to be red lightning arced into the tree faster than a trained eye could follow. The effect was different than regular electricity would cause though, as the bolt jumped through the cellular structure of the tree it burned holes through instead of catching the tree itself on fire. The bolt proceeded to strike the boulder behind the tree, turning the contact point to glass..
"Heh, well that's interesting and frightening all at once. An attack the mixes the properties of fire and electricity. I don't want to imagine what would happen were you to hit somebody with that." Minato applauded his son for his enginuity. "I have a feeling that the changes kyuubi has caused to your body from your merge will become a bloodline. No fancy dojutsu or anything physical aside from enhanced chakra reserves and an affinity for more elements than normal." He caught Hinata out of the corner of his eye and grinned.
Naruto saw this and turned to see Hinata watching him, face glowing with pride at his strength. He waved her over with a wave, his fox grin creeping onto his features. "Good morning Hinata-hime, You normally up this early?"
Hinata blushed at being called out but approached despite herself. "No, not really Naruto-kun.. Um... What were you doing out here?" She gestured at the crater in the ground and over to the tree he had hit earlier that looked like it was rapidly withering, steam pouring from the clean hole that the attack had passed through.
Naruto chuckled to himself, scratching the back of his neck. "I'm just trying out a few new jutsu I'd been thinking about creating." He looked around to view his handiwork and chuckled nervously. "I guess they succeeded, but they're a little dangerous to be sure."
Hinata giggled nervously and nodded, having seen the full destructive force that were Naruto's experiments. "Um, I wanted to talk to you about last night.. What I did was.. What I wanted to say is,"
Naruto smiled genuinely, placing his index finger against her lips. "Don't you go apologysing for what you feel Hime, I've known for a while. I've just been waiting for you to gain the confidence to let me know for yourself." Nenacu turned to scowl at Minato who was aww-ing at the two. "Can it pops."
Hinata blinked and looked in the direction Naruto had turned to. "So I was right, you were talking to your father." She bowed in that direction. "Um, it's very nice to meet you sir, though it's very odd to talk to somebody I can't see or hear.."
Still sniggering, Minato turned to his son. "Got yourself a Hyuuga girl eh? Nice catch! Try this, channel some of your new energy into her eyes. That should shock the rest of her system sufficiently."
Naruto cocked an eyebrow at his father, but shrugged and did as he was told, placing his fingertips on Hinata's temples. After a small shock of discomfort, Hinata opened her eyes, feeling as if she was able to see things more clearly than before. She was shocked to find that she could see what looked like an older Naruto standing where there had been nobody before. She gasped, realizing exactly who Naruto's father was. That was the one thing she hadn't been told.
Naruto had been looking up at the sky to check the time. 'Damn, I'm late!' He looked back down at Hinata with a smile on his face. "I'll explain it all completely when I get back. I'll knock some sense into that bastard this time, there's no way he could have become stronger than me as I am now." He cupped her cheeks in his palms and kissed her forehead before vanishing with a whip of his clothing. Minato had followed just as quickly.
They arrived at the gates of Konoha several minutes late, to see the rest of his team standing there, ready to leave. "Hey guys, sorry about that. I got carried away testing a couple new jutsu." He received nods of understanding from his team. Sakura smiled to herself at how much her friend had matured. Nenacu sent a furtive glance at Minato who nodded in turn. The other two, however, were new to Naruto. One was a tall, dark haired, cat eyed man. He was wearing the usual attire of a jounin, but something about him screamed anbu to Naruto. The other reminded him of his lost friend. His face was lacking any discernible emotion, whereas Sasuke had exuded both confidence and rage from every aspect of is being.
Naruto turned to these two and nodded. "I'm sure you both have already made your introductions, but if you don't mind, I would like to hear your names for myself. I remember them better that way."
The cat eyed man stepped forward with a nod. "Yamato, currently replacing Kakashi."
"Sai," Was all that the other person supplied.
Naruto committed the names, faces, and exact details of what little personality he had seen in the two to memory, turning to face away from the city. "Well, if the mission is to gather information on Orochimaru's position in eight days and it takes six to make it to the bridge, I would say that there's chance for light travel today, make it to the bridge two days in advance. That way we can work out various scenarios."
Yamato nodded at Naruto's evaluation of the situation. "That is what I would suggest. During the first day, I believe that we should work on strengthening our teamwork. I know you and Sakura work well together, and I can only assume that you and Nenacu are well off as well. There's a hotsprings resort half a day away. If it's agreeable, we should make it there and stop for the day as my treat.
Sakura greeted this option with an enthusiastic squeal that obviously meant yes. Naruto and Nenacu shared knowing looks before nodding their approval. Sai decided to go with whatever the majority decided, so they left the gates at a walk, Naruto hanging back so that he could hear his father's explanations of soul society over the chatter of the rest of the group.
"Now, I've already told you all about hollows and wholes, it's time to teach you about the life of a shinigami. Seireitei is divided into 14 squads, each specializing in their various areas. From squad one down, here's the list of captains. You should commit them to memory, because crossing even one of them when we take you over would be a bad thing.
The sotaicho and captain of squad one is Yamamoto Genryuusa. Squad two is Soi Fon, three is unseated so Kira Izuru handles things, four is Unohana Retsu, five is currently unseated, so the vice captain Hinamori Momo has to run things for now, six is Byakuya Kuchiki, seven is Sajin Komamura, eight is Shunsui Koraku, nine would be yours truly, ten is Hitsugaya Toushiro, eleven is Kanpachi Zaraki," Naruto noticed a visible shudder at this name, but decided to ask about it later. "Twelve is Kurotsuchi Mayuri, thirteen is Ukitake Jushiro, and finally, fourteen is somebody you already know. Fushicho Nenacu."
Naruto wasn't too surprised by this revalation, and quickly ran the names and numbers through his head to make sure he had everything down. "So, why is it that two of the squads don't have a captain heading them?"
Minato sighed. "That's because three of the captains rebelled a few months ago. They haven't died, instead they've gone over to Hueco Mundo, the hollow world. We still don't know why they did this though."
The two spent most of that days traveling talking back and forth and soon Naruto understood most of the ins and outs of soul society. Not long after that, they reached the resort and checked into their rooms. Sakura was the only one to have a room to herself, Sai and Naruto were staying in the same room while Nenacu and Yamato took the last.
Naruto and Sai decided to test out the springs before it was time to eat. He couldn't quite place it, but Narut knew for a fact that Sai was hiding something from the rest of the group, he just couldn't quite place what it could be. "Hey Sai, you were the one put on this team by that Danzo guy right?"
Sai nodded, staring at the wall dividing the men's bath from the women's. "Yes, that is correct."
Naruto cocked an eyebrow in his direction. "You don't talk much, do you?"
"No, not really. When you have been trained to suppress your emotions, you tend to avoid things that may cause those emotions to resurface."
Naruto blew a low whistle and looked up. "About that, why would you even want to do that to yourself? Sure some emotions are hard to handle, but I don't think you can become truly strong unless you are able to feel them."
Sai tilted his head to the side in thought before standing up. "I'm getting out now. It's almost time to eat."
Naruto merely shrugged and Sai left, replaced by the form of Nenacu in a towel. "Yo kid, glad you're still here. See, I need your help with something."
The blond in question smirked knowingly, looking over at his teacher. "Let me guess, you need to see through that dividing wall."
Nenacu nodded his head with a grin and soon the two were giggling perversely while watching the opposite sex mull around in the water.
Yamato was looking at the table of food and the small seeds in his palm in deep thought before pushing one of the sees into Sai's portion. This way, should Sai leave on secret orders from Danzo, he would know exactly where to find him. The rest of the group came in shortly after and seated themselves, each digging into the food with gusto. Yamato smiled to himself both at his team's pleasure and at the fact that Sai had just eaten the seed.
The next few days of traveling went by quickly enough for Naruto. He was learning so many things about a place he'd not even seen that he was sure he was becoming disillusioned. Minato decided to give him a break from that to tell him stories of his and Kushina's lives. He told him about creating the rasengan and the intricacies of hiraishin that only he had known. The day before they arrived at the bridge, Minato, not having a body to do this with, instructed Nenacu to draw several seals on Naruto's body "These," He explained "are for you to draw chakra into. They will increase the effect on gravity on your body proportional to the amount of chakra drawn into them." He also explained how the seals would be there for the rest of his life, but would vanish into his skin in a few days.
Naruto immediately began training with those seals active and as heavy as he could make himself while still being able to keep up with the others. He even thought that he had found a different way to use them, but that would take more experimentation than he had time for.
The day of the meeting with Sasori's spy arrived quickly in this way and they set their plan into action. Yamato had disguised himself with a wood jutsu and changed his voice to match Sakura's memory. It was almost comical to hear if the situation hadn't been so serious. Sai, Sakura, and Naruto were to wait for a signal from Yamato to capture the informant if need be. Nenacu was to be backup if all else failed as he had no ninja experience.
All were in position when the informant came. He and Yamato talked for a time before he dropped his hood, revealing dark eyes, glasses, and white hair tied back in a high ponytail. Sky blue and emerald green eyes narrowed at the sight of the figure. 'Kabuto' was the thought that both had in unison.
Kabuto and Yamato talked for a while longer before Yamato, about ready to give his signal, drew a kunai. Kabuto saw this and jumped back in time to avoid the sudden attack of a man who resembled a snake. His skin was pale white, his hair long and black, but his eyes were yellow slits. Naruto clenched his fists tight but waited still for the signal to move.
The signal never came, but Kabuto turned on Yamato, smashing his disguise. The three watching took that as their cue to move and suddenly they were in front of Yamato, forming a wall between him and the other two. "Orochimaru.. It's time for you to get what's been coming to you snake bastard," spat Naruto, venom dripping from every syllable.
"Oho, it's the fox boy. I wonder which is stronger now, you or Sasuke." Came the reply of Orochimaru. He was conceited to think that Naruto wouldn't have improved in the slightest.
"This isn't about that teme yet. Right now I feel like taking you down." Naruto held his hand out to Sakura in a plea for her and the rest to fall back.
Sai and Sakura looked to Yamato for guidance and Yamato, having heard of Naruto's prowess from what Kakashi and Jiraiya had told him, nodded before jumping back, Sai and Sakura following close.
As soon as he was sure that his friends were out of the way, Naruto tapped into his chakra, allowing the thin, shimmering, golden cloak to cover his body. His eyes narrowed into feral slits and the birth scars on his cheeks widened out. Taking advantage of Orochimaru and Kabuto's temporary surprise, he blurred through a set of seals that Minato recognized. "First to go is you, traitor." Naruto pointed towards Kabuto with his middle and forefinger "Chi Dengeki no Jutsu!" The resulting red bolt struck Kabuto square in the chest and the result was frightening. Almost immediately, red steam began to billow from his skin as the bolt spread through his body, the fire aspect of the jutsu causing his blood to boil instantly. Kabuto screamed in pain, but nothing the medical genius could do would stop the effect. He was a shriveled husk of his former self shortly after Naruto charged Orochimaru with his katana.
The snake user was forced to draw his kusenagi blade on the boy in defense, thinking that he could cut cleanly through the his blade. That was his second mistake. Naruto instinctively drew sharp wind chakra into the black blade just before impact with the kusenagi. Neither blade was cut to the surprise of Orochimaru.
'This boy! Perhaps I chose the wrong body to become my next vessel. That can be remedied though.' Orochimaru twisted his blade to free it from the lock he was in, but Naruto matched his movements, pushing fire chakra into the blade to increase the lethality of his blade.
"Snake teme, you should have never taken my friend. By my vow to kill every bastard Akatsuki current or otherwise." He turned his blade, sharpening the wind chakra further to cut cleanly through Orochimaru's kusenagi. "And by my promise to Sakura to bring our friend back" He created a tight gold rasengan in his right hand, slamming it into Orochimaru's side, sending him sliding back several feet. Naruto cracked the knuckles of his right hand with a quick flex, slipping into his favorite fighting stance. (A/N think Lee's stance but close fisted, hand on his katana, sheathed for quick draw techniques.) "I'll kill you this time around. Prepare yourself for hell!"
Naruto drew fire chakra into the heavy knuckles on his gloves, turning the normally black metal a bright, cherry red before charging, connecting the first punch with the same place his rasengan had hit earlier, searing the wound shut. Orochimaru grimaced in pain, but began to dodge much better after the first few blows and did something strange. He crawled out of his mouth, as if shedding his skin like a snake. He emerged completely unharmed.
In Naruto's mindscape, the green haired woman was watching intently. She had been with Naruto all his life, yet had no knowledge of his life before he had awakened her. She turned to Kyuubi who was also watching, fur standing on end. Kyuu-san, why do you and Naruto hate this person so much?" She ran her fingers through Kyuubi's mane to comfort the fox demon spirit.
"This man corrupted and stole one of the kit's treasured people from him. He was also once a member of Akatsuki, the organization that threatens the lives of six others like Naruto. The kit has every reason for his anger. As for me, Orochimaru performed several experiments on my brood, killing many and twisting my mind against all humans. A man named Madera Uchiha took advantage of this and tricked me into attacking Konoha for his own gain. It wasn't until three years ago that I came to my senses."
The girl nodded in understanding, glad for the insight into the life of her master. She fervently hoped that, soon, he would be ready to hear her name so that she could help him as Kyuubi did.
The fight had moved into the forest beyond the bridge. Orochimaru had found himself running from a boy. 'A boy! Not even Sasuke could have come this far in such a short amount of time. If this keeps up, I'll have no choice but to take this boy's body as my own. I may not gain the sharingan, but I would have the unimaginable power of the demon fox!' He winced in pain as an odd kunai pierced his shoulder, lodging into the joint. Orochimaru was unable to react to this as a cry ripped through the quiet air. "Hiraishin Chi Dengeki no Jutsu!" (A/N Hiraishin actually means lightning rod in Japanese. I think you can understand how this would work.)
Orochimaru was struck by the same red bolt that had taken his assistant and began to feel the effects instantly. He stopped in the middle of a wide clearing to face Naruto, knowing that this was the only way he could save himself now.
Naruto approached carefully, wondering what the man before him had planned. It didn't take long to find out, however, when he was suddenly thrown into his mindscape. The strange part was that Orochimaru was still standing in front of him. "What the hell is this? Trying to save your skin by taking mine?"
Orochimaru chuckled maliciously as several snakes began to slither out from behind his back. "Perceptive boy, but it's too late. You can't resist me here. I'm going to claim your power for myself. After I do, there will be nothing to stop me from obtaining immortality!"
Naruto smirked as the snakes drew close. "You think a coward like you could handle Kyuubi? You don't realize how crowded it already is in here." As if on cue, both kyuubi and the green haired girl appeared beside the now grinning Naruto. The boy turned to his furry tenant. "Kyuubi, I've destroyed his body and now he wants mine. I figure that it's your turn for vengance. Have some fun with this snake's soul."
Kyuubi bared his teeth in his way of a smile as Naruto turned to walk away, not particularly wanting to see the demon's way of torture, the girl trailing behind him, looking over her shoulder just in case any sneak attacks were mounted against Naruto.
When the rest of the group arrived at the scene of Orochimaru's death, they found Naruto sitting with his legs crossed and his eyes closed as if in heavy meditation. Several feet in front of him was the shriveled remains of a giant white snake with a decidedly human face. They took this monstrosity to be the true form of Orochimaru.
Naruto opened his eyes to see his comrades with a grin on his face. "Hey guys, he's gone now." Came his blunt answer to the question on everybody's mind.
Yamato stepped forward, his hands held out in front of him in a gesture of mild frustration. "That's great Naruto, but now we'll never know where he's been hiding out at. We're essentially back to square one."
The blond shook his head, his grin turning into a confident smirk. "You give me too little credit Yamato-sensei. I happen to know that their base is just five miles west of here. Don't ask me how I got it out of him, I'd rather not say."
Five miles later, they found the base, exactly where Naruto had claimed it would be. However, there was yet another large rock blocking the entrance. Wanting to get this over with quickly, he nodded towards Sakura who understood instantly. The two rushed at the boulder, slamming their chakra infused fists into the surface. The boulder crumbled into gravel and Naruto shook his hand out. "Man, I don't think I'll ever get used to that.."
Sakura smiled at her friend, having felt the same way near the beginning of her training and the group rushed into Oochimaru's base to find Sasuke. Naruto noticed that Sai was falling back slowly however and, inconspicuously, fell back with him.
Once they were out of range of Yamato and Sakura, Naruto turned to Sai. "Alright man, I know you've got an alternate mission other than information retrieval. What has Danzo sent you to do really?"
Sai gave his fake smile to Naruto as they kept running, checking door after door along the way. "What makes you think that I have any other mission Naruto-san?"
Naruto growled under his breath, becoming frustrated with the amount of doors there were in the hall. "It's not hard to guess Sai. Danzo wants to take Konoha over. It's my guess that he sent you to Orochimaru for that purpose. Not only that, but after you had brokered a treaty with the snake, you were going to try to kill Sasuke off. You seem to be going off of information about me that's over three years old. I admit to being an idiot back then, but far from it now."
The corners of Sai's mouth drooped into a frown and he stopped, frustrated at being found out so easily. "I see.. Well, you've got it all correct, so I will have to call this mission a failure on my part." He leaned against the wall, tilting his head back to think about his next move.
"Tch, damn Danzo, I swear the next time I see him he'll be more scarred up than ever before. But anyway Sai, you should think about leaving root. Shoving your emotions back can't be good for you. The last guy I knew who did that went nuts an thought only about power and revenge. He just happens to be the very guy we're looking for too. Sakura told me how you said that you didn't want to be compared to him before we left, so here's your chance to be different." Naruto grinned at Sai before producing a small book, handing it to him. "By the way, you dropped this a little way back. It looks like it'd be something important to you."
Sai's features changed once more into a genuine smile. "I think I will try. Thank you." He took the book and placed it into his pack before the two set off again to look for Sasuke
In the shadows far behind the group, two older men grinned. "Well he's really got a powerful personality eh Minato? He always seems to be able to do that sort of thing without trying."
Minato nodded, looking around. "He does indeed. Don't you think we should be helping him though?"
"Nah, I've got no skills for this kind of thing and he'd look crazy if he started following directions from somebody he can't see." Nenacu was interrupted by a large far off explosion that signaled a cranky Sasuke. "Besides, I think they just found him. Feel like watching?"
Minato chuckled, walking through the halls towards the source of the explosion. "Watch my son teach a high and mighty Uchiha how to act like a proper human being? I wouldn't miss it."
Naruto was standing in the middle of a rubble filled crater, looking up into a familiar face. Sasuke hadn't changed much at all over the years aside from getting taller. He still had that stupid duck tail haircut and he was now wearing the sound ninja uniform complete with the purple rope bow. The blond chuckled, flashing his grin up at his friend. "Hey there teme, it's been a while. Looks like you've gotten stronger, eh?"
Sakura and Yamato ran into the crater to stand beside Naruto and Sai, Nenacu and Minato bringing up the rear, content to stand by the edge and watch.
"Naruto.. It doesn't look like you've gotten any better at all, falling into such an easy trap like that. Where's Orochimaru anyway? He was supposed to teach me a new jutsu today.." Sasuke looked down from his perch on the edge of the crater at the group, an obvious air of superiority in his eyes.
"That child molesting bastard? Dead." Came Naruto's easy reply, stepping into his stance for the attack he knew to come. "We've come to knock some sense into your thick skull. I'll say it again. I'm gonna drag you back even if I have to break every bone in your body to do it."
Sasuke's eyes narrowed and suddenly he was standing in front of Naruto, his blade unsheathed and moving to stab the blond in the back.
"Naruto! Look out!"
Well, cliffhanger here. This got a little long for me and I didn't quite know where to stop, so I though here was the best place. It'll keep you reading at least. I also apologize for moving things a little fast here. I'm trying to get into the next chapter where the real plot starts up. Bear with me until then alright?
You may have noticed that I don't use the plural for ninja or for many other Japanese words used in my fic. This is because, like deer, the plural for most Japanese words when used in English context is the word itself. Ninja is ninja, kunai is kunai, chakra is chakra, ect.
Also, I need an idea for what to name Naruto's bloodline. Keep in mind that the specifics of the bloodline are these. His children will have both massive chakra reserves and an equal affinity for three different elements. They don't have to be the same as Naruto's. They can also use their elements in conjunction with each other much like how the wood element was created.
I don't have much else to put down here today, I kinda said it all up there. So, if you would R&R I would appreciate it greatly. I love you all who give me your ideas, several of which are being worked into the story. Until next time my friends, have a great day.
