My first Naruto story! Please review. I don't know how long it will be, so bear with me.
Prologue
Foolish child...you have failed me once again. Must I always pick up after you? Prior to my forced servitude to you, I was omnipotent. Countries cowered before me and I crushed them all. I only belonged to one man, and he is now long deceased. But you...you have the audacity to continue proving yourself obsolete and to rely on me. Am I not your master then? Allow me the opportunity and I would have destroyed you by now. But you are my vessel. Without you, I would be destitute of life. And you, runt, only survive by my mercy and willingness to assist you. You have forfeited the chance to prove yourself worthy. Surrender your body to me...allow my true power to take course!
Naruto screamed. Ten figures cloaked in black robes surrounded him in a large pentacle engraved finely in white into the stone floor. One member flinched, ever so slightly, as Naruto's deep bloodcurdling howl rang throughout the darkened room. At the center of the pentacle, Naruto's body began glowing in a blood-red aura. It spread to the boundaries of the pentacle, casting the group in a lurid glow. Naruto shrieked again in utter agony as his skin began mutating. It began to bubble and sizzle in a dark, reddish mixture of blood, skin and chakra. His cries continued for some time, until his whole body was enveloped in the substance. As his eyes transformed into bright slits, his inhuman form steamed with extreme heat, and strange prongs started to form around Naruto's lower back. The prongs slowly formed into tails. Gradually, nine tails grew, and Naruto let out a monstrous roar.
"Konan, you may now subdue it." ordered a deep voice.
A member of the circle nodded, then quickly performed a dozen handsigns. A rattling noise issued from the ceiling. As Naruto lunged toward her, a luminescent white chain topped with a giant spike shot instantly from the ceiling, impaling Naruto on the spot. No blood dripped, not even a reaction of pain occurred from him. His body went limp. Naruto hung a meter above the ground, and his tails began diminishing. The chain immediately flared red as it siphoned his chakra, bit by bit.
Another member of the assembly smirked, and walked out of the circle. Slowly, the others followed suit. They left the dungeon as Naruto hung motionlessly, his normal form returning, scalded from his precipitous transformation. The tails were still there. Their glowing slowly reduced as the last member left the room and shut the door.
End of Prologue
Phew! That wasn't so hard. I think I might get used to this. Don't forget to review. Chapter One will be coming soon.
