This is probably the final chapter for Shinobi Heaven. And is my way of comming to terms with Jiraiyas death.
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This is my 53rd chapter.
If I get enough reviews I will carry on writting about what happens in heaven...
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Thanks to ninbunny alchemist for the support.
Please note that my usual YELL will not take place in this chapter as it is a sad chapter for me... it is painful for one of your favorite characters to die when you are the killer.
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Chapter 5 Finally
"I know what to do. We must accept our deaths."
"What! I already have… I know that I'm dead."
"Just stand still."
The real Haku and Zabuza are sliced in half by a fake Zabuza, the clones then vanish. The crowd applauded and cheered, the gate keeper then congratulated them and said that they had done it the quickest, he also told them that they could go and see Gota.
"Finally." The former hidden mist swordsman said as they walked through a new door.
Jiraiya was ten seconds away from completing his ultimate technique, Tsunade and the Peins were stuck in his 'Swamp of the underworld' and 'Mountain Frog Esophagus' Techniques, he was nearly ready. He had enough Chakra and finished the hand seals, now he just needed to aim and time it right.
Heavens waiting room was clean and white, with red chairs, the kind of chairs that have that grey plastic leg and arm combined thing. Haku and Zabuza walked further down through the waiting room, after about ten minutes a door opened and a strange shadow pulled the two friends inside. When their eyes finally adjusted to the light they saw Gota chained up to the far wall, electricity and flames passing through his body at timed intervals. This sight made the two very happy that they had standards: like not killing monks. Gota had not seen them enter, but the shadow figure changed form into that of a monk.
"So you two are this mans' greatest fear, well it is a pleasure to meet you, I am Hiro and I was the monk that he killed that prayed for his suffering. I am in charge of everything related to Gota. Now why have you come to see him?"
"We are apologizing to everyone that we have ever harmed or killed, he is my last. Can I please speak to him?
"I guess so. Here let me wake him up."
The monk hits a button and seven metal spikes pierce Gota, he lets out a painful scream and opens his eyes slightly, as soon as he sees Zabuza he smiles and laughs.
"I see that it is finally your time to suffer!" The dead crime boss said as he spat at his killer.
"No I'm here to ask for forgiveness, and to tell you than I' sorry for killing you."
"Ha, you are a weakling, asking for forgiveness, you are pathetic, you must be proud of what you have done!"
"The only thing I am proud of is killing you. You are stuck here for eternity, whilst I am free to go, I can go to Heaven!"
"WHAT! That is not possible! You killed hundreds, you should be right here next to me!"
"No, I had standards, morals and I died protecting Hakus' body. You died, you deserved it, you killed that monk and now you will suffer."
Jiraiya aimed his technique, he could only do this once, it was a forbidden technique, one that would kill the user and the target. Not even Orochimaru could survive, even if he worshipped Jashin as well.
"Finally, I have a lock on all of his bodies. Tsunade! I have always loved you, and always will! Tell naruto that I could not be more proud of him, and tell him that I could not have had a better pupil or godchild. Tell the women of Konoha that I will miss their bodies! I should have ended this weeks ago! Pein I have found all of your bodies, and now I will destroy them!"
"NO JIRAIYA not that technique!"
"I'm sorry Tsunade, but I must stop Pein."
Kakuzu was now one of the most depressed people in Heaven; he had been stuck in the public torture area for a few weeks now and the punishments were getting worse. There had been everything from acids to excrement, daggers to swords, creatures to deboning. At the end of each day he was healed then the torment would begin again.
Beams of light burst forth from the toad hermit, one for each of Peins bodies, the Peins screamed in agony. The bodies were then sucked into Jiraiyas body, and then the light was gone.
"Jiraiya how are you still alive?"
"I have not yet done my duties. Tsunade I love you, tell everyone that I will miss them. In your bedroom, in your hidden sake cupboard I have hidden my last Icha Icha story, and my final story, a story about our Naruto, not the fictional one. Please see to it that both are published, and give Naruto his one as my present to him on his eighteenth."
"No, you can't die again, not in front of me, or ever, you must live!"
"…I'm sorry, but...when did I ever listen to you…ha, well…now I can…see…Minato and Sensei again… I will miss yo-"
"NO, don't say it, you will live, you have to live!"
"I wish… I could… but this…technique… is not…done yet. I wanted to be… a...hero…well at least… I can…die the…way I wanted… doing something good…"
"NO YOU WILL NOT DIE!"
"Good bye, Princess Tsunade."
Jiraiya burst into green Chakra particles, they retained his form for a few moments and in that time his hands reached out and grabbed Tsunades' breasts and squeezed gently. The Chakra Jiraiya smiled and vanished, leaving the crying Tsunade behind.
The list of Heavens population grew; Jiraiya had finally finished his duties, died the way of a hero and saved the world.
Konoha had lost three of its greatest men, all who had died for the sake of Konoha and the world. The village now turned to Naruto, to take up the mantle that had been left for him and lead Konoha to greatness.
Jiraiya got a suitable death, so I am happy-ish( I would prefer it if he came back to life.)
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