Second chapter up, yeah
Thank you too: zm4u, my first ever reviewer, concerning your review I wanted to tell everyone that this will have most of the ffx characters but some will have different lives and some will have their usual life out of the game.
Kahoko, concerning your review again I want to say that alot of things still need to happen but Tidus and Yuna will get together so don't worry, I have plans.
Sadly they were the only too to review for which I am grateful but I need more reviews please.
Disclaimer: I do not own any material concerning Final Fantasy X because if I did I would rip seymour from exsistence!
Chapter 2:Close Call
I slowly opened my eyes to the creaking and cracking as our ferry pushed its way through the rough sea's. I looked around the room but couldn't see anything so I blinked a few times until my eyes adjusted to the dark room. I shifted and turned the jumped in shock when I brushed up against a warm body beside me, it was then the memories from the night before flooded back into my head.
Flashback
She pushed me off her then said "Let's go" she took my hand and led me to her cabin. I picked up my bag and hat then followed her there. She stopped infront of the cabin door and turned around, gave me a flirtatious smile, then opened the door and led the way in. I closed the door behind me and I could tell I was going to enjoy my trip to Luca. Dona let go of my hand as she proceeded farther into the room and round round to look at me. I saw her hand reach behind her and then up her back and then she untied her clothing and I watched it fall to the ground into a small crumpled pile of clothe. I scanned her body up and down and I could feel my under garments tighten. My eyes slowly went from her burgundy heels all the way up her long smooth legs, past her black thong and slim stomach. My gaze rested on her large perfectly shaped breasts which seemed to be begging me to reach out and grab but I fought the urge back... for the moment. Now I was staring into her eyes and she was staring back at me and she made a gesture with her finger for me to join her so I dropped my bag and hat and I began stripping off. First my trench-coat then my waistcoat. I reached for my shirt but my hands were swatted away and I looked up to find Dona staring me in the eye. She quickly grabbed me and pulled my lips onto hers and forced her tong into my mouth. 'I rather enjoyed not being the one in control' I thought while she ripped my shirt open and yanked at my belt so she could get access to what lay beneath, gaining it she pulled me towards her bed a little to quickly and she fell backwards dragging me with her. We fell onto the bed and my lips landed on top hers and we gazed into each others eyes and I could see the lust and passion within in her. It was like I was gazing into her soul and I certainly liked what I saw.
End of Flashback
I looked over at her once again, she truly was a beautiful creature. Even now with her hair lying messily over her face, it made her look even more desirable. I slowly lent over towards her and carefully pulled the hair from her face and layed it on her back, I leaned over more and gave her a gentle peck on the cheek. Now that I had adjusted to the darkness I decided I was going to go up to the top deck for a while. As I slide my legs from under the covers and off the bed, I could feel something else move, then I felt a hand on my lower back slowly slide up to my shoulder and lightly massage one of my scars. I felt the need to wince or grunt but I held it in. Her touch felt rather soothing.
I turned around to look at her "I'm sorry did I wake you?"
"No need to be sorry, I'd rather wake up to see you than someone or something else" she answered.
I smiled at her then I reached over and cupped her cheek, I saw her lean into my hand, then I saw that look she gave me last night. Another effect of 'My Gift' it makes my skin feel like fire. It doesn't feel extremely hot or burn people when they touched me, not that I let that happen often unless I have my eye on a certain female. I do however carry an aura about me that makes me stand out abit. I am hot to touch, not unbearably but more than usual and I have always had comments when people look into my eyes, they said it looked like a fire burning in my eyes which is hard to believe since thy are ocean blue, but the way she looked at me made me feel uncomfortable. It was a sort of your-so-strange-yet-I-can't-look-away look, mixed with confusion and doubt. For some reason it tends to attract women to me, when we start to get slightly intimate they would give me that look then be all over me, not that I'm complaining.
"Tidus... Tidus, hello you in there" she asked while waving her hand infront of my face.
"Sorry, my mind was away in the clouds" I replied.
"Well... you certainly sent me there last night" she paused for a moment "I don't think that I have ever experienced pleasure as great as that before.. I wouldn't be surprised if the whole boat had heard me"
"Yep, your quite the screamer" I laughed abit before looking back at her after.
"What?" I asked
"Never mind, anyway I have been meaning to ask you why you are going to Luca?"
"OK, I am going to Luca visit some people and pick up some items then, who knows" I answered while lying back down next to her.
"So your just travelling around with no clue of your next destination?" she said while leaning over me.
I looked her in the eye "Yeah pretty much" I shrugged.
"Do you not have a home, or anything like that?" she asked.
"Eh.. no not really, someone like me can't have a home" she tilted her head in wonder.
"Why not" she looked me up and down "I don't see anything wrong with you" as she said that I sat up and pushed her away abit. I held out my hand and flexed my fingers, slowly a small ball of fire grew just above my palm until it was a quarter of the size of a blitzball. Then I clenched my fist and made the ball dissipate until it was nothing. She looked at me in awe and disbelief.
'What the hell am I doing, this was such a stupid idea, why the hell would I show someone my power' I thought while she inched closer to me.
My eyes widened as she suddenly kissed me on the lips and whispered in my hear "I know who you are and I'm not afraid" then she pulled away and looked at me to see what my response was.
I was about to respond when we heard a fog horn then a large nock on the door and someone shout "We will be entering Luca dock in 5 minutes" I turned to Dona to but she was already getting dressed so I got up and walked up behind her to help her with the straps on her dress, once she had done that she pulled out a brush a started to fix her hair. She sat on the bed with her back to me while I pondered on what to say to her until she slowly stood up and turned around. I could see she had a big smile on her face while she was staring at me intently.
"Tidus, I want you to take me with you" she asked firmly but unexpectedly.
"W-what... I.. eh. b-but you.. can't.. I mean..." I stopped to think of what she just asked "B-but don't you have your own business in Luca.. an-an-an-and what about your pilgrimage?".
"I am only going to Luca to shop and thats because I was bored in Kilika and I can't resume my pilgrimage because... " she paused "b-because I lost my guardian" she said while what looked like holding back tears.
"Dona, are you sure? you know what I am and even though I am managing to keep my identity hidden that doesn't mean that coming with me won't be dangerous!" I said in all seriousness while returning her stare.
She rolled her eyes and then frowned "Dangerous? more dangerous fighting Sin, more dangerous than travelling all of Spira to acquire the Final Aeon?".
I gave in "OK, you can come with me" she brightened up abit "On one condition"
"Anything"
"You have to cover up more, better yet, wear a disguise" she looked at me offended "Its nothing like that, I like the way you dress trust me I do but I can't be walking about trying not to get noticed with 'Lady Dona' by myside can I?" I said.
She looked in a state of thought until she said "Very well, now get dressed we have to get off now" I nodded and gathered my stuff thinking 'why the hell am I taking her with me, I can't it's too dangerous, I'm going to have to ditch her but how'.
Luca dock near the stadium
Outside the boat I walked down the gangplank with Dona still wondering how I was going to get away, then it came to me.
"Dona, what do you say we go to a cafe and make a plan of what we are going to do?" I asked.
She looked at me "Sure, you know of a place?".
"Yeah I've got one in mind" I replied.
We started heading towards Luca square to the small cafe there with her wearin my jacket and hat thankfully she won't need them for long.
We walked most of the journey in silence apart from her asking me some questions about what we are going to do and I just told her that we will discuss everything when we get to the cafe. We reached the cafe and we went in. I picked a table and we sat down.
"Tidus just get me a glass of water, I am going to the restroom" I nodded in complince.
'Nows my chance, I have to get out of here before she gets back' I thought while grabbing a napkin and scribling down a note, I slipped on my jacket and my hat, grabbed my bag and carefully walked out the door trying not to get noticed. I got into the square and looked back to see if I had been discovered, I waited for a second then seeing the coast was clear I ran down the street and into a back alleyway and then I kept walking to my next destination.
Dona's P.O.V
Cafe restroom
'This is insane, why do I trust him.. hes just so... so.. I can't explain what it is. Somthing just attracts me to him physically and mentally. Last night was so amazing, his body there was something about him. It wasn't because his rippling muscles or his charming smile although those did help but it was something else, I think it was his touch something about it, it felt like... fire, I can't explain it' I thought as I walked out of the restroom and towards our table when I noticed something missing, no wait someone. Where is Tidus, he was here when I left. I searched around the room and then came back to the table when I noticed his stuff was gone as well. "He took his stuff, he didn't want to take me anywhere.. that.. that.. I'm going to kill him, damn it" I thought out-loud when I noticed a napkin on the table with some writing on it, I picked it up and read 'Cunno'. 'What does that mean, I think thats Al bhed. He didn't look Al bhed, maybe he just knows a few words, it doesn't matter. I am going to find him and make him pay for leaving me like this'.
I walked outside realising I still carried the napkin I threw it in the bin and then looked around to see where Tidus could have gone.
"If I was an extremely attractive man with an incredible power where would I hide?" I thought out loud.
Then I spotted it, a dark side-street 'That looks like the most logical option'.
Normal P.O.V
Dona quickly walked into the alleyway not noticing the shadows looming behind her. Two men in strange outfits came out of the darkness, surprising the summoner, "Who are you? what do you want?" se asked but they remained silent and just stared at her "Fine answer or don't just leave me alone". She went to turn around and resume searching for Tidus when she noticed them moving closer towards her.
"Ec dryd ran?" what sounded like one of them asking the other.
"Ed ec, dryd ec myto summoner Dona" answered the other.
"What is this?... you are both Al bhed aren't you? what.. do.. you.. want?" she said while waving her hands in front of there faces.
"Dyga ran" one of them said just before they both jumped at her holding a clothe over her mouth and nose, the last thing she felt was a bag being put over her head and being lifted away before she fell into complete darkness.
I gotta admit I wasn't to happy with this chapter, it's abit longer than the first and is overdue. Don't let it put you off though the next chapter will be alot more exciting and I'm going to try to have each chapter have atleast 3000 words although this falls under that. Please review and tell me your thoughts and doubts. Thanks in advance.
