Don't you dare review on how bad I am! I am very sensitive and in chapter 1

There was only OCS!!!! But in this chapter several Naruto characters will appear.

Again, review only positive things (PLEASE I AM VERY SENSITIVE). Any way, enjoy.

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Chapter 2, the Cursed "Gift"

While searching supply rooms Kai encounters a strange man.

Kai: You search the room on the right, I'll search the left

Zaikai: Ok

Zaikai and Kai enter the rooms but as they both enter the doors shut quietly.

Then a mysterious man (finally) appears before Kai who had long black hair with snakelike eyes staring at Kai with a lust for power.

Man: My name is Orochimaru! Kai, I have a "Gift" for you.

Kai: Wait, you're the leader of the Sound Village!!

Orochimaru: You'll have to fight to get the "Gift"

Kai: Why?

Orochimaru: So I can test your power!

Just then the man charged out at Kai with a kunai. Kai grabbed his kunai from his ninja tools bag and charged out as well. Once the two clashed with each kunai grinding on each other. Then Orochimaru leaped out from the clash and jumped back in with a spinning dive bomb attack and stabbed Kai in the left shoulder (which was bad because Kais a leftie). Then Kai kneed Orochimaru in the stomach while the kunai was bursting blood and stabbing the bone in Kai's shoulder.

Orochimaru: (while on ground) your strong, too strong perhaps I was very wise to use you as one of my vessels.

Kai: What are you talking about??!!

Orochimaru only showed a smirk and just then, he formed snakes from his arm and yelled "You'll come to me when you're ready!!" So then the snakes charged at Kai and bit him on the neck and formed a mark… The light curse mark!! Then the man and the snakes disappeared leaving Kai in the room to just fall from the snakes impact in the dust.

Kai: The door it's stuck!!! I'll try hitting it with my thunder bomb jutsu! HAAAAA!!!

With smoke covering the impact on the door Kai could see it would not break.

Kai: That guy must have sealed the door. I'll just have to wait…

(now this part is when Zaikai entered the room on the right…)

On Zaikai's hand, things didn't go bad like Kai's encounter. It was worse!! He encountered a sound ninja named Kimimaro Kagura (guy with bone kekkei genkai)

Zaikai: Hello? Is someone there?

Just then a shadow leaped out from a crate and jumped behind Zaikai.

Kimimaro: My master told me to destroy you… Pity, you'll whole village will be gone!

Zaikai: More like I pity you!

Kimimaro: Fool……

For some reason Kimimaro's bones on his arms and chest and said "This is my kekkei genkai!" and then leaped out at Zaikai charging in with the sharp bones in his hand.

But Zaikai pulled out his anbu like sword and did a upward slash to Kimimaro and ripped his chest open! But Zaikai was injured to! For some reason Zaikai's right side of his stomach.

Zaikai: UGH!!

Kimimaro: This injury I have is nothing more then a cut.

Just then Kimimaro's bones revived his skin.

Kimimaro: My kekkei genkai is divine!!! You can't beat me!!!

Zaikai: Didn't want to have to use this but…. This is a exception!!!

Zaikai: (Author's note, Hand signs signals) tori, tatsu, saru inu !!!

Now, FORBIDDEN JUTSU, THUNDER ORB JUTSU!!!!!!!

A orb with great power appeared in Zaikai's hand

Kimimaro: What is this?!!

Wind was blowing in the room, crates were breaking! Then Zaikai hit Kimimaro in the chest. But it was a substitution made from bones……Kimimaro has fled …

Zaikai: No survivors…. Oh well maybe Kai found some

Zaikai opened the door then went to check on Kai and noticed Kai's door had a seal on it.

Zaikai: this seal, it looks to last about a year. So that means I'll have to wait a YEAR!!!??

(DARN…..)

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So now, chapter 3 will take place one year later (Good thing Kais in a supply room)

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