A Demon Raised By His Own Kind

By Will Ookami

With Assistance from Eric Hyuuga

AN: All right, Time Skip Manai part 1 Coming right up, and you guys know thee drill, I don't own Naruto, just this story,

Chapter 5

6 Months Later

"So how's Naruto's training coming along?" Asked Eric as we waited outside a dragons den for the mother to leave.

"It's going great actualy, he's got the tree and water walking exercises down, and is working on walking up the waterfall. He's mastered Kawarmi, Henge, and Kage Bushin, Shushin, and a few Futon and Raiton Jutsu. He's learning a sword style from an old scroll I dug up from the age of the samarai, and is adding chakra to it to increase effectiveness."

"What's it called?"

"What's what called?"

"The sword style dumbass."

""Oh, Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryo, why?"

"No reason, just wondering."

"Ok then"

"....I was wondering if mabey sometime you'de be able to Naruto and train him for a week or so, shape up his forms and chakra efficiency, after all, you can see things I can't."

"True, I suppose I could at some point. Before or after he becomes a Hanyou?"

"After, that's when he'll need the most help the most, and speaking of hanyou, be ready to activate those seals I put on you, here comes the dragon, just activate the seals and touch it once it's restrained." I said well jumping out of my cover. "DEMON SEAL! KIA, CHAKRA SEALS KIA, K.I. SEALS KIA, GRAVATIE SEALS KIA"

"ONIPOU: DEMON FORM REALESE" I yelled well transforming into my demon form. A giant wolf with eight tails. Filling my claws with lightning chakra to paralyze my foe on contact I jumped and pinned it againts the mountain. "ERIC NOW" I yelled as Eric jumed from his chakra, activated the seals and grabbed the beast just as I let go. It let out a roar in defeat as it was absorbed into my friends chakra. He screamed and passed out from the pain of the youkai in his chakra network. I then placed a stasis seal on him to keep the youkai from destroying hime. With that done I picked him up and shunshined back to the sealing librairy of the house. From there, I began making a seal array, that when place, would aid the meshing of chakra, create a new chakra system, and re-create the body to be able to use the new chakra system. Unfortunatly it would have some demonic traits, wings, tails, eyes, possibly scales, I'm not to sure on that one. But one thing's for sure, he'd be out for at least two weeks. I wonder what the results will be, but whatever the case, I'll just go ahead and seal him in one of the hidden expariment rooms, ya, that'll work.

Two Weeks Later

"Come on, wake, wake, I let you sleep for two weeks when you only really needed one."

"Oh thanks a bunch." He said sarcasticly "Am I listed as a missing nin yet?" He joked.

"Nope, well kinda, MIA, pretty terrible to go missing on a patrol mission though."

"Ya well, at least I'll be able to make an entrance."

"Trust me, you don't need to worry about cinamatics, you'll draw more then enough attention unless I do some sealing for you."

"What do you mean?" He asked as I pulled out a mirror. I really wasn't lieing, he now has gold slitted eyes, two golden dragon wings, and golden scales covering parts of his body.

"I'm not really sure where the gold colouring came from, and I think the scales are a chakra thing, like my fangs, claws and fur, just push more chakra into the edges to make them condense inwards, or push chakra from the inside out to make them expand outwards." I explained as he tried it out. It worked as I expected. "Now just let me try something, cover your arms in scales.". He did so, and I unsealed my master piece katana. "It's made of the highest quality steal in Iwa, along with some of my fangs, fur, claws, and a small diamond. I forged it with pure wind chakra to mesh the meteraalis int an alloy and shape it into what you see now, it's the sharpest blade in the world, and it will never dull." I boasted, "Now try and block this with your scale covered arm." I said well begining to take a swing. As I thought, my blade stopped dead it's tracks. "Congradulations, you just stopped the Ookami Katana in it's tracks, something no armor, chakra enhanced or not, has ever done."

"Well then, this could be helpful, but I can't go out in puplic like this, I need demon seals, and KI seals, and god knows how many others, can you make them for me?"

"Well...."

"What do you want, more tomatoes?"

"No, a tomatoe plant, do you have any idea how hard it is to make pizza without those things?"

"I can immagine, but I need those seals first."

"Ok, ok, just give me a minute, and you swear you'll bring me the plant?"

"Ya, ya, I'll bring you the stupid plant."

"Hey, keep up that attitude and I'll make the seals wrong on purpose."

"What ever."

And so, I went to work on the many, many seals he needed.

"Alright, all done, but I suggest you take some time to get used to this new body before taking mssions again, also, I suspect the demonic chakra may have altered your Byuakugan, but I'm not sure in what way."

"BYUAKUGAN" He said as his Byuakugan activated. Only now, it had a slitted pupil.

"I'm not noicing anything inparticular, well, I can see colour now, but that's not really important."

"Really, try focusing on something."

"Holy shit."

"What?"

"I can read your mind, to an extent."

"Oh, well then, lets not use that on your good friend Will ok?"

"Oh we'll see" Eric said with an evil smirk.

"Well anyways, you're free to stay here for as long as you want, but I want my plant by the end of the week, got it?"

"Ya, ya, the plant. I got it."

"Good"


End of Year 1

"Happy Birthday Naruto!" I said youdly as I accidently blew the door of it's hinges. "Sorry about that, I'll get you another one right away"

"Mhm, what time is it?"

"9, why do you ask?"

"Don't you usualy get me up at 7?"

"Ya well, I figured seeing as it's your birthday and all, we could skip training, and mabey go into Konoha so you can see your Jiji-san." (Sarutobi)

"Really, we never go into Konoha."

"Ya well, once a year can't hurt that much can it? Besides, Sarutobi has been baging to see you, plus, I think the folks at Ichiraku probably miss you." I said with a smile.

"Alright, I'll be ready in a half hour!"


A Half Hour Later

"This is gunna be great Tou-san."

"Ya. Ya, but just remember, most of the village still hates you, so we need to keep a low profile." This of course, wouldn't be to hard, traveling ninja are a common sight in Konoha, so a Father taking his son to Konoha to relax for a day shouldn't be to conspicous, and lots of ninja had odd clothing styles. Me wearing the same set as always, and Naruto wearing the same style clothes, exept in black with red highlights, as opposed to my silver with black highlights. We both wore our swords at our waists, and wore samuria style sandals, suggesting we're adept at the use of a sword, even though Naruto showed more talent then me, he couldn't beat me do to my hightend reflexes and battle instincts, which he has yet to aquire.

"Ya, ya, I doubt they'll even regonize me." It was true, every thing about him had changed accept his eyes, wisker marks, and hair. He had a toned and chiseled body that suggested hours of daily training, he was no longer loud, but instead kept his voice even, at an inside volume, even if he was outside, which was nice for my hypersensative ears. He has critacle, all observing eye sight that he developed during two weeks trying to keep up with Eric. In other words, he was a whole new person.

"Well, whatever, no bragging, no picking fights, and no attacking people who insult or glare at you."

"Fine."


Alas the great Hokage was oce again dealing with his arch-nemisis, paper work, the great and powerful bane of all Kages. He felt a sudden flux of chakra in his office, and to his shock saw a burst of lightning, and a mini tornado, just begining to disaparate, leaving behind none other then Ookami Will, and a five year old he had to assume to be Naruto.

"Ah, Hatake Will what a nice suprise, and happy 5th Bithday Naruto-kun. What brings you two here today?

"Ah, it's Naruto's birthday as you already said and I figured he.... Wait a second, did you say Hatake?"

"Yes, yes I did, the results came in quite some time ago, you're Kakashi's 3rd cousin, his grand uncles grandson."

"Oh, well, guess I have to stay good to my word, can you change my Bingo Book entry to Hatake rather then Ookami than?"

"Of course, can I add you to the clan roster?"

"Ya, but as an off duty wandering nin, no longer able to take missions."

"And why's that?"

"Cause any other way and I'd be under Kakashi's control, and by extension yours."

"Wow, you've really thought this out. Well anyways, back to why you're here."

"Right, I just figured Naruto might like a break from training and I figured he might like to see you and grab a dozen or so bowls of ramen."

"Oh, well then, so I take it you're still hiding out in Training Ground 44?"

"Yep, you can come for dinner sometime if you can find the place."

"Sounds wonderful, but I don't often finish the paper work in time for supper."

"Ah yes, paper work, I have come uo with a solution for that as well. One that has been in Konoha for many years." At this Sarutobi looked ready to praise the ground I walked on.

"WHAT IS IT, YOU MUST TELL ME!" He pleaded.

"Well." I paused to increase the tension. "I offer to you, the Kage Bushin no Jutsu, a jutsu creating multiple clones of yourself, and once dispelled, all of there memories returned to the user."

The old Hokage's eyes widened at the simplicity of the solution. "Could it really be that simple. Something that has been available to all Hokages, and overlooked by all. I can't believe it's that simple." He said with awe in his voice. He then quickly flashed the handsign and five clones od himself came into existance. "Now get to work, I'm a free man." He turned to us. "Mind if I acompany you for brunch?"

"Sure thing Sarutobi-sama."

"Exalent, well in that case, it's on me." He said, not knowing what he was getting himself into.

"Thanks Sarutobi-sama/Jiji-san" Both Naruto and myself said with a smile.


After brunch, Sarutobi took Naruto out to evaluate Naruto's skill level in a spar, with me as a spectator. First of course, he asked me to give my evaluations.

"Well Sarutobi-san, I'd put his Fuin Jutsu at a 3/5 (Sealing adept), his Kenjutsu a 4/5 (High Level Swordsman), his chakra control a 3/5(High Chunin, Low Jounin), his chakra capacity 5/5 on human standerds (Kage Level), his Ninjutsu a 4/5, just lacking in variablility (Mid-High Jounin) Genjutsu 1/5 (Academy student/Fresh Genin) Taijutsu 4/10, all he really lacks to be a Jounin is experience.

"Well we'll just see, but I don't think the council would aprove of a 5 year old Jounin"

"True, but Kakashi was only like 13, and you where Kage at 15, Minato at 17. And you all got that far because if good senseis and war time experience, Naruto got a good sensei well very young, all he lacks is Genjutsu skill, and experience. I can't really give him either unfortunatly, but in the next 5 years, I bet I can make him a 5/5 on all other levels. After all, the last level is the hardest."

"Really, you brought him that far in a year? Well I'll just have to see."

"Hardly, he's a genius in every way accept academics, if it dosn't intrest him he can't retain it, I just had to show him the value of all the different skills, excluding genjutsu, and he learned adamantly. If not for my hightened senses and battle instincts he could beat my in a kenjutsu spar, and he's created a few interesting seals that could have many purposes. Oh, and Sarutobi, be warned, he's fast, really, really fast."

"Oh, well thanks for the warning."

And with that the battle began, very quickly becoming a battle of blurs that forced me to activate my Ookamigan to keep up with. It looked pretty even at the moment, they were keeping it a strictly weapons fight. Naruto with his Kenjutsu and Sarutobi with his Bojutsu. After about five minutes of intense combat, they split apart.

"How do you move so fast?" Questioned Sarutobi, slightly out of breath.

"I expel chakra in the shape of disc out of the tenketsu on my feet lifting me of the ground, lean in a direction, and then propel myself with chakra, it's a technique I've been working on for some time now, it takes alot of chakra and alot of control, but if I improve my control, I could probably get from here to Iwa in a day." Naruto explained, only slightly winded.

"Amazing, and you thought this up yourself?"

"Of course, the downside is it destoys my shoes." He said well pointing back to some peices of wood near where he started.

"I see, have you come up with a solution for that yet?"

"Yes actualy, After I've fully mastard the technique on my own, I plan to make a seal and apply it to my shoes, that will preform the technique for me."

"I see, shall we countinue this then?"

"Be my guest."

"Tajuu Kage Bushin no Jutsu" Sarutobi proclaimed as about 50 of him poped into existance.

"No thanks" Naruto said as he flashed his own handseals. "Tajuu Kaze no Yaiba" Naruto stated calmly as hundreds of wind blades formed in the air and launched themselves at the clones, destroying them in an instant.

Sarutobi went wide eyed. How could the boy so quickly and effectivly deal with his clones, he's have to pick it up a notch. "Fine then, if you want to play the elemental game" Sarutobi stated as he began more seals. "Katon: Karyu Endan" He yelled as he breeathed out a Dragon mad of pure fire, once formed it began shooting massive fire balls at Naruto, who mearly smiled.

He then proceded to dodge the bullets well making some of his own handseals. He then stayed still and took a calm look, even though everyone in Konoha must of felt the massive amount of chakra he put into the jutsu, he than lifted his hands, prepairing to release his jutsu on his opponent, who was currently thinking the boy was mad. That is until the boy released his jutsu, only a moment before three massive fire balls engulfed him.

"Futon: Diatoppa!" The boy yelled, as a very concentrated blast of wind shot out of his hands, straight into the fire balls. For a moment it appeared they were put out, but nearly a nano second after this conclusion was reached, a single, massive, white fire ball seemed to materialize out of thin air, rocketing right at Sarutobi. The old Hokage went wide eyed with shock for a moment, before quickly casting a shunshin to escape the soon to be death zone. He re-appeared next to me just in time to see the massive explosion as the great fire ball made contact with the ground. After the dust settled nearly two minutes later, a 50 foot deep, and 200 feet wide crater could be see, as well as a sweating and panting, but otherwise ok Naruto.

"Dear god, Naruto, how much chakra did you put into that?" Sarutobi asked, fully aware that the ratio to over power a stronger element was two to one, and Naruto did more then over power it, he took control of it.

"Umm... Alot" Naruto said well falling to a knee panting.

"Hmmm.... Mabey we should get you home for a quick power nap before dinner, wanna come with Sarutobi?"

"Sure, why not, what's for dinner?"

"Hmmm...... Probably, alot of Ramen and Steak, Three Roast Turkeys, a Ham or two, and some Rice, with a rediculously sized cake for dessert." Sarutobi's eyes went wide.

"Are you really going to have time to make all that?"

"Me? No. I have four Blood Clones at home that do all the cleaning and cooking, took me a while to figure out how to make, and I was a little pale for a day or so, but it was totaly worth it."

"Oh, well in that case, is anyone else coming?"

"Ya, Eric, Kakashi, and Itachi should be coming around 6, but you're free to just explore the house, or spend some time in one of the librairies until then." It was currently 3:30.

Dinner went well, there were no leftovers, and the guests were amazed by the size of the house, the amount of food, and of course the librairies, seeing as there is currently five (Sealing, Jutsu, Forging, and two Regualar), each containing roughly 10-50 thousand books. After seeing all this, Kakashi officialy declared this "The Hidden Hatake Manor" and requested one of the rooms be his. I accepted, and out of good spirit, also gave Sarutobi, Eric, and Itachi rooms, everyone needs to get away every now and again after all.

And of course, Naruto got many presents, Ninja gear and otherwise, after all, he's still a five year old. Itachi gave him a blank ANBU mask, and taught him how to make it take a face. "Just apply some chakra, and it will mold itself to your face and make a fitting face, I for example, am Raven." Naruto did this, and to no ones suprise, ended up with a fox mask. Itachi also got him a Bingo Book with low-mid rank nuke-nins for if I ever gave him some free time and he wanted some extra cash. Kakashi got him, to everyones suprise, no one thinking he would dare give such a thing to someone Naruto's age, a cope of Icha Icha Paradise, Volume 1, right after giving it to him, he looked up at me to see if I minded, I just smirked and said, "It's fine, but you have to answer all the boys questions." At that, Kakashi's eye widened for a second, but then he nodded acceptingly. Kakashi also gave the boy a stuffed, one eyed, silver haired, wolf/dog crossbreed, which I found quite ammusing. Although no one quite understood why. Eric got him the book, Modern Ninja Tactics and Battle Stratagies, as well as a Shogi Board, claiming that no one was to young to start. Sarutobi, not wanting to be out classed, gave him the scroll to learn the Mudman Jutsu, an earth style jutsu he had only taught Orochimaru. As well as giving him a picture of Minato and Kushina, and Minato's favourit jacket, the white, short sleeved trench coat with flames at the bottom. Naruto thanked everyone for there gifts and then, suddenly realized, I havn't given him anything, he looked at me confused.

"What, isn't training, free room and board, and a sword incapable of dulling or breaking enough." I joked, to which everyone accept Naruto laughed. "Oh, come on, I was just joking." I said well pulling out an ear piece with a cord long enougth to reach his pocket, attached to a folded piece of paper, with thousands of seals on it. "This is a new invention of mine, at the moment, only I have the corosponding reciever seal, but you can contact anyone who does with that, any time, anywere, I have extra reciever seals on me if anyone wants one." I explained as everyone in the room raised there hand, and I passed out seals to them. "Just apply it to the base of your skull and it will conect you to Naruto's Transmiter, then all Naruto has to do, is direct a thought toward one of us to open a comunicaton line, from there we can openly talk, mentaly though. All Naruto has to do to close a com line is think 'Conversation End' and wait five second." Everyone did as they were told, and tryed it out, it worked flawlessly.

"Wow, this could revaloutionize the comuncations system of Konoha, would you be willing to share the design?" Sarutobi asked politly.

"Hmm. Let me think. No, it took me three months to make the design, a month to actualy draw the seals, and and additional seven months to perfect it, it's mine, you can't have it." I said sounding a little childish.

"Understandable." He replied. Everyone was still amazed that I could do such a thing.

"Ok now, it's getting late, everyone that's not staying the night, thats you Naruto, and anyone else who wants to stay, I would appreciate it if you started making your way out."

"Ah, of course, I must be getting home now, thank you for a great night." Sarutobi said as he made his way out.

"Any time Sarutobi, have a good-night."

"Excuse me Will-san, but I was wondering if I could begin staying here on a pernament basis, latley I find myself less and less welcom at the Uchiha Compound" Itachi asked politly.

"Of course Itachi, but on one condition."

"Go on."

"You have to be less formal in this house, relax, have fun, trust me, between my pack and the defensive seals I have on this building, nothings getting in we don't want." Itachi smiled at this.

"Now that's something I can live with." He said more informaly.

"Perfect, just bring your things over whenever, and I'll introduce you to tha pack tomorow, as well as add your blood signatue to the seal on the cave entrance."

"Thanks"

"Any time" I then looked at Kakashi.

"As much as I'de love to stay, I have to go on patrol in the morning. Thanks for dinner and see ya later." He said as he Shunshined to his place.

I looked at Eric. "Is there gunna be breakfast?" He asked.

"Always is."

"Sure, I'm in, see you guys in the morning." He said as he went to his room

"Alright, go get some sleep Naruto, I'll give you tomorow off to. And Itach, no sleeping standing up, that creeps me out."

"Fine" They both said well they rolled there eyes.

"Good then, good night." I said as I departed for my room.


AN: Alright, there's Chapter 5, more time skip Mania coming up next time. Please read and review, and if you can, I would appreiciat if any one could tell me a few Futon jutsu, with translations and what they do, real or not. WOOT LONGEST CHAPTER YET! A FULL 10 PAGES!