Ok, just so you know, I'm one of the writers who tries to update everyday, but only if I have reviews! So please, for all that is good in my life, press the little button at the bottom of the screen! You can tell me anything, even if it is just what you ate for breakfast, just review, please!
Anyway, thank you to all who reviewed the last chapter, especially pigs103, who was my first ever reviewer on fan fiction! I promise to keep writing until the story is done, you have my word!
I do not own any of the characters in my story, only the plot itself!
Max's POV
I woke in a daze, everything was dark. The silence made me panic. There was no sign of my flock. The air behind me was warm, unlike the isolation tank at the school.
Wait! The school! Please tell me they didn't capture me again.
I did a 360, checking for any sign of escape. There, a light. I started moving towards it, but I heard a noise, like a sob of pain. I don't understand, it wasn't coming from the escape; it was coming from the dark abyss that was now fading in the distance. I tried to remember what happened before I woke in this place.
Something with Ari, what was though?
I thought back, Ari dragged me from the cave, I was shoved into the rock wall, Fang kicked Ari's spine, and after it was all black. Then it came to me, a warm light, seeming so comfortable, was usually what most people said they saw before they died!
Ari killed me, no I can't die! What about the flock, what about Fang?
I tried to turn around, hoping to get back into limbo between life and death, but my feet weren't obeying me, they just continued their journey into the light.
I always wondered why people found it so hard to stay away from the light, god, I owe a lot of dead people an apology!
The closer I got to the light, the harder it was to remember why I shouldn't welcome its kind embrace. I could tell I was dying, but I didn't care, there was nothing left back on earth that I should have cared about, was there? I felt like an angel.
Angel! The flock!
The truth hit me like a hurricane. Of course there was something on earth I needed to care about. I started to fight the pull of the light, looking for an unbreakable hold that could get me back to them. Then I heard the sob again, fainter, yet still there. I could barely hear it mumble three words, yet suddenly, the pull towards the light weakened. I clawed my way against death, trying to hear the voice of my guardian angel again, its words still repeating in my head.
I love you!
Don't hate me, this was just the way I had to end it, with a major cliffe! But don't worry, I will write soon, if you review! Just press the nice little green button below!
I WILL NOT WRITE UNTIL I HAVE MORE REVIEWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love Nettie
